J.K.O VS. Slim Lanky

Here is the shit
10 lines min
20 lines max
no d/r
no hate
no cru
spit at same time
verse due in one hour........
check it to get started.

checkin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!

checkin i have to get offline cause my brother has to use the phone and so atleast let me have a 1 30 minutes cause my brother he'll talk forever so yeah or a 1 15 minutes ill try my best to sneak back on the interent

sounds good man just post whever............................................ .................................................. ..............

Open the door cuss I am COMMIN in. Takin this battle aint stopin till I get a WIN//
Shit this J.K.O your fallin like your name was BERLIN. Little girls plug your ears cuss this shit is a SIN// (Berlin wall)

I Snap, Crackle; Pop like my name was RICE KRISPIES. I’ll Snap you’re your game in half pop you in the face and make you Crackle. What did you already MISS ME?

You couldn’t make it in this game if you name was “SHADY” The only place you belong is in your trailer park with you OL’ LADY//

Fat ass bitch, got more chins on her than CHINA, what is that a pit bull chewin on roast beef? No that is her VAGINIA//

Fuck kid just admit you can’t match up with ME, getting head from bro Kracka the leader of the “Lyrical Rapist”, Now that shit is FUNNY//

What do you guys rap - - - Each others ASS? All you are is an electron and I am a nucleus-the center of MASS//

Fuckin pussy come out of HIDIN the only way you got those wins was from a hole lot of DICK RIDIN//

Shit when any baller come AROUND, this kid scrambles out of TOWN asking for back up “homies” just look at the CLOWNS//

J.K.O what does that stand for Just Knock Out, your shit is ugly and leaves a bad taste in my MOUTH//

Everytime you try to spit all I here is jibberish. How you pop a 9 in the SUPERMARKET, well that is shit, I saw this kid on at the park on a SWING SET//

With his backwards NY Cap dressed in whack ATTIRE, Your shit is old like Karl Malone I think it time to RETIRE//

You cant make it in a game with new emcee’s like ME, that’s like watch Malone tryin to keep up with Shaq and KOBE//

Your rap game is nothing but a pile of GARBAGE, after I am done picked you apart all that is left is a bunch of CARNAGE//

Well that you tried to challenge and I beat you with my RHYME, I am leavin you on a hospital bed experiencing the flat LINE//------------------------------


-Slim Lanky-

3-3 and your still a light weight,comin on this site tryin to be cool but your still a fake/
u need to make,us all happy so go kill your self in that lake/
your easy prey,i can battle you all day,and yull still be gay/
kill your ass and leave you on the bay,ill make your body so cold even if we were in may/
why the fuck u keep thinkin your a millonaire,but your still buyin plastic silverware/
your still actin like a boy know wonders you havent growin pubic hairs/
stop gettin money from your mom its not right,and stop backin down from fights/
you stupid dike,cause know ones likes,someone who doesnt qualify/
the big whole contreversy,is that u keep thinkin u in the race car durby/
im gonna drink u like a slurpy,and make it so u need surgery/
on your left knee and both arms fuck it u need it everywhere/
your like gummy yeah gummy bears,you can be easly be teared apart cant you hear/
your gonna be livin your life in fear,cause your so stupid,and no fun/
if someone beats you its all over huh,fuck this im gonna kill u with my gun/
you need to be more specific,so just listen,to my good rhymes and wat im spitten/
cause your different,sayin that you be pimpin,but really i made your ass limpen/
holy shit dont start trippen,that your lines are drippin,and wat u be sayin is flippen/

ok uppin for votes no beef man good verse

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uppin uppin............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ................

uppin for votes

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break down

punchs jko
wrdplay jko
flow even
vote jko ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Vote=Slim Lanky

he had meta's and punch lines which other guy didnt have, the other kid just had sick flow
good shit the both of u

can ya'll return the favour and peep this we need votes like mAAADDD

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=71388

o one more thing

Slim lanky, ya gota learn how to put yo verse together bette, ya just cant make a punche outa no where every line, u kno wut I mean.......

peace

peep this yo

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=71388

Yo JKO, ya had good flow, bu ya need more creative lines and punches, make ur verse more complex wit meta's multi's and Similie's then you'll be ILL

can ya'll hit this up tho please we need MAD VOTES is been goin on fo ever!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=71388

stop postin shit in are battle bitch god damn take it to a different battle that doesnt care if u fuckin freepost

uppin comeon votes ppl

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uppin

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Quote:

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Originally posted by d-mecca7
break down

punchs jko
wrdplay jko
flow even
vote jko ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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uppppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!

This was a close battle I'll break it down like this

Punches: Slim
Flow: JKO
Wordplay: Slim
Metas: Slim
Structure: JKO
Personals: Slim

Vote = Slim

JKO I"ve seen u come better dawg, But Slim had some hard hittin punches in there, especially that CLOWNZ line, had me LMAO.

Good battle from both of u though.

Check out my battle against TheHandsOfGod and ShockDaWorld.

damn this sucks im goin on a losin streak

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Uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

uppin on votes

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good battle but in my opinion i think jko took it by a hair wit punches props 2 both tho im out holla

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*slim and jko r yall in a crew if u aint drop a tryout in executives yall pretty good*

im out tho holla

hit this battle up and i'll drop a honest vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=71369

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aight

slim got this, i thought he came harder wit his strcuture of his verse by havin emensive punches

no hate vote

vote=slim

Yo you didnt vote you said you voted but the poll is the same what is up with that? Well uppin for votes!!!!!!

uppin for true votes

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yo slim had some good multies and punches were good too.....jko spit a crazy verse but it just wasnt enuff...it was close and props to both

Punches: Slim
Flow: JKO
Wordplay: Slim
Metas: Slim
Structure: JKO
Personals: Slim

Vote = Slim


go hit up my battles now

fuck wallbanger but props to slim good job man

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[QUOTE]Originally posted by An'][']-[opoLog¥
[B]Vote=Slim Lanky

he had meta's and punch lines which other guy didnt have, the other kid just had sick flow
good shit the both of u

word^^^^, poll vote-lanky