Born2Kill v.s Mortality (Correct)

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16-32 lines
no hate votes
no d/r votes
no crew votes
no feeding
no biteing



Good luck Born2kill

Ok...

I'm checkin in...

Let me just say this first...

I answered your callout real early in the day.

Anyone who knows me here knows I'm gone everyday at 5pm.
(Which is now)

So...

I'll be here first thing in the morning (8am) and I'll post up then.

If that's not cool with you, we should try this another time when I've got all day.

If it is...

I'll drop in the morning and you can take it from there...

Good luck to you too.

Peace

i'll wait for u to post
that's straight if u drop tomorrow
juss dont forget to
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Mortality facin inactivity cuz he'll need more therapy than an amputee with mulitiple personalities...
Battle broken, spent like a token, cuz ya spit like ya jokin unaggressively spoken.
Betray ya name, Benedict Arnold's ta blame cuz ya turned on yourself like Chris Gaines goin for fame...(garth brook's alter ego)
Blank space ya claim, like a picture-less frame cuz ya talent and Gregory Hines are one in the same.
Like him you'll be "tappin" from my hard-hittin rappin ya limbs flappin from punches happenin leave ya teeth gapin.
Didn't parry when I thrust now ya bust, "fenced" in like a mutt and stabbed in the gut cuz you suckin is a must.
Never again "call me out", I'll stay in ya bitch all I want big dick ta flaunt HER orgasms YOUR taunt...
Ya name rings true but the bells for you dyin in this duel cuz lyrical bullets rip through ya body like a flu.
I'm classical like Beethoven while you bend-over-often takin dick-all-off-in ya ass...
So I rip like a symphony cuz ya have-it-in-for-me, reach "note"able peaks and crack ya like glass.
Pathetic in ya "genes", testosterone lean ya couldn't "erect" a bar if ya "ghost" writer was John Holmes the porn king.
Just lay limp, talent and dick gimp while I elevate like a blimp ta peel and eat ya like shrimp.
I battle tha best you obsessed with the rest killin the newbs and avoiding real tests...
Cuz ya spit would fail even on a curve so I'll serve ya ass gourmet like fuckin hors d'oeuvres.
Bisexual bitch with more than one itch suckin the cock along with lickin the clit...
Gettin gifts from both worlds from ya boy and girl, flowers from the lady, the dude gives ya "pearls".
Ya been phonin Justin Timberlake and hangin up, too shy ta ask for a double dine...
But ya hope he calls back so ya can get in touch with his sac in ya version of "star 69".
Amphibian rapper in a crapper, swimmin in piss but spittin on land as defenseless as prey...
Feelin 'froggy', JUMP! Get hit by my bars like theys cars as I rip this predator spray.
I spit like a table with straps adding poison in my raps, 'needle' fine to ensure connection...
Knock ya over with flow let wordplay take hold use punches as lethal injection.
Revealed domination with the lyrics I spit, gripped ya throat like a sadist grips a whore's tit...
No breath in ya lungs like when ya freestyle have YOUR puke on MY hand in a bizarre 8 Mile.

I see you've arrived so I'm uppin this for you to find.

I'm just about outta here for the night again so I guess I'll see what ya dropped tomorrow.

Good luck, Mortality...

Peace

Nice Verse Born To Kill
that shit was pretty tight
but yo i'll get at this later on
i got so many battles i got to post at
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Dont worry i wont duck

Very Dope verse by Born to Kill... nice punches.... damn this dude has a lot of experience... very dope.....

Big D............................................

Yo, Mortality...

Uppin for your drop.

Where'd ya go, dude?

Hope ta see ya verse today.

Peace

Damn, Born2Kill yo verse was the shit...nice punches an' damn good flow. You got sum real skillz, dawg. Ima gonna look at your other battlez.

Oh Shit
My Bad B2K
I've been busy Administrating a site that i'm Admin of.
i forgot all about this shit
i'll have my verse up Thursday afternoon
sorry man
that's the earliest i can
i'm really busy
gotta work and shit
U kno...

I'm Keying Up right now
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Not My Best I got Writers-Block


How you gone battle with no "Progression" I'm cuttin you off like a "Bad Connection", My Punches are like machine guns no way of "Protection" My flows sick like an "ILL Infection"//
Me Battle You there's no way to "Compete" Beating you is one easy "Defeat", Your Rhymes stay still like "Concrete" This a simple Battle no need to "Cheat"//
Born To Kill...What a "Clown" i'm lyrically Merking this bitch "Upside Down", My Lines be so humerous even he "Frowns" everyone knows i'm gonna win this battle "Hands Down"//
This kids so wack he shouldn't "Speak" wack verses he spits come out "Weak", 48 wins 43 losses damn this kid a CPU "Geek" watch he'll have more losses than wins by the end of "Next Week"//

Fuckin Bitch pisses me off i'll blow his head off with a "12 Gauge" kid so poor but hey he gets paid "Below Minimum Wage", My Lines are like Voilent "Rage" Born to Kill can't battle he gettin boo'd off the "Stage"//
Getting Merked is all this bitch knos how to "Explore" right now i'm killin the hell out of this "Faggit ass Whore", Boxers/Breefs shit dont ask this guy got Granny Panties in his "Drawers" Suckin dick is all Born to Kill is "For"//
Fuck this shit i'm reachin for my "Gat" ta blow the fuck out of this "Cat", Eatin this kids flows away like a "Kit-Kat" bitch you wack you aint "Phat"//
Haha Born To Kill is being "Attacked" punches hittin him before he can "React", Merkin the fuck out this bitch Thats a "Fact" this kids bones been fractured and his skull has been "Cracked"//

Your Shit comes out "Meager" you want to win a battle your juss so "Eager", how you fittin ta defeat a "Battle Leaguer" ya rhymes out of date like "Bob Seager"//
I see you from the "South" i bet your flows would sound good if you didn't constantly have a dick in your "Mouth", You Run your mouth so much i forget what it's "Bout" ya lost so many times i can't even keep "Count"//
Poor ass bitch can't afford to pay his "Rent" so now he's livin outside in a "Tent", He Had a car but it caved in like a big "Dent" bitch bout as soft as his rhymes they both easly get "Bent"//
Fuck Born To Kill i want some "Competition" wants a 49th win he constantly "Wishin", For him another Loss I'm "Dishin" give up rappin and make a livin "Fishin"//

His punches get moved around like a "Wag" battlin this stupid alliderate kid is a "Drag", Not even breakin a swet so no need for a "Rag" God Damn Born to Kill is a fucking "Fag"//
Hope this bitch has a ombstone cuz this bitch "Dyin" sayin he gone win this shit damn he "Lyin", Wack ass lines he spits juss aint "Flyin" i'm killin his punk ass and i aint even "Tryin"//
Mortality v.s Born to Kill there is no "Match" look at his rhymes they look like "Chicken Scratch", Only way for him to be ill is if a cold he could "Catch" kids goin in and out juss like "Charlie Batch"//(Detroit Lions old quarter back)
When i battle i take out anger people think i got an "Attitude" you think you hard so u start "Actin Rude", This kid think he a pimp but he "Prude" Fuck it I done Merked This "Dude"//

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Drop a link and we will drop an honest vote
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Mortality had this with harder hits betta wordplay, but it was well close and hard to choose.....both of you came hard and flowed real well but i gotta vote mortality.....

Can you check my battle with shadowenigma please, cheers

Dont forget to poll vote
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aight

Flow: Mortality
Vocab: B2k
Wordplay:Tie
Punches:Mortality (had more personal and they hit more countinues but B2K was damn good too)

Overall: my vote was mortality but only by a lil B2K was damn good and is most definetly experienced, Mortality was good and i was feeling his multis better in is punches.
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my lead
UPPIN(#2)
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Dont forget to drop a link
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ok then

Flow=b2k
Multi's=b2k
Vocab=b2k
punches=mortality
wordplay=mortality
creativity=mortality
Ok close shit,but i think mortality got it with punches props to both of ya though and no hate.
peace

I dunno maybe im blind but i thought morttality's shit was wack
I cant stand when people take that long too spit
abd i still dont think it even mattered

B2K had some good stuff decent flow and punches

Vote B2K

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My Lead still
UPPIN(#3)
Props to ya B2K
you put out one hell of a verse
no hate yo
U got my respect

Whoops didn't see MicSyckie's post
my bad
and yo it took so long for me to post
cuz i've been really busy
not everyone is on there CPU all the time.
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Mortailty........Took this one....

With....
Harder Punches
Flow
Wordplay

B2K Had
Creativity
Personals

Hmm....

Final Vote- Mortality

4-1
Damn this is gettin voted on fast
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UPPIN(#4)
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Good battle but I go wid mortality, betta wordplay and punches.......................on both verses though, structure us all over the place and although it flows, it is hard to read and keep up wid what's goin on..............................