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Lets Go....
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No Crew Votes or Hate Votes
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Lets Go....
the same old school style,bit it off Brooklyn thats evident...
fuck your prewrittens i'll put em in a state of Irrelevance.....
herbs in this, ever since the Alliance formed RB lost credibility..
im you Evolved, theres no way you can win, youre "Not As Ill As Me"...
couldnt see a 'V' in this battle as if you lost your _ison..
punchin you in the eye so you can see what your verse was missin...
im kiddin, you are actually good, I give you your props..
in fact this thread was quite ill, til you decided to drop....
everything youre not, i know youve had enough now, youre through...
Brook 1st and now you too,last of a dieing breed..and i just killed you...
*verse late.. my AOL crashed thaz y im on a different account*
OK you call Brook out and get beat.. now you try me? wha u stupid?
Spit To Kill I Know You Felt My Afflictions, So You Copyed, Lil Wanksta Starin' Who Need Help
Dezyir.. Ill?, Your Just A Self-Contradiction, Like A Gangsta-Wearin'-A-Seat-Belt?//
Dipstick Walks With A Smile, As This Kid Really Think He Nicest,
Well You Not, Rappin' Whilst You Askin Are You Hot? ....Hell No ........Heat Rises!/
Never Tame With Hits I Kill You And Blaze Your Kids For The Craze You Spit,
'Cos On The Real You Wouldn't Be The G.O.A.T.* If Your Nickname Was "Kid"/ ***
In Regime By Ass Kissin The Whole Facilty Now Wonderin "Why Dont The Crew Wana Battle With Me?" :(
Your Followers Are All The Wackest Emcees, Thats Why You Like "Why These Half Wits Actin' Like Me?"/
Try And Elevate With Stedy Steps But Like Innocent Inmates Your Sentences Aren't Ready Yet,
Kill You Then Il "Rob Your Manhood", Nah Squash That Cos Im Not Getin' Done For "Petty Theft"!/
...and that...is word.
**** G.O.A.T. means Greatest Of All Time
~~~~And A "Kid" is a baby goat
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by the way...me vs. Brook is 2-2 dunny...
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Blah. .
Dezyir came ok, a couple nice lines, opener was nice, good personal about Brooklyn's style, follow up was ok, Visions line was pretty original, lmao at 'was kinda ill. .till you dropped!' that was good, dieing breed line could of been worded better but not bad. .
Soldier...your opener was a little weird, the bar seemed stretched to far, threw me on the flow, multi's were a little forced too, punch wasnt too strong for an opener, heat rises was a good concept, could of been worded a lot better though, goat line is played, has been since LL Cool J dropped that album of his, lol, multi's were ok in the set up line though, next bar was stretetched too far, flow was off, punch was kinda weak IMO, petty theft line was aight, prolly the best in your verse actually. .
Vote: Dezyir
Ehhh, he had less played lines, and a couple standouts, the personal was pretty effective, i wasnt feeling Soldiers verse apart from his finisher, his verse seemed keyed up to me. Dezyir was just more consistant so i voted for him. Nice battle. .
I said no hate votes......... you were in a thread talkin about how you gone merk me and shit?
get out of here with that hate shit b4 i report your ass
uppin............................................. ..............................................
I thought soldeir killed it desiyr seemed to basic
Both had good shit i just think soldiers had more direction with his
like to see another round of this
nice battle guys VOTE= Soldier
Hit he link up and vote
Vote Discounted, Due To The 750+ Posts Rule - Camarac
750 posts.....
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Well 1 d.r vote... and 1 under 750
uppin
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ghlight=vortex
go to pages 4,5,6 in there and look who im beefing with...or dont and ill just tell you....Camarac. he doesnt like me either..
Imma give it to Soilder.
Dude cam with the better offensive, he started off a little weird bu recovered half way through. Most of his shit mad me laugh to. That goat shit was good.
D-You seemed like you were trying to diss someone else or some other crew and not concentrating on your opponet enough. Your spit was alirght but your aim was horrible.
Vote-Soilder
Aight guess my opener was kinda off.. it had a nice flow tho if you look but shit shudda been cut shorter I GET YA
uhh.. u deleted his poll vote?????
what can people not fucking read? 750 posts to vote my god....thats two people who are fucking stupid...735 is not 750...anyways, good battle Soldier..
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i hate how soldier is a vet and always makes people spit first-then feeds offa them-pisses me off.....but still had he gone first-his verse was way betta than dezyir's....no hard feeling-u got ripped....
vote-soldier
uppin
stick to the rules tho.. over 750posts!!!!
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Overall Nice battle
Wordplay:Soldier
Metaphors: Soldier
Punches: Both
Personals: Dezyir
creativity: Soldier
Vote= Soldier
Soldier cameout Harder...
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OK last uppin
and Dez looks like he is scared to up in this battle
please vote on this!
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Vote=soldier i say he had bettefr worldplay and certainly more punches.....and multi's vote= soldier........................................... .................................................. .......................
Aight... don't be mad dez but he handed you your ass just with his opener. You came way too basic this time. He had way more content. I was feelin his shit more fa sho... sorry dawg, chalk this one up for experience points I guess.
BTW... dez is a F.A.G.
Vote=Soldier