15 lines
no crew
no hate
no d/r
u spit first
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15 lines
no crew
no hate
no d/r
u spit first
juicy J im going 14 ...15 lines is uneven.........A quick Key....
no personals on this kid ............
I know its tasty kid jump of the Jock,U got me shocked!!Juicy J-
that name was meant to confuse me but thru it..your fruity-Gay-
new-B slayed like an illerate trying to read for the first time-
only way your refreshing is with your juicy J's quench thrist line-
already 4 lines^ ^ dont answer is more than youll ever say-
your outplayed cause in this game ........only geniuses play-
herbs replay.scroll up and cant beleive a key slaughter-
your sinking and meant to drown like an armless man in deep water-
jucy-J's only sense of wordplay is his namesake, for christ sake-
but I pop This Corn to see him crumble cause from fights he does Flake-
at stake we have this well done piece of flesh left tender-
a right made u look!!slim!! now the other one will left slender-(get it)
last two lines if cut will surely make this puppet fall-
biggest mistake by him to b left hung up...was to ever answer my call-
the only time his nigga raps tight is when he's grippin his dick,
he claim he gets pussy but watches gay porn flicks//
beatin me off y i'm spittin is tha only way that u can beat me on tha mic,this nigga claim he aint gay but no what dike taste like//
this nigga has more prewrittin shit den song writers,and juss like dogs this niggaz a straight biter//
this nigga dissin me cause i'm a new-b but u are 2 and u prolly bit that verse and i still gonna riped u//
ths is yo first battle nigga and its gonna be yo last,cause like brandon frazier i'm a blast from tha past//
u can calll this battle mortal combat cause i'm goin to leave this nigga a fatality,then this nigga can sense i'm better cause thats juss reality//
this niggaz bout to be 1 and 0,and got ran up in more times then lil kims butt-hoe//
uppin 4 votes
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Originally posted by Juicy_J
uppin 4 votes
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first and foremost i gotta be truthfull,i didnt like both verses,D-ranged you had this battle hands down,way better punches,better flow,better structure,actually better everything,juicy j,no hate but ya verse was weak,i know practice makes perfect but you should elevate alot before you battle,unless u want losses to stack up.jus bein real,~1~
my vote--D-Ranged
shut up u should be tha last nigga talkin i would merk ass hands down and u cant rap so what makes u think u can vote bitch!!!!
NO D/R PLZ UPPIN 4 HONEST VOTES!!!!
I dont think I have enough posts to vote but Juicy J's flowed better.
Juicy J gets my vote if it counts
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bout tyme uppin 4 votes
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uppin 4 some votes
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jj had some forced barz...disses were basic...punches were basic....overall nothin hot bout ya verse...up ya skills a lil...
Daranged got some potential...i can see you as a newbie to be reckon with but add some heat to your disses ..punches hit well...you touch on wordplay a lil bit...
vote De!!
jj killed this nigga wit better vocab and punches my vote goes to jj
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yo votin on this nigga he even said he aint have no personals and ya'll still votin 4 him ya somefuckin d/r's
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he probally didnt have any personals cause who the fuck are u faggot..lol...U suck 4 real...learn to text man.....
shut up bitch
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yo juicy j won this battle d-ranged is low key whack. j hit you wit some heavy punches
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machine ur a hoe
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J had this he had nice flow and punches
tha otha cat had really no major disses like a bittin piece not sayin he bit or nuttin.
Vote:J
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Originally posted by J-Wizzle
J had this he had nice flow and punches
tha otha cat had really no major disses like a bittin piece not sayin he bit or nuttin.
Vote:J
juicy j, i liked your shit, just need to elevate....you were comin raw, butits like you didnt go all the way to just murda this dude.
D.... i like your shit to, but you know everyone needs elevatin, and im sure alot of people are gonna tell you to, but if thats you then do you. but practice makes perfect for everyone..
my vote dont count yet but i would give this to Juicy_J just cuz i was feelin his shit alot more and i saw where he was going...without personals, i dunno i dont think you can win a battle
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Originally posted by 9 Millimeter
jj killed this nigga wit better vocab and punches my vote goes to jj
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Juicy J gets my vote he just had a little bit better verse but both of your shits were hot good battle
i got to drop it like this:
1st of alll, if you haven't got 100 posts to ya name and you try to vote, it's called freeposting!
As 4 the battle, it was close, but if I have to pick a winner, it would be juicy j for having better punchlines. Also the flow was a little smoother. no hate, cos there really wasn't a lot in it
Vote=Juicy_J