10-30 lines
spit within an hour
no dr h c votes
no feeding or biting
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10-30 lines
spit within an hour
no dr h c votes
no feeding or biting
CHECKIN IN>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
FINALLY SOMEONE WIT SKILLZ I CAN BATTLE...lol
Aight yo LETS DO THIS DAWg.............................................. .........
yo dog is been an hour and you havent spit.............................................. ........................................
aight lets do this
18-22 more loss than wins??did it really take ya 22 times to figure out ya wack keep typin ya bullsh!t upand i will take out this trash...
My registration date will be each time I spit on your flames an' beat ya a$s....
u'll meet with the deadly Vision...diggin ya grave deep with the shovel....
Like heat from a kettle...scream from the steem tryna get in Anb crew but he couldnt compete on that level...lol
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...&pagenumber=12 (Anb Declined his try out..lol)
This guys gon be runnin just like when lunch~calls,what good can come from a dude..who fuks~walls.. (WALLBANGER)
Dabanga??you'll hit the street, soon as you hear that squeak from the metal...
f*ck peace, our beef isn't settled...you'll be in pieces and pebbles...
You're whack! A bunch of crap sorted in rhymes...
I feel like a red margin...how I slaughter your lines..
22 losses ur rhymes will neva be felt...
ur punches are shit..so they will reflect and u'll diss~ yaself..lol
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ght=WALLBANGER (he made a thread at bitchslap to battle someone but he became a pussy and declined..lol)
~Switch~
can this FuCkViLlE bastered break his grave stone and slam his casket-/
He’s trying hard having DMX ivy to “make the cut” but even his lyrics cant “hack it”/ ..lol
BItches Relate Easy (BRE)Like a handless boxer kid you can’t possibly win because you have no punches/
1059 Posts damn!!!you battling is a contradiction like fat Bitches doin crunches while munchin her lunches/
Should I be strapping a teck? its just the net, fuck this faggot forget it/
Flex a Forty-Five Banga Bitch? Or run away with a "4-fit"/
Check ya pours kid, I'll leave ya 'dead...beat' like insomniac athletes/
Your rhyme's discrete, your verse is Gonna Be HALF ASSED, Like Sisqo I guess yo gay Life is iNcomplete/..lol
C'mon Banga With conceit you post, hosting a skill your unable to match.. you've failed to pass/
And Trash your wordplay, how you gonna spit back if I shatter ya back and slip ya disk cache???????/
I'm so CHARMING, my lyrics make your HEART-SWITCH, and make you admire my speech/
I throw PUNCHES like TYSON delivering such hard-hits you'll have to WIRE-ya-TEETH/
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ght=WALLBANGER ( he got Koed by a weak azz dud wit rec 4-11...lol)
Waitin FOR THA BANGA TO SPIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
DAMNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN NNNNNNNN IS BECOMING 2hours NOW ALMOST WHERE U AT!!!!
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man that shit was when i was a newbie.....fuck you dumb..i didnt know shit......w/e heres my verse
this bitch writes his crew name on his walls cause he aint got no life/
picked jackin off himself rather than havin a hot ass wife/
bitch i'll bury you like a dead animal, cause thats all you are/
ya dad fucks you in the ass lookin like a dinosaur/(avater)
you bout to be sunk worse than the titanic so panic cause its all over/
say he runnin the streets but i saw him at his pre-school, playin red-rover/
i decode ya shit like bill gates and you a minor clitch in the system/
if he posted all the dicks he sucked he wouldnt have room on 10 threads to fit 'em/
he turned down the stanly cup to play with stanleys cup instead/
only time he got close to pussy is when he thought of it in his head/
got a letter from penthouse and rejected it with ease/
10 free editions...but couldnt pay the fees/(lol free)
this cat just like flintstones vitamens, chewable and safe for kids/
only time he got close to spitten hot shit was in his underwear skids/
hottest pussy he ever touched was a cat and only girl he thought was hot turned out to be a man/
i'll roast ya insides with my firey hot spit that i can,melt ya eyes with my spit and crush the rest with my hand/
kid took an hour an a half to spit whack flow, ive seen better in 5 mins down at the cab co./(pakistans=cab co. no racism)
ready to bow to my feet again, in defeat agian well get ready for loss number too/
i'll hit you more times than 50's been shot and kill you faster than a fat man runnin from police get caught/
your rhymes are funny and make me laugh alot,rhymin bout shit older than under-the-desk-snot/(peole put snot under desks and its there for years...)
like razors i'll cut you fast and precsice im not nice/
slash and gash, chop and bash,i come out without a slice/
this kids a deadly vision cause his ugly looks kill/
got locked up in an asylum and you touch yourself for a thrill/
man you couldnt pay ya way into a dollar movie you so poor/
claim to be rich like em but gets laughed at by whores/
..::..::finisher::..::..
i spit hotter rhymes than from the middle of hell/
chaos, confusion and ya guts i spill/
yo man you got a lot of time on ya hads lookin up those artifacts...when i was a newb..thats sad....got no life...
i said i spit after you and it only took my like halfhour and you hour nd a half...o well we need votes........................
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=75853
^^^ bboth u fools ill be back to vote in here im gettin my post coutn an record back
hit ymbattleu up tho
pc
ok, Da Banger... when u have to explain ur punch.... that's an indicator that the line is wack.....
both had some weak werves but vision edged it a little bit...
vision, ya first verse needs to be worked on, structure is horrible
deadly visoin for sure...
multis= deadly ( but not many of em)
punches= both
flow= deadly
personals= deadly
wordplay=deadly
my vote= deadly...he got it quite easy
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NICE BATTLE BANGA............................................. .....................................
i dunno just cause im a newbie dont mean i dont know a good battle....i think bangas was better overall....
killer lines
Quote:
Originally posted by DeadlyVision
u'll meet with the deadly Vision...diggin ya grave deep with the shovel....
Like heat from a kettle...scream from the steem tryna get in Anb crew but he couldnt compete on that level...lol
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...&pagenumber=12 (Anb Declined his try out..lol)
Dabanga??you'll hit the street, soon as you hear that squeak from the metal...
f*ck peace, our beef isn't settled...you'll be in pieces and pebbles...
You're whack! A bunch of crap sorted in rhymes...
I feel like a red margin...how I slaughter your lines..
22 losses ur rhymes will neva be felt...
ur punches are shit..so they will reflect and u'll diss~ yaself..lol
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ght=WALLBANGER (he made a thread at bitchslap to battle someone but he became a pussy and declined..lol)
possibly win because you have no punches/
Flex a Forty-Five Banga Bitch? Or run away with a "4-fit"/
Check ya pours kid, I'll leave ya 'dead...beat' like insomniac athletes/
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categorical break downQuote:
Originally posted by DaBanga
[B]man that shit was when i was a newbie.....fuck you dumb..i didnt know shit......w/e heres my verse
this bitch writes his crew name on his walls cause he aint got no life/
picked jackin off himself rather than havin a hot ass wife/
bitch i'll bury you like a dead animal, cause thats all you are/
got a letter from penthouse and rejected it with ease/
10 free editions...but couldnt pay the fees/(lol free)
this cat just like flintstones vitamens, chewable and safe for kids/
only time he got close to spitten hot shit was in his underwear skids/
i'll hit you more times than 50's been shot and kill you faster than a fat man runnin from police get caught/
your rhymes are funny and make me laugh alot,rhymin bout shit older than under-the-desk-snot/
dv took multi's, personals, flow, vocab, opener, closer, creativity, structure (& rhyme scheme)
[b]banga disses, wordplay, complexity, punches, metaphors, gayness
vote: dv - though a close one
advice - in end it's because a lot of banda's initial bars got wasted on homoerotic disses....THOSE ARE GAY....it doesn't work....it's more gay to think em up and you do impact your opponent.....nobody wants to know gay details.....especially when you go into such faggotness....it wack and played...you really wasted so many bars....disses work better when something complex comes out of creative workings....that's advice.....you two needs to straight out your bars structure....STOP GOD DAMN STRETCHIN'...PARTICULARLY BANGA.....loose gay insults....dv insult your opponents more....or at least when you talk about yourself use it to diss them....not brag like it's some open mic ego trip....aight.....you'all need to improve on the categories you didn't take and perfect all categories in general through practise...
^^^^meh what u talkin about.......
Bangers was wack his attemts at personals was pathetic.....punches..what punches???oh those played out dad fucking ones......
Deadly visions was better as he had better personals and better punches but he coulda worked on flow..
Vote:Deadly Visions
lol....werd^^^Quote:
Originally posted by TREACH P
^^^^meh what u talkin about.......
Bangers was wack his attemts at personals was pathetic.....punches..what punches???oh those played out dad fucking ones......
Deadly visions was better as he had better personals and better punches but he coulda worked on flow..
Vote:Deadly Visions