5 lines min; 15 lines max
40 mins from check in
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no prewritten
no recycling
no crew
no hate
no bite
no d.r.
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you spit 1st
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5 lines min; 15 lines max
40 mins from check in
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no prewritten
no recycling
no crew
no hate
no bite
no d.r.
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you spit 1st
aight yo checkin in ill drop now im, gunna write it ,this minute
hea it goes:::
I'll cut ur throat wit a wet blade flowin~wit~ur~blood
ur words still wouldn't come out flowin~like~a~flood
Like lil kim at the vma's i'm exposin~ur~womanly~features
i'll tie him up and throw him in da disposal to decompose~dis~creature
My verse may sound like britney but i atleast i'll hop~on~da~mic
Ur pussy in da way u explain can't do audios cuz u can't cop~a~mic
J.Dubya is the antonym for how ur lame~punches~sound
And to think that ur only gay verse is hall of fame~bound
pm'n me askin when r u spittin is it gonna~be~today
Battle me so i get a litte respect i dont wanna~be~gay
Ur shit hits like a bee sting then floats~off~like~a~butterfly
fuk'n textce if we did this audio style what I wrote~would~make~u~cry
I'll stick my mic down my ur throat then u'll know what words feel~like
Dont fret a lot of great lyricist ghost write and wont ever
deel~wit~the~mic
Aight dogg, i'ma start my verse
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Like a blind person you can't see the light/This a fight in the night, I darken your sight//
Time for a lesson in Rapology, take a seat/Put ur verse on the street but it aint concrete//
You a slave so here the shovel, dig ur grave/Stuck ur head in the ocean but no brain wave//
Get used to that 0 it aint will never change/Wouldn't be able to hit me if ya fired from close range//
Your verse was like me receivin a shit stain/Just reading it caused me eye strain and pain//
You release so much waste, like pissin in stalls/Even as a b-ball coach you wouldn't have balls//
Call yourself a pimp because of your clothes/Tie girls to a rope, the only way u could pull hoes//
Your like a bubble that hasn't yet been burst/This battle has a new title: “The Best Meets the Worst”//
Worked at a gift shop, got fired, u couldn't rap/Ya didn't know this was comin, like a booby trap//
Look at these punches, it's like I'm Muhammad Ali/This will result in a KO, the referee's at three//
I left you in the dust when you were chasin my verse/You still couldn't back your shit up if you spit in reverse//
Back is against the ropes, my hand 'round ur throat/“I'm merked, ya even got my vote” was your death quote//
Sorry bout the structure y'all, it fucked it all up when I posted it.
It's supposed to go .../...// for each line. But anyways, UPPIN for votes.
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Get used to that 0 it aint will never change/Wouldn't be able to hit me if ya fired from close range//
should say...
Get used to that 0 it aint never gon' change/Wouldn't be able to hit me if ya fired from close range//
yo wats that yo u have like 3 diffrent lines in a differnt post (freepost... lol...). you couldove just edited it :::...:::...V0TeZ
Vote:J
Why:Your shit was so much out of order that I almost dident vote for you. Everything else topped Young pretty mcuh, but learn to get htat stuff organized dude.:)
Young-Elevate and get those lines longer, don't stretch them though, good drop but try an elevate.
Sorry to break it to ya newbie but ya can't edit your posts in Front Lines. UPPIN!
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Hey J: Here is the link to the battle I need you to hit up.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...435#post774435
J Dubya took this from start to finish.
Some of my favorite lines are:
Time for a lesson in Rapology, take a seat/Put ur verse on the street but it aint concrete//
You a slave so here the shovel, dig ur grave/Stuck ur head in the ocean but no brain wave//
You release so much waste, like pissin in stalls/Even as a b-ball coach you wouldn't have balls//
Call yourself a pimp because of your clothes/Tie girls to a rope, the only way u could pull hoes//
I left you in the dust when you were chasin my verse/You still couldn't back your shit up if you spit in reverse//
Thanks dogg, but please don't post if ya can't vote. UPPIN!
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GUNNER- OK WORDPLAY & FLOW, SOME DIDN'T MAKE SENSE
FROM WHAT I SEEN YOU PUT "~" JUST TO SHOW THE 2 BARS RHYMED AT THE END, THATS POOR CONSISTENCY
BARELY PERSONAL & VOCAB WAS MINOR
J.DUBYA- OK WORDPLAY, PUNCHES I SEEN
NO PERSONALS, FLOW WAS OK
NO VOCAB BUT OPENER WAS BETTER THAN GUNNER'S, SO WAS WORDPLAY
BRAIN WAVE LINE WAS THE BEST OUT OF THE VERSE
VOTE= J.Dubya
^^dat very well explained....
VOTE= J.Dubya
UPPIN (4)
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I agree wit all tha past ppl........J took this shit, Young needs to elevate and sharpen his skillz up..................
Vote:J
Quote:
Originally posted by ShEpNeY_zAnY
GUNNER- OK WORDPLAY & FLOW, SOME DIDN'T MAKE SENSE
FROM WHAT I SEEN YOU PUT "~" JUST TO SHOW THE 2 BARS RHYMED AT THE END, THATS POOR CONSISTENCY
BARELY PERSONAL & VOCAB WAS MINOR
J.DUBYA- OK WORDPLAY, PUNCHES I SEEN
NO PERSONALS, FLOW WAS OK
NO VOCAB BUT OPENER WAS BETTER THAN GUNNER'S, SO WAS WORDPLAY
BRAIN WAVE LINE WAS THE BEST OUT OF THE VERSE
VOTE= J.Dubya
^^dat very well explained....
VOTE= J.Dubya