rules are:
NO D/R
NO HATE
NO FEEDIN
NO CREW VOTES
U SPITTIN FIRST
UNLIMITED LINES
NO BITING....
1 HOUR SPITTING TIME
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rules are:
NO D/R
NO HATE
NO FEEDIN
NO CREW VOTES
U SPITTIN FIRST
UNLIMITED LINES
NO BITING....
1 HOUR SPITTING TIME
yo make it long and good aiight..cause i am typing mine now lets just see who gets theres first....then there will be no feedin
damn im startin now
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MAKE SURE U READ DIS..CAUSE IT IS SKILL AND NO FEEDIN
I take a deep breath before I beat pax with a spleen stretch//
Battling me takes three steps: Step up, get stepped on, and step off with a cleaved neck//I'm a man of method when bringin the pain, verbal darts dig in ya frame//You like a dyke that hates the pussy taste: what the fuck were you thinkin swingin this way!?//
pax, just give~it~up before you get ripped~and~cut, I spit~to~snuff, so quickly~run, before I slit~ya~gut/
Maybe when I knocked you out, you slipped~and~fu˘ked ya head up so bad that now you thinkin your spíts~is~tough/
In reality, you more pu$$y than clits~and~muffs, so I batter~them~raw, shatter~your~jaw with my battling~drawl/
I "can't stand" your rhymes, I'm paraplegic~to~Depth.. After I "beat this dick" you get a pair~of~Kleenex~and~then it's time to clean~up~this~mess!/
I'm leavin~you~"stressed" like fractures and torn~ligaments, I was born~rippin~it, you get scorned for poorly~flippin~shít/
Me, myself, and I leave~you~flat. When I ain't beatin~tracks, I'm leavin~cats bleedin from repeated~stabs!/I'll "knock you back five spaces" like deleting~tabs.. My leading~jab's been mistreating~fags since before my mom meeting~dad/ Chemically unstable when I react~with~rhymes. Dissolve your body and collapse~ya~mind/Like pissed prisoners, I'm pounding~bars, your body's found~with~scars.. "beef" with me ends "fucked up", like COWS~IN~BARS!//////
THE KILLER
Yo Damn act~I'm just going to to stand back~and laugh when ur damned craft~get devoured in venemous sand traps// The applause for ur writtens~is non existence like "armless children" giving hand~claps//U winning ? naw this cat must be nutz like getting ram~"sack"ed//
U dissappointed me with ur battle verse// you spitting with tattered wurdz~I'll splatter herbs~bodily structure & writtens to see which shatters first// Once I spat a curse~I'll stack clans~of opponents & give them the back hand// Act equipped wit the wrong~"tools" to battle BK "screw~it" you should of invested in the "crafts"~man// Leave ur back crammed~cause once I spout a script~my lyrical math surpass the computing of calculus// This bouts a jip~when I shatter ur earth & make ur mountains shift// So who u doubting kidd~my massive blows~will cave in ur raps & flows// Detach ur bones~and leave ur blood drips~as judgement~for cats who flow// like (passing colds)~I'll spread siccness~to collaspe the globe~my army of rabid souls~with heightened senses// Fake apprenctices~get slaughtered period with no~sentences// I'm speaking with emphasis~I'm venting~scriptz like heated~authors// Defeated porters~get thrown in a series of chambers with repeated torture// Cause even with a haitus~this cat's been anxious~to rip off ur face kidd// You winning this is a (negative~reaction) like "agitated" (chemical~agents)//
I've provided many ripping's~to tons of cats wit any writtens// pax ur face is more hideous than fat bytches skinny dipping//Didn't know I had jokes~I'll grab throats~until this cat chokes// and leave ur crafts broke off~key like "vocals" hitting bad~notes// Yo I'm past dope ~while u azzholes~is like fags in soap operas always given the mushy parts// & add pressure to this bytch's~walls until this "puzzy~farts"//
UR UP NOW PAX AIIGHT PEACE
This boys got less experience than virgins turned pro//
his punches all wack and his flow is so-so, lets go to death row//
wackness has penalty of death ya know, Sheps heart stopped cold//
5-0 already or so the poll goes, my win is your loss i jus stopped yo show//
U wouldnt even be considered "big" "flying on wings" like "Ruben"//
bitch calls out a vet im like move it, only word to describe the kid is stupid//
He PMn me tryna get inta me, all he be is a 500+ post newbie//
boy couldnt "spit right" if he was "leftbrained" you-see// (ya leftbrain controls ya right side)
ya know a kids wack when i spit bars cuz it means its an easy win ta tak//
kid couldnt "talk straight" for girls lack of back, plus he got no nut sack// (his girls aint got no back, he had a surgery so now he talk funny)
What inspired a name like Shepney Zany, this kids insane-see//
only thing it does is pain-me cuz it reeks of wackness & thats such a shame to-see//
bitch got less talent with text than "Michael Jackson" with "straight sex"//
shoulda gone ta school longer, maybe then u'd know how to "write hot checks"// (get it? double meaning)
boy must be battlin newbs, its the only way he got his rec, try to disprove//
in here like in chess i got betta moves, leavin him in "check" like he not sure about his boobs// (lol get it? Sheps GAY!)
boy bout to get rosted like the dude in his sig//
your verse whyd u even post-it, nobody thinks its sick//
elevate, next time get somebody to translate, cuz yo words sound like Kuwait//
no hate, yo loss was fate, i gues u bout to get irate, just rememba my name&state//
quiver in fear, filthy gona leave u shook like a new steer, i say that to call u queer//
no matter what you neva be my peer, sorry virgin ears, come back when u old enough to hear//
i just keyed this shit. Didnt take it seriously at all cuz this kid is wack. lol Im busy talkin to ppl the whole time i did this too lol.
bitch u prewrote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
nuh dawg hhahahaha why u think dat just because it is good?
dont try to make people think dat..so u can get votes......
DONT BE STUPID FOOL
peace uppin fo votes
ive read some of your other battles and there is no way u wrote that in 20 minutes. its not that good, its just not somethin u write in 20 minutes
Vote goes to pax even tho I cant vote dawgs
he just was better over all
Krazy kid u've elivated since I've been to this ssite, but keep elivatin if u wana get sumwehre
Can ya'll peep this......
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...315#post668315
thanks peace out boys
wtf u talkin bout fool i aint krazy kid....hahahaha i think i talkin some shit man....dis is elite..so go
uppin 4 votes~1
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upppin for some vote 2 ppl...dont be stupid pax i wrote than more than 20 minutes...i aint a to finger typer like u pax.....
peace
UPPIN FO VOTES..1
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sik battle but i think shep took it by a hair wit his punches they were a lil harder props 2 both tho im out holla
peep mine
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...347#post671347
sik battle but i think shep took it by a hair wit his punches they were a lil harder props 2 both tho im out holla
peep mine
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...347#post671347
sik battle but i think shep took it by a hair wit his punches they were a lil harder props 2 both tho im out holla
peep mine
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...347#post671347
Nice battle.......................................Shep won this....................................he had harder punches and better flow...................................1
shepney took this battle with punches and he kept a consistent flow.....wasnt a bad verse either, come check out the execs and hit up the try outs again dawg.....
+1 shepney
^^Umm it wont let me poll vote, it says i aint authorized to access that page or something.....i dunno whats up with that but....
ah well...
p'z
close battle, almost a hard one to call, so I gotta break this down...
FLOW=BOTH
PUNCHES=SHEPNEY ZANY
WORDPLAY=BOTH
METAS/MULTIES=BOTH
OVERALL=SHEPNEY ZANY
VOTE=SHEPNEY ZANY
Shepney had this with far betta flow and multi's betta wordplay just aswell, there wasnt much wordplay there atall really....
Good battle but im votin zaney...
Can you guys check my battles with meks and d-meca7 please cheers......
man u havent poll voted so plz pol vote
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Yo man im not registered in here yet thats why man, it wont let me poll, how do I register?????????????????????????????????????????? ????????
^this cat sure knows how to vote...Quote:
Originally posted by Audo
close battle, almost a hard one to call, so I gotta break this down...
FLOW=BOTH
PUNCHES=SHEPNEY ZANY
WORDPLAY=BOTH
METAS/MULTIES=BOTH
OVERALL=SHEPNEY ZANY
VOTE=SHEPNEY ZANY
WORD...
props to both
peace
Shep didnt have punches... He talked about what he was gonna do, he didnt talk that much about how bad i am. He had like 6 punches in the whole thing. Wordplay isnt good if it isnt part of a punch. Yall is herbs. Man I keyed and bullshitted this verse and still had a better "battle" verse than him. I had a few personals too, he had none. Where did yall learn to vote. and anonymiz, what was your vote, there was no explanation givin dawg, yall suck, and i aint sayin that cuz im losin, im sayin that cuz yall dont know how to vote.
Pax u a theif why u still 9mm avatar dats some pussy shit
my vote goes to shep fo harder punches and better disses
yo pax...wats ur problem scared cause u losing like a bitch..be a man and exept dat u gettin merked..hahahaha...look who is wack now...homie....pz
i think shepny barely got this......everything was about the same except for i was feelin sheps punches a little bit more...........shep gets my vote
Vote-Shep
shit forgot this was elite and none of the mods like me so ic ant vote in elite............................................. .................................................. ................
why are u talkin shit bitch? I donnt know any vets that dont consider u wack. U have 6 punches in your whole damn verse and they sayin u got tons of them. I know how to vote and i notice all the ppl votin in here are not that great. U a pussy Shep, u ducked ur own callout fo 2days so im pretty sure u prewrote. I also think some of this shit is DR and ima investigate cuz i know my verse is betta than yours. Punches is 90% of a battle and Personals 90% of punches. I had way betta punches than u and all my wordplay was used as punches yours wasnt. All u do is rhyme, i attacked. ill give u that ya flow was betta but that was it. What the fuck am i discussin this wit u? u a herb, and this "bar" shit aint my style. Im comin wit lines next time. Ill show u how a real Vet battles.
And Dr J, who the fuck are u? how do u steal and Avatar that is all over the fuckin net? u a herb too, u dont know nothin bout battle sites. This Avvy been around fo a long ass time bitch.
ohh well uppin dis aiight
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ohh well uppin dis aiight
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ohh well uppin dis aiight
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shep got this one, had better punches than pax, the rest was all a tie though, won by a hair line dawg... props.
vote: shep
-PlaGuE
kool battle both of yall but i think shep took this one, i think his punches hit a lil harder
much respect to both
uppin this for shepney.....
Tight battle but i think shepney took this one, more consistency, and more funny.....
I won't poll vote though......
Pce
well uppin dis aiight
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yo cammunition no freeposting man u aint even aloud in elite cause u aint aiight..so if u dont wan be banned i suggest u dont do dat again
yo pax were the fuk are u..dont wanna up it incase u lose......
MAN U A BITCH FA SHO...STARTS ACTIN LIKE A GURL CAUSE HE LOSIN
[QUOTE]Originally posted by DaShowStoppa2
[B]sik battle but i think shep took it by a hair wit his punches they were a lil harder props 2 both tho im out holla
word^^^