ok his rules....
No hate
No d/r
No crew
He spits first after I check in....
uhh....did u set a line limit??
well....dats it....tell me da line limit dazzle
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ok his rules....
No hate
No d/r
No crew
He spits first after I check in....
uhh....did u set a line limit??
well....dats it....tell me da line limit dazzle
uh.... checkin in now so spit when ya ready..... i guess we'll do 15 line maximum?? .................................................. ............................
Yo, Pittsburgh in da house ya'll. Tip those cups and smoke those blunts! Sit back and listen.
Shots are heard though the air tonight. You're a pussie BITCH...this is a cock fight. Pay attention and learn the way before you wind up dead, with one foot in yo grave. But be on your best behavior. You're the man myth and legend? Bitch, B-Dazzle is the motha fuckin SAVIOR!//
Cock back your 9 milly, niggas feel me. Young P, how young are you? 15? Your age doesn't matter punk, NOTHING will stop me from stuffin you in the trunk and then drivin off drunk. Bobbin and Weavin through cars like Dale Jr. Hittin barricades like Dale Sr. Listenin to you scream out in pure terror. Soundin like a virgin bitch after her first night with B-Dazzle.//
Sit back and relax P I'm about done. Then again, I could beat you up like an unliked step son. Listen up P I'll tell ya somethin. You're the cheating wife....I'm the jealous husband. You black and bruised like Tina Turner, me pistol whippin you and commiting cold blood murder.//
I murder the mic like a fast tounged dyke, before I stab you in the eye with a rusted spike. Actually dude, I wouldn't do that. I'd rather take a splintered broom, bend you over and shove it up your ass crack.//
I'm your master P, you're my apprentice. Tell them about the the time you disobyed and I sent you to the dentist. With a crack front tooth and a broken mouler (spelling), and about that time I hit you with my boulder. My nuts sack, hey..you'll have that. Just like I had your girl on my bed and then she licked my ass crack.//
By the way P, how do my balls taste? Ask your girl how I came in her mouth and wacked on her face! Remember? You were out of town. I bent your bitch over and fucked her like a blood hound. All in her mouth I busted a nut. I bent her over backwards then busted her gut. She has a pretty pink puss, you wuss. only one thing, MAKE THAT GIRL TAKE A DUSH! (Deuche?)//
After I had your girl naked, I called it a day. I secretly made a porno tape and sold it on E-bay. 19.99 someone paid to see that whore. She was the fish ho, B-Dazzle was the lore. Oh, one more thing dawg just a warning. You're lady had a rash and gnats were swarming. Go to the clinic, get tested for a STD. If you're lucky, maybe I didn't give your bitch my HIV.//
You made yet yo? Lets break it down ho. I fucked your bitch and came on her tits. Then she sucked my dick you bitch ass PRICK! Now what aren't you doin to this lady? She was screamin out for ME to have her baby.//
Enough of me and your girl P, you see, this is between you and me. All I did was gave her what you couldn't. I eat her pussy raw, cuz she said that you wouldn't. But hey, it's your choice if you choose to be gay. Oh, you're not gay? You don't say. Either way, your girl was one helluva lay.//
OK, now it's time. Time to put an end to this rhyme. So come on mother goose it's YOUR turn to try to shine. So let me tell you one last time. Don't choke on your rhyme, put some words to your mime. Aight I'm outtie, I'm bouty bouty. I'm the bounty hunter BITCH...and I'm here to collect YOUR bounty/
Sorry dawg....I got a little carried away on that one. Way to long. But ah well. Anyway, make it a slong as you need. I'm still new, trying to get used to this system.
yea....just sum advice fo ya next battle.... try ta make it shorta... no ones gonna read dat whole thing.... i garauntee it.... i'll be spittin soon.....
B-DAZZLE that is some good shit nigga!!!!!!!! that is lookin like a winner
UPPIN 4 VOTES http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=73063
ayo dazzle... sry fo takin so long dawg... had ta entertain and a party, lol..... by da way... i see u have two otha battles goin and peep da rules... u can only have 2..... but w/e.... ima be spittin soon.....
No problem dawg. But my question is this. I thought once I finished I was able to have another battle. Or I can't battle again until the battle is voted on?
well dats just how i percieved it... dats wut i thought anyway.... hopefully (for u) dat its da way u said it not da way i said it....
^ You have to wait until your 2 battles are voted on and finished. I'll let your battles stand.. but if you do this again you will be banned.Quote:
Originally posted by B-Dazzle
No problem dawg. But my question is this. I thought once I finished I was able to have another battle. Or I can't battle again until the battle is voted on?
ok dawg. I misunderstood the rules. It won't happen again.
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Steel City Suckas
1. I am bringing back our old rule of only 2 active battles at a time. You are not to have more than 2 battle threads happening at the same time (in the Front Lines) anymore. RBBL and RBTL are the only exceptions. IF YOU CHECK INTO A 3RD BATTLE THEN YOU WILL BE DQ'D IMMEDIATELY AND GIVEN A LOSS!!
dat last part
ayo...uh...uh....ready....its like
Dis kats rap game is wack...more den a geek wit no bitch//
It's no glitch...sendin shivers down ya spine...even ya computa gon twitch//
Fuck killin emcees wit my punches...i'm droppin statues//
It's clear my werds aint in 3D...but it like my verse comin at u//
Ya aint rydin...but tell me why ya got dat "The End" tattoo?// joke
Can ya seduce dis? Like ludy...im rollin ya out, lettin da story uncurl//
Cuz ya rymes is useless...like givin viagra to a horny girl//
Readin 60 lines of nothin wuz startin ta bore me//
U'd be betta off writin Harry Potta' stories//
Now do it reporta style, takin notes cuz ya go no flow//
Check it...i'd get votes ova u even if i wuz a no show//
Yo bro...ya gettin cracked and chiseled like a fossil...to old//
U didnt put [b]'s on ya verse, but accepting my call out...to bold//
Now ya gettin gunned down by young...killin ya wit dese nice verbs//"Young Gunnaz"
I like herbs...cuz dey go down quick like an ocean liner crusinin on icebergs//
1st line....wackin off....(wack)....letz see sum votes ya'll............................................. .................................................. .......................
sixth line.... ludy is ludacris and his song roll out is wut i wuz referring to..../\_/\_/\_/\______________...dats ya lifeline dawg
young p got this, he came harder wit his punches,wordplay, and overall better structure
tight shit from u both
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^ExactlyQuote:
Originally posted by Hypnotic
young p got this, he came harder wit his punches,wordplay, and overall better structure
tight shit from u both
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Hey Drop a vote on my battles against ATL Killah and M.O.B.
UPPIN DIS JAWN....DONT SLEEP ON IT YA'LL.................................
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Young P had this cuz he actually battled lol no beef b-dazzle your verse was sick as fuck but this aint no poetry battle so P gets it easy......
Yo can you check my battles with shylock and justin vincible......peace.......
werd.....uppin for last time....goin ta beach............................................. .................................................. ............
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Originally posted by Hypnotic
young p got this, he came harder wit his punches,wordplay, and overall better structure
tight shit from u both
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this sums up the battle pretty much....although i like bdazzzeled stuff hes got to make it more offensive,, this is a battle afterall
uppin.....cant believe dis aint ova.... lol............................................... .................................................. ........
Yup Yup P got this by better stucture word play, floh, and punches......... basically everything...lol but nice battle ta both