Tha Pain Vs shockthaworld

AIght we agreed

6 lines

ALL other rulez Apply as ussual

No crew votes


Lets do this And goodluck

checkin in .....verse will be finished - probably in less than 10 minutes, probably not even that lol

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TAKIN 2LONG MAn....WUZZUP!!!!!


is 6lines am i did it in 4 to 5 minutes....lol


AM WAITIN >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

lol, ive been done finished in less than 3 minutes- i was working on a new open mic mybad here man !!.'.
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i reach "biblical proportions" with the "words-i-right", show this "herb-the-light"/, you "couldnt have risen above me" if you resurrected on the "third-like-christ"../
im sharp and as "precise" as a "surgeons-knife", you "sacrificed to god" like a "virgins-life",/ its "justifiable homicide" everyone thinks you "deserve-ta-die",/
your "eyes" cant "visualise" me, im an "illusion"..
propain can "take care of himself" when theres "real-feudin"../
sure your an "ill-human", "maybe a few "will-choose-him"..
" BelieveTHE GLOCK SAYS" "IT DOESNT MATTER" YOUR "STILL-LOSIN"../

AIght Check The Personalzzzzzzzzzzzz PEeps..lol SInce he aint got No PErsonalz...in his verse..lol


Diamond Mindz is a crew???Ya'll fruitcakse cant see me all ya'll do Is be gay letting dudes get on and off you like the free-way/ 1
Faggot talkin about a Shock I handed him some potato chips… First time he ever got a Free-lay/2(ouch!)
Cmon kid…I BrinG the pain My scriptures just be wild, Go copy and Paste ya Rhymes/3
Droppin in 10 min??? Throw ya Watch Away Cause battlin you is a Fuckin Waste-of-Time/4

~Finisher~
9-6 Rec 377 post a Vet???Its like a Fuckin Waste of lines,,Listen Bitch AM The Type to shoot Myself in The Dome… Just to give you a piece-of-my-mind/5..lol
Unleash the monster I m bringin more to tha table than forks and knifes...I keep my affairs close to Yo Location:Next Door Thats the same day I porked Ya Wife/6

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I don't take little battles seriously !

6 lines is really nothing to me

if you would like to go - 10 and up let me know

maybe we can do this again sometime?

man this was a CLOSE BATTLE it was pretty tight but nyway here's how it went i think:
flow:Propain
puches:Propain
multies:shock
vocab:shock
personals:Propain
vocab:shock

I think that even tho it looks like a tie that Propain won (barely) wit his personals but good battle from both

^^^^FOSHO man u sound KOOOL cuz U aint tha kinda ppl that acts up Stay Like that Man

Nice quick BAttle we shall do this again 10 Lines ok.......


UPPUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN NNNNNNNN VOTESSSSSSSSSSSS

yeah whenever this Battle ends, ifnot today
maybe tomorrow

I'll have time then at night ya kno ???

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Originally posted by Cuthroat
man this was a CLOSE BATTLE it was pretty tight but nyway here's how it went i think:
flow:Propain
puches:Propain
multies:shock
vocab:shock
personals:Propain
vocab:shock

I think that even tho it looks like a tie that Propain won (barely) wit his personals but good battle from both

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^^^FORGAT TO POLL VOTE......


AND SHock Ok dawg just holla and send me pm Ok when u ready

Now whats up wit RB what happened to the VOTERSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!?

Pretty decent battle....Propane murdered u shock on them personals man........I always try to tell people Personals hit harder than punches & wordplay, therefore personals win battles......especially if u add wordplay in w/ a personal..........

Vote = Propain

Hit my battle up against Brainsurgeon and Alpha Bet

Nice battle , punches were going everywhere. To be honest
Pain took this battle . You just got by dawg because Shock
had some punches hisself.
But Propain got my vote

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>ONE<<<<<<<<<<<<

breakdown

punches shock
flow both
metas both
multies shock
wordplay shock his shit made sense
consistancy both
worth readin both
overall shock

if u read the battle carefully shock took it wit wordplay his first line took it for me nice battle im out holla

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^^^^^^^^^^ I GUESS SOME DONT EVEN READ THE VERSE THEY JUST VOTE...lol


ANYWAYZ UPPUN WIT THIS END THIS PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ

SHOCK-
i reach "biblical proportions" with the "words-i-right", show this "herb-the-light"/, you "couldnt have risen above me" if you resurrected on the "third-like-christ"../
im sharp and as "precise" as a "surgeons-knife", you "sacrificed to god" like a "virgins-life",/ its "justifiable homicide" everyone thinks you "deserve-ta-die",/
^^FIRST BAR WAS OK, SECOND TOO, GOO USE OF MULTI'S, BUT DIDN'T HIT TOO HARD.

your "eyes" cant "visualise" me, im an "illusion"..
propain can "take care of himself" when theres "real-feudin"../

FIRST LINE WAS WACK, SECOND DECENT.


sure your an "ill-human", "maybe a few "will-choose-him"..
" BelieveTHE GLOCK SAYS" "IT DOESNT MATTER" YOUR "STILL-LOSIN"../

blah. Wasn't feelin' that.

Propain-
Diamond Mindz is a crew???Ya'll fruitcakse cant see me all ya'll do Is be gay letting dudes get on and off you like the free-way/ 1
Faggot talkin about a Shock I handed him some potato chips… First time he ever got a Free-lay/2

^^first line was pretty tight, second line won it for me best line of the battle in my opinion.

Cmon kid…I BrinG the pain My scriptures just be wild, Go copy and Paste ya Rhymes/3
Droppin in 10 min??? Throw ya Watch Away Cause battlin you is a Fuckin Waste-of-Time/4

^^didn't like either of these, not feelin' them at all.

9-6 Rec 377 post a Vet???Its like a Fuckin Waste of lines,,Listen Bitch AM The Type to shoot Myself in The Dome… Just to give you a piece-of-my-mind/5..lol
Unleash the monster I m bringin more to tha table than forks and knifes...I keep my affairs close to Yo Location:Next Door Thats the same day I porked Ya Wife/

^^first line was decent, second too.

Vote=pro

No people accually read the skill in the verses
and not just the streched punchlines

i could have easily wrote some longer shit
but i had it nice and simple

Plus most dummys vote in frontlines
if this battle was in leet - i would have most of the votes


Uppin..

Yop shock da world are you still in my crew? if you are then go check in if your not id vote shockda world, better everything overall, flow was iight hits were ok and wordplay was good.....

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Originally posted by XL4REAL
Yop shock da world are you still in my crew? if you are then go check in if your not id vote shockda world, better everything overall, flow was iight hits were ok and wordplay was good.....

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^^^ AINT THAT CALLED DYCKRYDIN????

1st He asks if he is still in the crew and dan votes for Shock Amazing....lol

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Originally posted by shockthaworld
No people accually read the skill in the verses
and not just the streched punchlines

i could have easily wrote some longer shit
but i had it nice and simple

Plus most dummys vote in frontlines
if this battle was in leet - i would have most of the votes


Uppin..

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^^^^SHOCK MOST OF THEM VOTED HONEST DAWG NO NEED TO SWAY VOTES LIKE U DOING.....SAying That if this wus in Elite u would get all the Votes.....thats Wrong Son


Anywayz Uppun VOterssssssssss and Honest Ones

Naw, i'm nolonger in your crew

i accually changed my mind

and decided to join diamond mindz

no thats not dick riding !

crew cant vote on your battles, so he asked

Aight wuteva u say PArtna............................


What HAppen to the Votin PPL??????????????????????????????????????????

SUprise Suprise this battle taking too Long to End!!!!

VOTE - PROPAIN

REASON - He had some nice punches...shock kinda used alotta self-hype in his verse...which is basically why i'm givin it to propain...werdplay wuz bout tha same...shock took vocab nd flow tho...tha big difference in this battle wuz punches tho...that's wut wins battles basically...some of tha time...

My vote goes to pro

He punches hit harder, i liked propain's flow better, but that' just me,
shock had better wordplay, and vocab
but propain took this barely
nice battle tho
peace

Yo, Im'a Say it like this... Clearly yall didnt give Shock his Just Deserts..... Dude put it down like a Pro.. and just cuz you all didnt give him his props i concidered voting on him BUT>>>> i have to kee it honest so here is how i broke it down

Meti's Pro
Multi's Pro
Flow.... SHOCK <-- come on shocks flowed much smoother
Personals... Pro
Punches..... SHOCK
Word Play Pro
Struchure Shock

Overall i Was thinkin Tie..... But in Every Game it is A Winner and A Loser.... so I read And REread these to some music and it is my opinion if i heard em live in a "freestyle Battle" pro would have gotten the crowd Vote and Mine

So

Vote Pro......