RULES:
no d/r
no hate
u spit first
unlimited lines
no crew votes
no biting
no feedin
no bitching
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SPIT NOW
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RULES:
no d/r
no hate
u spit first
unlimited lines
no crew votes
no biting
no feedin
no bitching
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SPIT NOW
yo -look,
I answered you’re call like the grim reaper, now I’m here time to die mr. dickeater/
‘barbreaker’ you couldn’t break a mars bars, antique lyrics spittin ‘bout killin like sars/
swap an ‘E’ for an ‘I’ now you in ‘THE KINGS OF DOPINESS’, barbreaker I re-name you emcee lyricaless/
you spit like a man wiv no saliva, yo times runnin out like mr Sutherland -Keifer/
ya got no hope, give up while you on tha ropes, say ya prayers if ya catholic phone the pope/
beware im’a drive ya to suicide, shoot ya in this lyrical drive-by, my critique for you – he’s whack but at least he tried.
This Guy Is A Fagget…So Stick To Sucking Dik/
When U Drooling Cum Is The Only Time U’ll Successfully Spit/
I Can Merk You Easy And I Can Even Beat Your Alter~Ego/
I Feel Sorry For This Retart Wid No Punches So I’ma Give U A Fuckin Free~Go/
You Cant Even Afford A Win..Like Some Fuckin Cheepo/
You Couldn’t Even Elevate If Your Computer Was On Stairs/
Don’t Bother Spittin Back…Cause Really No One Cares//
Wid Ur Pussy Rap...U wont Have Punches Cause The’ll Be More Like Pulls Of Hair/
After My Punches Kill This Kat I am Gonna Give Him A Momorial/
I Red Ur Rhymes Before..I Think U Need A Trip To The Turorial/
Ur Got No Wins And By The Looks Of Ur Verse I Think It Aint Gon Change/
Your Punches Didn’t Hit Me Cause They Were Weak And Loosing Range/
I Think Its Strange..That Someone Could Actually Get So Wack/
Its Kind of A Shame..Cause It Is A Waste Of My Time of Actually Post Back/
Ur Just Like Your Sig Absolutely Nothing/
Ur A Fuckin Chicken And This Merking Is Gonna Be Ur Stuffing/
This Bitch Had Six Lines Of Rubbish And I’ma Throw It In the Bin/
Wid Rhymes Like That How The Fuck You Gon Get A Win/
FINISHER
I’ve Obviously Merked You And You Know You Could’ve Neva Won/
This Guys Is Looking Stunned..I Bet He Thinks He Should’ve Run/
FIRST WIN TO ME…R.I.P ALTER-EGO
i am upping for some votes ppl dont sleep on it
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breakdown
flow even
punchs barbreaker i thought he came harder than alter ego good shit thow
multis bar didnt see very much from alter
vote bar
^^^yo man u didn't poll vote...so can u poll vote
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fuck that was funny.when i versed him i just spat some wack shit cause' he's a newb but u burnt him to a crisp..............mehQuote:
Originally posted by BarBreakeR
This Guy Is A Fagget…So Stick To Sucking Dik/
When U Drooling Cum Is The Only Time U’ll Successfully Spit/
I Can Merk You Easy And I Can Even Beat Your Alter~Ego/
I Feel Sorry For This Retart Wid No Punches So I’ma Give U A Fuckin Free~Go/
You Cant Even Afford A Win..Like Some Fuckin Cheepo/
You Couldn’t Even Elevate If Your Computer Was On Stairs/
Don’t Bother Spittin Back…Cause Really No One Cares//
Wid Ur Pussy Rap...U wont Have Punches Cause The’ll Be More Like Pulls Of Hair/
After My Punches Kill This Kat I am Gonna Give Him A Momorial/
I Red Ur Rhymes Before..I Think U Need A Trip To The Turorial/
Ur Got No Wins And By The Looks Of Ur Verse I Think It Aint Gon Change/
Your Punches Didn’t Hit Me Cause They Were Weak And Loosing Range/
I Think Its Strange..That Someone Could Actually Get So Wack/
Its Kind of A Shame..Cause It Is A Waste Of My Time of Actually Post Back/
Ur Just Like Your Sig Absolutely Nothing/
Ur A Fuckin Chicken And This Merking Is Gonna Be Ur Stuffing/
This Bitch Had Six Lines Of Rubbish And I’ma Throw It In the Bin/
Wid Rhymes Like That How The Fuck You Gon Get A Win/
FINISHER
I’ve Obviously Merked You And You Know You Could’ve Neva Won/
This Guys Is Looking Stunned..I Bet He Thinks He Should’ve Run/
FIRST WIN TO ME…R.I.P ALTER-EGO
Vote:Bar
p.s hit htis up against the same opponent
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...178#post740178
ahhh yall 4getting to poll vote..so make sure U POLL VOTE ON THIS BATTLE DONT JUS FREEPOST LOL
ahhh yall 4getting to poll vote..so make sure U POLL VOTE ON THIS BATTLE DONT JUS FREEPOST LOL
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aight. Alter-ego, your punches were soft. Your first
line was your best line, and thos type of lines are
played...aight verse tho, not tottaly wack.
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Bar Breaker, you started out strong with your 1rst 5 or six lines.
when saying 1 bar= 1line tho...lol...you posted a way Longer
verse. But it doesnt matter your vocab, punches..and especaially
flow was better..
vote=BarBreaker..
sorry i cant POLL vote yet, but i aint a NEWB.
Fuckin Sleepers…(Poll)
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...405#post742405
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...threadid=76279
bar took this one with harder punches. 78423 52375 470895634127564316y347 643176y904376-347-86348290-678-342769843769-83742693847 vote bar
ahhh yall 4getting to poll vote..so make sure U POLL VOTE ON THIS BATTLE DONT JUS FREEPOST LOL
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ahhh yall 4getting to poll vote..so make sure U POLL VOTE ON THIS BATTLE DONT JUS FREEPOST LOL
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yo alter clean out ur pm box i needa ask you somin....
Pz
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First cat only had 2 bars, extend your length alter....
And bar that was prti good for newb reminds me of Sheoney_Zany when he first started.....
Punches flow and structure cam,e harder from barbraka and thats what he took it with...
Keep spititn both cats and keep elevating...
Pce
^^coo thanks for da vote 2 dawg......Pz
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^^coo thanks for da vote 2 dawg......Pz
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this is gettin really badly slept on
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BarBreakeR took this . Alter Ego did'nt put any kind
of effort in his verse.Good Punchlines, and length
was aiight 2.
GOOD SHIT
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>ONE<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<
ok
Alter ego-wack verse, punches did not hit hard at all, flow was decent but still a bit choppy, structure was kinda messed up, wordplay nonexistent.
Bar-decent verse, punches kinda hit, flow also a bit choppy but still aight, wordplay was there, thoguh not often. Not a very good verse, but good enough for the win.
Vote=Bar
And that, my friends, is word^^