yo you know the rulz...........spit you got 20 mins
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yo you know the rulz...........spit you got 20 mins
u on????
let do this
but my rules u fjkin crack head was u spit fukin first ..how many time i wana tell u or we spit sum wut in the same time period..
i dont like feeders an even if u promise not to feed i dont give a fuk
u down
10-15 lines
we both drop in 25 minutes if u take till an hour DQ
CHECK
mic 1 2
u ready to be merked.
IN................................................ ........uppin for dis fool to drop
ok checkin in and dropin............
im gonna merk this "herb" cuz to you my lyrics are "superb" bitch youve been handed a wins you dont "deserve" my shits unreal its soundin like it came from another "world" now you on my merkin list cuz bitch youve just bein "served"/
im spitin "devine" this fuckin kid must be outa his "mind" make this kid read it over like hes pressin "rewind"/
my lyrics are "devastatin" so strong rippin through mcs like they armor "penatratin" and bitch im my rhymes are as vicious as "satan"/
you notin but a dick rydah and a "hata"(hater) bitch ive served so many people youd think i was a "waiter"/
ill knock your teeth out just so you cant bite my "rhymes" you gotta stop dwellin on your wins these are new "times"/
battlin me is the only thing youve eva done "insane" im dropin these clips leave you in a daze full of "pain" leave you wit a perment blood "stain"/
these bitchs must all wonna get "eliminated" leave you outa rhymes lyricly "disinagrated" cuz bitch im so hot if i spit close to the pacific the whole ocean would get "evaporated" you thought youd win but i geuss you "misscalculated"/
yo common.........................hurry.............. .................................................
Dope Flow by Fatal... its gonna be good to see the comeback of Game Insane... but that was alright...
Peace
Big D........
if he even shows up................................................ .................................................
HAHA True...... IF he shows up... i think he will..................
Big D.............................
he betta im givin him an hour from now......that kid called me out...made rulz that if in an hour it wasnt droped youd get a DQ then takes off so he betta spit quick or hes gettin the dq
aite my bad dawg i have a virus or had a virus on my cvomp now its gone..it made me shit down half way thru..
so give me 25 minutes..ill drop even sooner...layte\
I ALWAYZ SHOW
AIte coo verse..nuthin speacail...im gunna have to try..this time
yo
Battlyn me is Insane,Naw dats just played,uzin da same lines ya heard from ya pears//
Left the other 2 victims of mine,u the third,think bout a new career//
Dis Herbs strate bammer,i wudnt waist my time rollin-u-up//
KNock ya down like hammer,got u wishin i didnt show-up//
Ill hit this net thug so hard hell drop dead cold in his dads office chair//
Sendin head slugs to ya dome, cuz My illness cant be compaired//
KId ya LYRics are fatal< I doubt they just unstable like a 3 legged table//
Ya crew cudnt contend to my skills, when my lyrics are enableD//
Damn be foreal kid, im spittin rappad lyrical shells injectin u to da fullest//
Im LYrically strapped bitch, an when im paked wit da steal u start sweatin bullets//
U proly sum hik white boy walkin around wit a mullet , on his head//
Inbead u wit a loss till u drop,an think about a new hobby instead//
wuick but full of heat..
pc uppin
damn game took this 2 me, killerrrrrrrrr flow, damn game just merked u, fatal no hate, u got skill, mad props homie
poll vote- game
this wasn't dope.
BREAKDOWN:
Multi:Fatal
Vocab:Fatal
Wordplay:Game
Punches: Game
Overall: Game
Dis was so close...cause it was so whack...game..you got it...
^^uppin eh one of u didnt poll ittttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt ttttttttttttttttttt
AN U BOTH R ON
Sorry i cant vote but ill hit this up with feedback
flow=game
punches=nither realy but game
lol nobody realy had anythin so i dont know just forget the rest
Game u had sum good punches and nice flow, so u take this one.
Work on ur punches tho, try to cum up wit better ones, make similier and metas too along wit more multi's, cuz u got skill
fav line
KId ya LYRics are fatal< I doubt they just unstable like a 3 legged table//
Fatal your verse was pretty basic, and ur flow? run on sentences like crazy, where are the comas?
keep elivatin dog u got potential
can ya'll hit this up with a vote in return for this feedback, thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...5&pagenumber=3
Anyways First no hate...
Second Unfortunately I have a problem that I cant poll vote so if a mod or an administrator see this posts please give my vote to count for whoever I choose..
How its broken down.
Multi's = Fatal
Vocab = Game
Punches = Game
Wordplay = Game
Flo = Fatal
Vote = 3-2 Game by default
Anyways Remember No hate I always give a little spit for the loser...
Anyway hit my battle vs chris wood 3
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...&postid=704616
Also check my two poetic pieces in poetic scriptures forum titled "Eating me Inside" and "Spiritual"
This man is Insane trying to beat game, in game's own game/
Busting litle kid rhymes... You lame/
you have a bettter chance trying suck didck quik to make yourself a name/
and have fame known as " The Lyrically Unstable"...what's his name?? Oh yeah Fatal!//
uppin phatly c mon wher d votes.........attttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt tttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt tttttttttttttttttttttttt
Votes????????????????????????????i wasnt feelin how they aint no vote sdrop da link ill be legible soon...voteeeeeeeeeeee
not a whole lot of punches or wordplay here, i saw too much newbie shit like puttin quotes around rhymin words. ima have to go with the one with the best flow since everuthin else was wack
vote=game insane
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Originally posted by ][\/][.O.B
Sorry i cant vote but ill hit this up with feedback
flow=game
punches=nither realy but game
lol nobody realy had anythin so i dont know just forget the rest
Game u had sum good punches and nice flow, so u take this one.
Work on ur punches tho, try to cum up wit better ones, make similier and metas too along wit more multi's, cuz u got skill
fav line
KId ya LYRics are fatal< I doubt they just unstable like a 3 legged table//
Fatal your verse was pretty basic, and ur flow? run on sentences like crazy, where are the comas?
keep elivatin dog u got potential
can ya'll hit this up with a vote in return for this feedback, thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...5&pagenumber=3
fatal lyrics had this i think with a betta verse overall, mind you the flow was evens. Fatal had beta punches and some funny lines,
my lyrics are "devastatin" so strong rippin through mcs like they armor "penatratin" and bitch im my rhymes are as vicious as "satan"/
you notin but a dick rydah and a "hata"(hater) bitch ive served so many people youd think i was a "waiter"/
so i vote fatal lyrics.........
can you guys check my battles with shylock and justin vincible.....
thanx....................................uppin.... .................................................. ................
[QUOTE]Originally posted by XL4REAL
[B]fatal lyrics had this i think with a betta verse overall, mind you the flow was evens. Fatal had beta punches and some funny lines,
my lyrics are "devastatin" so strong rippin through mcs like they armor "penatratin" and bitch im my rhymes are as vicious as "satan"/
you notin but a dick rydah and a "hata"(hater) bitch ive served so many people youd think i was a "waiter"/
so i vote fatal lyrics.........
couldnt have said it better
Fatal lyrics.........Game ha d a verse WAck...........No Hate.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...............................
dont forget to poll vote.............................................. ..................................................
yo...i gotta give this to game...i mean neither really dropped a fly verse...but i gotta give it to game cuz fatals shyt was crazy over used...just borin shyt...
an game...an three leeged table can stand by-itself...next time u may wanta say a 2 legged table, an pears are fruit, i think u meant peers...meanin people
ps...u wanna battle game? lookin for competition...so holla at me an well drop on monday...or tommorow...peace...(uspit first)
uppin...................uppin...............uppin. ..................................................
7 curse id eta ya shit
up
iLL TELL EVERYONE NOW I CAME WEAK AN FUK IN MY MIND
HAD TO DROP IT QUICK...CUZ MY COMP KEEPS SHUTIN DOWN
trUST ME IVE BEAT ALOT BETTER GUYS THEN FATAL HEAR
AN YEA 7 IF U WANT IT SET IT UP BUT MY RULES
UPPIN FOR ONE MORE VOTE
[QUOTE]Originally posted by ][\/][.O.B
[B]Sorry i cant vote but ill hit this up with feedback
flow=game
punches=nither realy but game
lol nobody realy had anythin so i dont know just forget the rest
Game u had sum good punches and nice flow, so u take this one.
Work on ur punches tho, try to cum up wit better ones, make similier and metas too along wit more multi's, cuz u got skill
fav line
KId ya LYRics are fatal< I doubt they just unstable like a 3 legged table//
Fatal your verse was pretty basic, and ur flow? run on sentences like crazy, where are the comas?
keep elivatin dog u got potential
word^^^