u set the rules up so u know them
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u set the rules up so u know them
checkin in...ill spit in about 10 mins.............................................. ............................
"Da show", ima "0show" you how to keystyle here//
like a "horror flick", sending "jolts" through you and inducing "fear"//
I use the "mic" like a "knife" and send my rhymes through ur heart//
Emcees "alike" lose they "life", stepping to me aint smart//
Like a "bear trap" im set ready to "bite and snap"//
step back, you'll get "cracked" and take a "dirt nap"//
your rhymes are so "weak" you couldnt make "waves" if u was da "ocean"//
you couldnt be "sick" if you were carrying the "common cold potion"//
im like a "dragon", "spittin fire" and "killin knights"//
and "eatin fake mc's", as punishment for pickin up the "mic"//
wow...exactly ten minutes
nice
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and in the first line it is "show" not "0show" my bad............................................... .....
checkin in
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U gone need votes when youve both dropped so if you hit up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...hlight=treach+p
i murdered this cat....................................
Ill Vote on this then
hey man i know you dont need to prewrite .................................................. ................
prewrite? haha naw i was jus checkin in cus i was gonna spit tom cus im tryin 2 get this crew thing settle wit some people and i will show up man chill go watch cowbow bebop im out holla
my words are "cannibalistic, eatin you alive inside, devourin your cells and vital organs causin your heart to stop, suffocate, then die"//
when your done readin my flow itll say, will KillahBebop win this battle?…..please stand by//
you "beatin me aint happenin" like "Stevie Wonder passin a eye exam and vanilla ice make a comeback and start rappin again"//
Ill "disperse a bullet in your brain" while a "bullet fragment remain at the end of your crane"//
Im "commitin a sin" battlin you cause I kno "ima murder you and ima get charged wit manslaughter"//
Ill "wrap a stone wit rope around your ankles", can you "swim in this body of water?"//
your "face in the center of attention", while "my gat leave you faceless", then ill "inject sulfuric acid in your stomach" so you can "die from your own chemical enzymes"//
while I let you "sleep 6 ft deep im singin you a fuckin nursery rhyme"//
my "punches will leave your head spinnin like Linda Blair" wit your "neck snapped and your esophagus broke"// (Linda is from the exorcist)
Im "controllin your salivary glands I dont want you to spit" so im "cloggin your widepipe causin you to choke"//
uppin fo votes (1)
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both came fuckin wack..you 2 ladies obviously got no skill
but KillahBebop_0024 killed dashow he had better punches and vocab was better
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Originally posted by Crash
both came fuckin wack..you 2 ladies obviously got no skill
but KillahBebop_0024 killed dashow he had better punches and vocab was better
^^^lets look at your record....hmm it's 1-3, you obviously a herb
thanks fo votin uppin fo mo votes (2)
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nice battle
punches..dashow..close,bebop had to many played punches...
vocab..dashow..
flow..bebop.. dashow seemed like his bars were always stretched..
multi's..bebop.. like i said b4, dashows seemed stretched to me..
2-2 after my break down, but overall better verse im going to hafta say dashowstoppa on overall better bars..
"Like a "bear trap" im set ready to "bite and snap"//
step back, you'll get "cracked" and take a "dirt nap"//"....<---- very weak lines..seemed like two fillers put togetha..punch was pretty weak also....
vote-DASHOW...
can you guys drop a vote on ma battle with killa..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=71110
^^link
yo hit dis shit up....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=71131
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uppin fo mo votes (3)
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da show hit harder, better multis punches and flow
tite battle tho, props
vote-dashow..........................................
I think that Killah came out much stronger than I expected. He had very good flow. However, The Show was more creative and had better vocab. Punches were pretty equal, maybe a little edge to the show.... He def takes it overall tho
This was very easy for me...
Showstoppa killed with much better wordplay and more complex and harder punches...
Plus, some funny shit too, (Stevie/eyes) I like laughin...
Killah came ok, but had very weak lines, especially his punches...
Time will improve ya.
Peace
Holla back...
Born to Kill vs. Pete
thanks fo votin uppin fo mo votes (4)
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Nice Battle
Punches stoppa
vocab stoppa
flow tie
Wordplay stoppa
vote stoppa
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=70868
yea wat he said^^^^^^^^^^dashow had better punches,metas,and creativity toQuote:
Originally posted by SyniKiLL
Nice Battle
Punches stoppa
vocab stoppa
flow tie
Wordplay stoppa
vote stoppa