iight this kid set it up wrong so im goin to copy his verse and mine and the rest ill leave up to the voters
he spit first so ill do it exactly
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iight this kid set it up wrong so im goin to copy his verse and mine and the rest ill leave up to the voters
he spit first so ill do it exactly
AMPS VERSE
"Yo "kid" lets go and get this all done and over with...
Bein Eminem because "in your food i'll sit and spit"...
Hope you show because at least i can take credit...
See your verse aint good nuff, shit, you cant edit...
Let the "Master" take out his "Piece" so u can look...
You only get a sneek peek, so my stuff isnt took..
Your chances last "saw the light" before your call out...
And your skill is a teapot, look its all short and stout...
Making something out of you, you scared and nervous...
I dont blame you, especiall when your name is apprentice..."
5 minutes hurry the fuck up
My verse
u dont really want it
Now when i spit sentances, APRENTICES command attentivness/
repremandin friends and shit, cuz i got a Hellbound, infurnal rhyme, internal i'm/
just a wolf in a herd of sheep, ya heard of me/
showin rippa tools 4 fuckin surgery, the young oddysey/
Merkin is the prophocey.. to odd mcees, to show rb the godd in me/
u cant look in aprentice eyes, hes UNFACEABLE/
fuck DNA ur corpse is intraceable, BITCH STOP WAVIN RED, AND FACE THE BULL/
MY flow and punches punch holes in hoes, Amp the type to get amped in jail when hes told 2 touch his toes/
Im destined to eat suroundin rappers, like forgetten to take casts off fractures/
Even if you answer back, it will leave questions, DAMN How to beat me, TO MCEES,, IS THE grand deception!!!!!/
WOWOW iight now the voterz wit mo than 300 posts dont be shy vote on this right here iight PEACEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
AMP TOOK IT BETTER FLOW,HE ACTUALY STAYED ON DISSIN APPRENTICE
ALL APPRENTICE WAS SAYIN WAS HOW GOOD HE WAS AND SHIT SO THAT THREW ME OFF
PLUS AMP'S VERSE WAS WAY EASY TO READ
FINAL=AMP
damn man honest vote and all but even if he had personals his whole shit was garbage
"Bein Eminem because "in your food i'll sit and spit"..."
this is the worst thing ive ever heard
and + if u cant understand my shit go get a fucken dictionary
that was easily apprentice no hate or anything but you dont really get anyone into your shit if your rappin about teapots but thats just me good battle both of you !!!!
aight app got this over amp by punchs and better wordplay and multis i felt his flow and i understood it better good shit and vote on these battle fo me holla
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?
s=&threadid=79123
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=78781
aight i was feelin app i thought he had a better flow and punchs and i was feelin his shit better good battle vote app and app return the fav on mine
IIGHT YALLL UPPINNN OIN THIS shit come on yall just pm or leave ur lick and ill return the favor come on yall hit this up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
yeah well whatever uppin
that was one of the worst spits i've had and i did it in five minutes so whatever lets get some more votes
IIGHT YALLL UPPINNN OIN THIS shit come on yall just pm or leave ur lick and ill return the favor come on yall hit this up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
IIGHT YALLL UPPINNN OIN THIS shit come on yall just pm or leave ur lick and ill return the favor come on yall hit this up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
uppin this shit right here
so vote and i can be 9-12 aight so lets go
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aprentice you dumb ass
if this was in normal FL we would have had this over i'm starting a new thread with our shit in it
okay?
w.e man word!!?>.................................................. .................................................. ........
^huh
damn i sick as fuck i cant even see straight it feels like my brains bout to bust out my skull fo real
oh man this sucks ass i would rather be at school than feel this shit
a mp got this
dogg put it in frontlines!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!! IIGHTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT
um whatever, thats where it was in ther first place, I think Someone :: couAMPgh :: knows best ;)
alright anyways, I'll ask someone to move this :D
aprentice ur shit is tight dawg........
an that AM u aight but ur vobac was nothin compared to apprentice an ur topics was a lil crazy
Cryptic:
Punches-Apprentice
Flow-Apprentice
Structure-Amp
Multi-Apprentice
Personals-Amp
Overal-Apprentice
This to me was a weak weak battle for a Elite Lines. I mean you guys dident even seem like you were trying. Amp your shit seemed weak as hell, I mean come on. Props to both MC's and keep elevating.
^ fuckin duh i just wrote it really fast
you want me to come good i can but 5 minutes c'mon i was just havin' fun
Apprentice I would poll but the thing is I can't. I have talked to mods about letting me vote in here but they have never responded and I have been trying to vote, it gets rather annoying. but could you drop a vote on this for me:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=80975
Where would I got to be able to vote here, which mods won't ignore me?
Either move this or can we get some votes on it
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Vote=Apprentice
Amp's verse was very elementary like.The spit in the
food line was garbage , should'nt have used it.Apprentice
did'nt have any mercy with Amp just look at the wordplay
and vocab , punches smashed Amp's face in .
Thats all I have to say.
*Walks out murmuring something*
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>ONE<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<
yeah this was one of Apprentices verses from a no-show battle
ooooohhh someone did their homework and then he threw my name in there ;), but is was still a good verse
^disregard any of that if you are about to vote
^^^^lol anyway
breakdown
punches both
flow both
multies neither
consistancy apren
metas both
structure amp
word play apren
funniness amp
overall apren
pretty good battle in my opinion lil close but i thought aprentice took it by a lil bit no hate jus a opinion
peep mine wit brainsurgeon please
Edit: aight coo amp you like the only one in rb that feel that way man but prope to both didnt wanna freepost
^ why do people think I'll think theres hate
fuck its open opinion I'm not gunna start hatin on you if you like the other persons verse
anyway more votes please :D
dunno im different, i was feeling app more
both spits lacked major punches to state
but I was feelin App's content and flow more
shit sounded like a freestyle
I wasnt even feeling Amp's lines to say
so vote = App
wow........still not a registered voter,.....and alldig nor the end havent even been around since..................wuteva.......
A weak battle for elite,
Apprentice one with an all round better verse
Vote-Apprentice
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Horrible battle, But all in all I think AK15 took it....Amp just lost all my attention when he was rappin about teapots & shit....Thats just herbish LoL
Vote = AK15
Wow.... this battle truly sucked
Amp... I've seen better... but that was just plain herbish... rappin bout teapots and forcin lines like sit in food and spit or whatever
ApprenticeKid15... You need to work on wordplay... like whoa... ever heard of metas? lol nah but overall vote goes to AK15 only because his wasn't so elementary
Vote-Aprenticccekid