i'll go first. let me know when u here.
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i'll go first. let me know when u here.
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YO I'll be back to this battle when its dun with an HONEST VOTE
can ya'll do me a favour please and vote on this, i just need votes I murked this kid but havent been gettin shit!
please peep it
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=71628
it starts like this,
this kid thinks hes good and he can rap/
but its just like me takin a shit, its crap//
i hope he dont think hes walkin away alive/
cause tonight be the night that your ass dies//
i got my guns cocked waitin for his punk ass to come out/
when i'm through, he wont even have one breath to shout//
my rhymes are hard like metal and yours are plastik/
dawg, i'm serious, aint bein "Sarkastic"//
i'll throw your ass into china till you catch sars/
and leave you wit a cd wit my 8 bars//
i'd keep my mouth shut if i was you, bitch/
this battle is done and it went off wit hitch//
i know it weak but its all i got right now!
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sarkastik say somethin! u wait to damn long.....................u goin or not????????...............
This battles done. this cat wouldn't have hot shit if he shitted on tha sun.
i dont have to post..when the see me vs u...i've already won.
look at ya verse, battlin u puts me to shame.
when someone wants to define wackness they mention ur name.
i will refuse to try against u why did u accept this battle?
after u see this vere i'll have ya shook like a rattle.
i'm good enough to crush u with out usin any wordz.
i'll use teleapathy and i can still smoke this herb.
well i guess i cant blame u for givin me this win.
youre great:p nope im being me im sorry i had to commit this sin.
me 5-0 easy
KEY'D
i refuse to use a good punch line on this guy lol.
- 0 u t
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I put my Vote to Sarcastik his punches flow and just enjoying his verse was easy and good....That was a good flow from him and it beat out thinktak verse easy...vote sarcastik
now hit up my battle u two we need uppin its crucial
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=71510
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Originally posted by SaRcasTiK
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Originally posted by Destruction
I put my Vote to Sarcastik his punches flow and just enjoying his verse was easy and good....That was a good flow from him and it beat out thinktak verse easy...vote sarcastik
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my rhymes are hard like metal and yours are plastik/
dawg, i'm serious, aint bein "Sarkastic"//
Quoted by thinktank.................
hardest line in battle ha ha
vote=think
^ i can easily tell you don't no what your talkin bout by your
record..... whack ass herb.............................................. ........
Both were pretty mellow rhymes in terms of impact...
Nothing outstanding, but pretty good concepts from both.
Sarkastik takes this by a hair...
Well, maybe two hairs.
Just better structure, things held together and flowed easier.
Punches were there, a bit harder than Tank's.
Metas came from both guys, but Tank's weren't as solid.
Tank, I know ya just getting started...
But the SARS line is played like last year.
Ya'll both need to work on making your closeing lines more personal, make em pertain to the battle and your opponent.
Make em hurt.
Remember, it's the last thing motherfuckers read before they vote.
^^^ thanks 4 tha advice ........ i can spit way harder than this but
i opted not to but thanks any way............................................... ....
for two newbs its was ok i guess
the sars line is played and talkin about guns is played too
so my vote will go to sarkastik this time
both got room to elevate
good luck to both
vote=sarkastik
holla
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up what??you should hump back into ur closet u teletaby fanatic!ThinkTank ripped u he made u a new asshole as soon as i'll hit 100 posts i'll vote in the poll but for real sarcastik cant u dig it that fuck faces with girlty character and shaved legs aint ill???
LMAO ur wack...if u think that otha guy won ur a homo...................
the bad thing i wazn't even spitin 15% of tha norm........................
Girly man lets battle i will school you as i schooled your mom 5 nights ago
the only talent u got is to fit a double dildo and a feet at once in your asshole ya assHOE