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Cant Vote Lets Do Dis
envy ill make sure to hit up a vote here wen yall both drop...ur both ill so this should be tight...give an honest vote in my slips match against meks just below this thread...madly slept on..thx man...holla
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I'm Merking You With No Threat, You're A Weak Vet Running A Slow Mile
So Merciful With Bleak Text EnVy Feared Personals So You Reset Ya Whole Profile
Behold Ya Record's Ashy, He Has Minimum Genes Therefore He Folds His Baggies
So Called Pimp, Permed With Hemp. .But Isn't This The Shrimp Who Stole His Avy?
Promoteless Fig, Like Crack I'll Smoke This Twig, Followed Me & Quotes His Sig.
With A Small Rhyme His Kin Must Be Sheep, Supposedly His G.reatest O.f A.ll T.ime Is Big
I Don't Care When I Fight Faces On The Right Cases, I'm Takin Envy's Place In 5 Paces
Even Your Text Is Red Necked But I'll Put You To Choke Like Pares Of Tight Laces
I'll Throw Spits At This Dude Cus I'm All Heat Even The Scripts That I Use
But How Is EnVy Gonna Stick To Beatin Me, If He Can't Even Stick To His Crew!?
EnVy's On The Roster Of The Following Crews: Undestructable Kingz, Spoken Legendz, Warlords, Feebles Unknown Crew
why cant i vote? i call em down the middle every time...a straight shooter.
lmao
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.:Brooklyn Holla So We Can Kick Dis Fake Bitch Out:.
First Off Your Wack Couldnt Blow The Roof Off Even Bursting Ceilings
Strap Bombs To Your Heart Cuz Im Planning On Hurting Your Feelings
Your Punches Are All Thoughts N No Action Like Cyber~Sex
Take A Pic Of My Dick Cuz Even If U Bit I Still Bring Harder~Copy In Text
Brooklyn Raps Like Light~Weights Cuz His Dickriders Cant Be Held Down (Metaphor Lol)
If You Thought This Battle Wasnt Faire (Fair) I Label Brooklyn The Clown
I Rip Brooklyn Like It Was A Slammin Dunk Contest Cuz Im Slammin Brooklyn All~ Across~ The ~Net (internet)
Putting More Shots In This Fag Then A Emergency~Vet
.:.:GeT OuT Of My CiTy KiD:.:.
He Gunna Throw Beef In The Air So He Can Say He Raised The Stakes
His User Name Is Brooklyn But Where He Is From Isnt No Mistake (From: No Where)
<.:Fiyah Mastapiece:.> :)
Some Of That Verse Made No Sense Cuz Im Just On Warlords....Lol N The Quoting Thing Also But Its All Good Let The Voting Come
:.Uppin.:
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Originally posted by Feeble Minded
so far it is:
co-leader:
soldier and envy ny
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Originally posted by J.K.O
envy is in spoken legenz he even checked into there crew
WAS ONCE WITH Undestructable KingzQuote:
Origionally posted by Baxter D. Wall
these are the people who are active..
Envy NY
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IF YOU READ THAT THEN YOU'D GET THE PERSONAL PUNCH. . .'QUOTE THING' IS OBVIOUS IN READING IT ITSELF
NEED I SAY MORE?. . .QUIT VOTE SWAYING!!
Im Just Saying Putting All Those Crews I Have Been On Since Here...N U Have Been On More CREWS Then Me Lol No Vote Swaying Just Didnt Get That Punch But Whatever....
Uppin
UH HUH. . .I GUESS PRODUCTIONS & ALLIANCE ARE MORE CREWS THAN YOU BEEN ON HUH? I WAS NEVER EVEN ACTIVE
MY LIFE AINT BASED ON RB. . .1 LOSS TO SOME OF THESE TEXTEES WITH UP TO PAR RECORD'S PINCHES THEIR HEART
I JUST BATTLE & LEAVE IT SO I AIN'T GOT NOTHIN ELSE TO SAY CUS I HATE FREEPOSTING SO. .
~WuN~
-------->Je@!<--------
First Off Your Wack Couldnt Blow The Roof Off Even Bursting Ceilings?
If You Thought This Battle Wasnt Faire (Fair) I Label Brooklyn The Clown?
I Rip Brooklyn Like It Was A Slammin Dunk Contest Cuz Im Slammin Brooklyn All~ Across~ The ~Net (internet)?
Putting More Shots In This Fag Then A Emergency~Vet
He Gunna Throw Beef In The Air So He Can Say He Raised The Stakes???
His User Name Is Brooklyn But Where He Is From Isnt No Mistake (From: No Where)???
talk about plaed n senseless
I thought that nigga from Brooklyn won...lol...can't vote so...ummm...what the fuck am I doin' in here?????? at least a Brooklynite'z gonna win this battle either way so it can't be too bad...
I'm a big fan of both these cats so my vote is coming with alot of respect to both.
Brooklyn didn't bring his normal game to this battle.
To be honest, Envy wasn't on top of it either.
But Envy got the punches and the flow.
The wordplay, metas, all that were really about equal.
Envy hit harder and meaner.
That's it.
Yea ^^^ Agree.........niether were on the top they games, but heres what i saw......
Brook - The GOAT lines way too played.........but the sheep playin into it made it werth it in ya verse........so thats not too shabby.........Nice Personals, flow was good and sum sick mulites........The 5 Paces Jawn was hot........Nice jawn wit tha redneck........and choking like tight laces(lol).......Dope Verse, I've seen ya Better........................7/10
Envy - You had good flow, lost me at a point or two......but sick multies as well....the ones u had.....punches were nice.....personals werked......the light weights and d/r's was harsh(lol)............He Gunna Throw Beef In The Air So He Can Say He Raised The Stakes
His User Name Is Brooklyn But Where He Is From Isnt No Mistake (From: No Where)
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tight ass finishing line........nice punches, not too played......but in this battle i can't vote ne way and i can't give a victory to either of you......to close for me 2 call.........and just ya'll was almost even every aspect..................peace
Holla at my *slips* battle in Elite genst that homo Purple...........Payce
ok here's what I thought
Brooklyn-Ive seen a lot of your other battles, and you didn't come nearly as hard in this one. Your punches were not hard-hitting, you had a tight flow, but besides your finisher, I didn't see much. too many played punches.
Envy-you also didn't come too hard. I though your punches were a bit better, not as played, you started aff fairly well, then got better. Fell a bit towards the end but still.....
Punches-Envy
FLow-tie
Wordplay-Envy
Vocab-Brook
Structure-even
Creativity-Brook
Opener-Envy
Multi's-Brook
Finisher-Brook
Metas-Envy
So, based on all this breakdown, with harder punches and better wordplay,
Vote=Envy
no hate
i vote for brroklyn he had better punchlines........................................ .................................................. .....................................
Damn Steelfist Your Are A Serious Herb,Newbs Comin In (Brooklyns Friends) Stay Out....Lol Good Battle
Uppin Fo Votes
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I DONT KNOW THESE BRITTLE DORKS, THEY VOTE BECAUSE THEY WANT
THEY CANT POLL ANYWAY SO WHY LET IT BOTHER YOU?
BROOKLYN
I'm Merking You With No Threat, You're A Weak Vet Running A Slow Mile
So Merciful With Bleak Text EnVy Feared Personals So You Reset Ya Whole Profile
nice personal & punch
Behold Ya Record's Ashy, He Has Minimum Genes Therefore He Folds His Baggies
So Called Pimp, Permed With Hemp. .But Isn't This The Shrimp Who Stole His Avy?
great personal, the wordplay was there
Promoteless Fig, Like Crack I'll Smoke This Twig, Followed Me & Quotes His Sig.
With A Small Rhyme His Kin Must Be Sheep, Supposedly His G.reatest O.f A.ll T.ime Is Big
a little played but sheep line made it better, great personal & wordplay!
I Don't Care When I Fight Faces On The Right Cases, I'm Takin Envy's Place In 5 Paces
Even Your Text Is Red Necked But I'll Put You To Choke Like Pares Of Tight Laces
great punch with wordplay
I'll Throw Spits At This Dude Cus I'm All Heat Even The Scripts That I Use
But How Is EnVy Gonna Stick To Beatin Me, If He Can't Even Stick To His Crew!?
out of all the best personal
since it's 10 lines in all i give you a 7.5/10 because of the GOAT line that was played a little
EnVy Ny
First Off Your Wack Couldnt Blow The Roof Off Even Bursting Ceilings
Strap Bombs To Your Heart Cuz Im Planning On Hurting Your Feelings
the punch was there but it was verry weak, i've seen better from you
Your Punches Are All Thoughts N No Action Like Cyber~Sex
Take A Pic Of My Dick Cuz Even If U Bit I Still Bring Harder~Copy In Text
this was played, no one mentions dick lines but 1st line was o.k.
Brooklyn Raps Like Light~Weights Cuz His Dickriders Cant Be Held Down (Metaphor Lol)
If You Thought This Battle Wasnt Faire (Fair) I Label Brooklyn The Clown
nice personal & punch but 2nd line was half assed
I Rip Brooklyn Like It Was A Slammin Dunk Contest Cuz Im Slammin Brooklyn All~ Across~ The ~Net (internet)
Putting More Shots In This Fag Then A Emergency~Vet
NO Effort! 2nd lines are getting blah, 1st line was a punch but it was played
He Gunna Throw Beef In The Air So He Can Say He Raised The Stakes
His User Name Is Brooklyn But Where He Is From Isnt No Mistake(From: No Where)
1st line was exellent but 2nd line didn't make much sense at all
overall i had to give your verse a 6/10
you had too much weak punches an played lines
Overall: BROOKLYN
vote fair: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=79308
Pretty good battle overall....
Brooklyn:
U had some nice punches, not up to ya usual standards though...Nice personals on the whole crew thing.....U had a healthy set of multi's in the verse which made the flow seem a lil bit more raw.....Good verse
7/10
EnVy NY:
Good verse man....U knew u were battlin Brook so u came wit it....And that U did, punches were solid but what really stood out on ya verse was ya wordplay.....Ya wordplay worked in wit ya punches real well and I also like the fact U did a whole verse wit out mention Brook as a Newb Killer......Callin Him the Newb killer is gettin just as played as talkin bout my record or SARS lines...
9/10
Vote = EnVy Ny Good battle props to both.......Both of ya'll check out the Battle link in my sig.....Me & 13th dickhead for slips...
^Quote:
Originally posted by IceBerg420
EnVy NY:
Ya wordplay worked in wit ya punches
SHOW ME HIS WORDPLAY & I'LL SHOW YOU A RAINING DUCK
If You Thought This Battle Wasnt Faire (Fair) I Label Brooklyn The Clown...1
He Gunna Throw Beef In The Air So He Can Say He Raised The Stakes....2
where's my ducks Nig............LoL
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Learn To Read A Verse The Whole Thing Was Wordplay...N U Said I Try To Sway Votes? Lol Get Use To Vets Instead Of Your Newbs Kid....
Up Dis Hoe...
Nice battle, ....both came nice, ....envy had the flow,..in my eyes...brooklyn, had the punches.....was a real nice battle, but in my opinion, Brooklyn came harder,...i like u envy, u know that...but i think he had u in this one...
*props to u both....Vote=Brooklyn
^Quote:
Originally posted by EnVy Ny
The Whole Thing Was Wordplay...
I'VE HEARD EVERYTHING NOW, LET ME SHUT UP BEFORE HE STATES. . . . .(CENSORED)
Close Battle but i see TOOO many d/r so il break it down as best i can.....
I'm Merking You With No Threat, You're A Weak Vet Running A Slow Mile
So Merciful With Bleak Text EnVy Feared Personals So You Reset Ya Whole Profile
good personal nice flow... no punches or meta... but OK opener... 6/10
Behold Ya Record's Ashy, He Has Minimum Genes Therefore He Folds His Baggies
So Called Pimp, Permed With Hemp. .But Isn't This The Shrimp Who Stole His Avy?
LOL good personal again,, good flow again but this 1 hit slightly harder than the last... 8/10
Promoteless Fig, Like Crack I'll Smoke This Twig, Followed Me & Quotes His Sig.
With A Small Rhyme His Kin Must Be Sheep, Supposedly His G.reatest O.f A.ll T.ime Is Big
people say this is played? ive seen it ONCE b4 so f yall.... good shit 8/10
I Don't Care When I Fight Faces On The Right Cases, I'm Takin Envy's Place In 5 Paces
Even Your Text Is Red Necked But I'll Put You To Choke Like Pares Of Tight Laces
this was aight not too hard hittin.. seen u do better so.. meh 6/10
I'll Throw Spits At This Dude Cus I'm All Heat Even The Scripts That I Use
But How Is EnVy Gonna Stick To Beatin Me, If He Can't Even Stick To His Crew!?
haha nice personal AGAIN this was on point.. period... 9/10
OVERALL = 37/50
EnVy.... shud b good...
.:Brooklyn Holla So We Can Kick Dis Fake Bitch Out:.
First Off Your Wack Couldnt Blow The Roof Off Even Bursting Ceilings
Strap Bombs To Your Heart Cuz Im Planning On Hurting Your Feelings
1st line was wack.. 2ND LINE was goood.. so i wana give it a good rating but the 1st was too corny so it jus gets a 7 sorry.. 7/10
Your Punches Are All Thoughts N No Action Like Cyber~Sex
Take A Pic Of My Dick Cuz Even If U Bit I Still Bring Harder~Copy In Text
Cyber sex is actually quite played.. ive seen it better in a Sniper freestyle... and this cudda been done alot better 6/10
Brooklyn Raps Like Light~Weights Cuz His Dickriders Cant Be Held Down (Metaphor Lol)
If You Thought This Battle Wasnt Faire (Fair) I Label Brooklyn The Clown
haha great shit... nice.. nice....nice 9/10
I Rip Brooklyn Like It Was A Slammin Dunk Contest Cuz Im Slammin Brooklyn All~ Across~ The ~Net (internet)
Putting More Shots In This Fag Then A Emergency~Vet
this was forced.... but good attempt 7/10
.:.:GeT OuT Of My CiTy KiD:.:.
He Gunna Throw Beef In The Air So He Can Say He Raised The Stakes
His User Name Is Brooklyn But Where He Is From Isnt No Mistake (From: No Where)
1st line was killa.. 2nd fell off.. so like the 1st line it will only get a 7/10
OVERALL = 36
wow i wasnt expectin it 2 be that close... but b4 i even broke it down.. after i read it i was sure brook had won.... Envy u have some ill ideas.. but u also have some played shit.. geti that fixed and ur on ur way to becomin str8 up ILL... good battle tho
VOTE - BROOKLYN
Ricochet Vote Will GET EDITED He Is In My Crew...Learn How To Read A Sig Next Tyme N Get Off Brooks.... (Censored) HAHA
Uppin
Brooklyn...
I seen some of your other battles, like your style but on this verse you didn't quite pull it off with your usual qaulity...it wasn't bad but i seen you come way stronger and this battle was one where it was needed...
Envy...
You had some good lines and come strong enough to beat brooklyn...maybe he came half assed....iunno
...seriusly!!...lol
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Envy got this through better qaulity and yes brooklyn did have some good lines but i found some of his newbish...which shouldn't be at this level of battle
That's it..nothin more
Vote-Envy
soldier relly summed everything up
i think brooks wordplay was grand
punches stuck
personals were deep
envy was played
not up to par
nuff said
This is great...
Envy your deleting votes from your own crew because he voted against you, now thats sad . . but on the other hand brook you defintly took this alot of Envy's shit was played and the wordplay was definitly played . . just was feelin brooks verse more
I Already Edited This Poll
-Axe