no crew
no hate
10 lines
i'll spit first
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no crew
no hate
10 lines
i'll spit first
yo i'ma raw tha sickest emcee//
tha chances of him beatin me is like shaq hittin a three//
yo gay like micheal jackson//
i'm a winner like john paxson//
u need a doctor cause u got aids//
my rhymes are tighter than ludacris's braids//
i'm like lil flip a freestyle king//
u suck a rappin bad so u need to sing//
u need to elavate cause ur not ready for tha heat//
i'll eat ur newbie ass like ur freshmeat//
ur wack kid don't step 2 me thinkin u hard
lil faggot i'll drop my shit in like 15 min
at the moment ur mom is suckin me up
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Look At This Herb This Cat Obvoiously lost-his-mind,
Cuz I Been Dunkin-More-Nigga Then Dunkin-Hines//1
This Nigga-Elevated And His Rhymes Are Still-Elementary,
My Rhyme-Is-More-Painful Then Gettin Raped In Da Penitentary//2
Ur Lines Couldn't-Be-Ill Even If U Laced-Em-Wit-Anthrax,
U A Stupid Bitch On Ur Period So Go Change-Ur-Tampax//3
Ur Rhymes Is Extremely-Dull... Like kool-aid Wit-No-Taste,
Like Hanson On Scary Movie 2... U Use Ur Toungue To Baste//4
Ur Rhymes Couldn't Be "Complex" Even If U Was "Marc Ecko",
Ur Verse Is "Completley-Harmless" AS If U Was A Gecko//5
iight uppin 4 votes
^^you were supposed to write a verse for a battle, not a poem.Quote:
Originally posted by FreestyleKing937
yo i'ma raw tha sickest emcee//
tha chances of him beatin me is like shaq hittin a three//
yo gay like micheal jackson//
i'm a winner like john paxson//
u need a doctor cause u got aids//
my rhymes are tighter than ludacris's braids//
i'm like lil flip a freestyle king//
u suck a rappin bad so u need to sing//
u need to elavate cause ur not ready for tha heat//
i'll eat ur newbie ass like ur freshmeat//
Vote=doctor J
better flow punches and wordplay
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=73864
^^hit this up
lol thanx
uppin 4 sum more votes
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once i get 100, ima come n vote for doctor j... better punches and wordplay...
hit this up
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...8%3D%3D%3D%3DD
Uppin 4 sum votes
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Originally posted by Doctor_J
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j nigga u got this wit ease
ur punches was hot
nice structure
ok flow but better than FK
nice battle nigga
^^^
thanx 4 voting
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Dr J ........... takes it .......... his verse was tight enought to win .........FSK , you had some good lines , but dey were too short , and it did kinda of look like apoem instead of a spit ........ Just use your punches in a longer verse and you should be aiight.
Vote- Dr. J
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=73771
Hit dis up , if you can ........... Honest Votes only
Peace
CE
Make Sure To Poll Vote
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d.r.j. got dis
he put more effort in his spit wit harder punches complex lines his verse was just 100% hotness
the otha nigga needs to elevate
vote=dr.j