5 or 6 bars
u spit first
no c h dr votes
ill spit asap after you im out holla
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5 or 6 bars
u spit first
no c h dr votes
ill spit asap after you im out holla
not pre-written...jus finished fo' he got 'round to settin up..
showstoppa2
May B'a Showstoppa But in our Thread Dat Line aint gon'do ya Proper//
Wrek'd'up~My Taktik's Lethaly Infect n Drop Ya Like Chain smokin'Pill Poper's//
Hope'Ya ready for werk'cus if ya ain't wantin merk'd dere B'Sum dik's Ya gon'Hafta Jerk
Feelin odd'numba's driftin in~two'loss columns//
Cus'Im De'feetin u like toe Nail's wit no'bottems'//
My~lines flow swift like dey'B Str8 connected'wit 2 net-murk'd cable modems'//
I tell'em voter's hold'em...I wanna see dis Kat'try~be'fo' ya'll rip his scrotum//
Yo'it'd be a Hobby of Ur's Dawg~lemme'Draw'u a conlusion of dis War-we-b'at//
I Leave'witta trail a blood'in da Black~like a bitch on da rag who'B~Insomniac//
yo...read my lips
Holdin ya Respectiv'ness to a krew i wouldn't Pay'Attention 2 if dey had Nas'on dere lists//
Beyond Reachable Empire,Hell naw~I ran wit ya Leader-n-was only'8-miles'away from ya bitch'd up~Scripts//
aight check it
Ill send a "bullet through your dome" so your "brain" can be "blessed wit the Lords Holiness"//
Ill make your "clavicle and shoulder blade dislocate" to "relieve your tension and stress"// (collar bone and shoulder)
im "dangerous" like a "rattle snake wit poisonous fangs of venom" that would "devour your flesh"//
Ill "stab you in your belly so many times" youll "look like a red human mesh"//
Ill "put a bullet through your throat" leavin you "hopeless and air gaspin"//
then ill "stab you through your ribs" makin your "lungs distort", then "collapse in"//
Ill "gauge out your eyes" and "stab you in the stomach" so I "can to see" if you can "digest stainless steel or not"//
Ill "leave you peacefully sleepin 6 feet deep" and your "body decomposin wit bacteria and the odor of rot"//
Ill "shoot you up" in your "spinal cord paralyzin" you from the "neck down"//
you "couldnt afford livin as a prostitute at minimum wage" so I put you on the "corner of the busy streets of downtown"//
my "punches would knock-you-dead" and leave you "lost and rewindin your own words" like a "sound resemblin a stutter"//
my "machete will cut you smooth" like a "butter knife cuttin into butter"//
Ill "leave your brain on pause and hold" and your "body unconscious and sleepin"//
Ill "put the Western Nile virus into your blood stream", do you "feel anything from within"//
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i thoguht carsont jet ook dat one
dashowstoppa ya rhymes are da smae...u quote em when they dont even link....im not feelin dat verse..sum lines where aite but i dont no how u only got 2 losses.....u doin good for ya self
but carsont jet got dis one by a deuce
Carson I couldn't even feel your flow man and your punches were weak, Da show stoppa got this I felt all of his shit and I think he was better over all
yah i gotta agree^^^i feel that your verses are very similar...but theyre good verses none the less, but i think carson got you by a smidge...good wordplay from both, and good punches, but i think cj's punches hit a little harder...vote=cj
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i meant i agreed wit youngQuote:
Originally posted by KillahBebop_0024
yah i gotta agree^^^i feel that your verses are very similar...but theyre good verses none the less, but i think carson got you by a smidge...good wordplay from both, and good punches, but i think cj's punches hit a little harder...vote=cj
yo seriously i think showstoppa got dis wid punches and flow...carson jet i wasn't really feelin ur flow too much....
vote- da show stoppa
hit my battle up in front lines wid anonymiz jones
I think carsonjet got this, better punches and good flow, and good wordplay.......
VOTE=CARSONJET
i wasnt really feelin ya all that much on this one CJ i think in an aspect da showstoppa took this it just doesnt seem like you came as hard as im accustomed to you doin CJ
Vote - Da Show Stoppa
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stoppa took this with punches and disses,
but one thing that is wack as fuck about your bars is...u use quoation marks when they aint necessary, its like ur pointing out bits in your line that dont link with anything thats to come...thats wack dude,
but carsons dint really flow that well, the flow was really choppy, but stoppa still took this, p'z
+1da show stoppa
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Yo Yo DaShowStoppa gets this by a hair......purely cuz his flow was betta, the rest was about the same to be honest, Carson's flow looks sloppy and is hard to follow....
Plus this line from stoppa was classic....
Ill send a "bullet through your dome" so your "brain" can be "blessed wit the Lords Holiness"//
Peace...good battle....