ight man.. keystyle battle
15-30 minutes
10 lines
no hate
no beef
no d/r
no crew
you know tha rules.. - 0 ne
Check in b4 u start.. g'luck
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ight man.. keystyle battle
15-30 minutes
10 lines
no hate
no beef
no d/r
no crew
you know tha rules.. - 0 ne
Check in b4 u start.. g'luck
heres my check in.. g'luck bro.......................
.................................................. ................ - 0 n e
checkin in......................gud luk dawg
peace............................................. .........fiori
FUCK!!!!.. I lost everything.. I was on my last fuckin line...damnit, ight looks like i have to start over.. fuck... - 0 ne
yo thug can ya poll that vote on my battle wiv mr legend, soz 2 free-post but ya 4got!!! thanx, i'll hit this wen its done!!!!!!!!
~Second Time Through~
..: Warmin-Up :..
England? .. travels europe, kills jews for sports.. a Nazi of Sorts..Embarressing amount of torque, cuttin you into four-fourths tha way he Beats-Kids//
Hes Compete-Less.. knockin him wit punches teeth-less.. get him ~pissed~ like fraternity Toilet Seat Lids//
N.Y.G... Lost count of how many i merked.. Lets just say i left ~Plenty-Stranded~.. Battled ya'll so much, im on tha Invitation-List//
Gave tha mic to you, put up tha merkin and left you ~Empty-Handed~.. thanks for tha offer but ure Sindications-Missed//
..: ~Delivery~ :..
Stomped him rounded.. like cylindrical criminals' grounded.. He's just part of tha crowd crowded.. as soon as he found-shit he Impounds-It//
Brown-nosin Brown-script.. your text is about as bad as your audios.. just check his Soundclick//
You Nice? Nice enough to get sliced, out priced.. kids' so repetitive he has tha same guy in his signature Twice//
Jesus Christ, did you just read-this-right? Bet your mic that if you got payed to be wack.. you'd be Set-For-Life//
..: Time to End this Bitch :..
Losin = Quick Cash.. you aint on my level, you need a Lift-Pass, agreedthat me n you are a definite mix-match, you took tha Missed-Path//
I've leavin you outta Hab-It-Tat.. off tha niche-pad.. you tryin to win against me? How Said-is-that?.. Just here to "Grind" Fiori's Bitch-Ass//
Finally.. 2nd time through ..
sum hot shit thug whyte i like it, i will vote wen fiori has spit his shit,
nice punches and shit tho i like it,
holla if ya hear meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
aight, its all good but woteva......
yo, yo
just like the "rectum", your "shit" is "behind" my Stardom, Thug Whyte's just a "dick", but difference is, when he sees "pussy", he doesn't get "Hardened"//1
just like a "virgins minge" you hurt and cringe cos my style is "very Tight", i agree bitch, you are "below" the "average" stereo type,(check his sig)//2
congratulations on your hektik record, thats wot u get for battlin newb's, i've "lost" my temper on you now bitch, imma make sure you "lose"//3
i discharge hits like an out of control magnum spraying-bullets, only i aim on target just like my cum does when im pleasin you mother to the fullest//4
why the fuck have you called yourselves elements elite to gain respect, you aint foolin no-one bitch, even if we were all wrecked//5
anyone can text there shit but have you ever held a mic?, its sweet gettin peeps to help you on battles, cos we know you can't read or write//6
wanting me to ride with the elements, shit, i'd rather be with s club, i know why you battled me its so you could get my shit easier seen as your a "Fiori memorabilia" collecter//7
you votin for dw but he's in da same crew as you are?, yo, that shit is what we call dick rider, u gonna get barred//8
ha ha, what a pussy, i've more meat in peas that are mushy, claimin that your gonna merk me dead, dawg, don't push me!!!!//9
beat fiori? nah, don't think so, your goin to "jail" cos i'm so dope, thing is, that'd be helpin you cos dw told me that you love to "drop the soap"//10
bit half assed but did the shit quick...........my bad for the delay
PEACE............................................. .....................................FIORI
just like the "rectum", your "shit" is "behind" my Stardom, Thug Whyte's just a "dick", but difference is, when he sees "pussy", he doesn't get "Hardened"//1
Execellent OPENER, nice analogy
just like a "virgins minge" you hurt and cringe cos my style is "very Tight", i agree bitch, you are "below" the "average" stereo type,(check his sig)//2
TIGHT SHIY
congratulations on your hektik record, thats wot u get for battlin newb's, i've "lost" my temper on you now bitch, imma make sure you "lose"//3
This verse needs word...Its a personal, but didnt hit hard
i discharge hits like an out of control magnum spraying-bullets, only i aim on target just like my cum does when im pleasin you mother to the fullest//4
A little played wit basic words, but nice analogy
why the fuck have you called yourselves elements elite to gain respect, you aint foolin no-one bitch, even if we were all wrecked//5
This is kind of weak
anyone can text there shit but have you ever held a mic?, its sweet gettin peeps to help you on battles, cos we know you can't read or write//6
this is a so-so verse
wanting me to ride with the elements, shit, i'd rather be with s club, i know why you battled me its so you could get my shit easier seen as your a "Fiori memorabilia" collecter//7
cool verse
you votin for dw but he's in da same crew as you are?, yo, that shit is what we call dick rider, u gonna get barred//8
excellent hit, excellent personal
ha ha, what a pussy, i've more meat in peas that are mushy, claimin that your gonna merk me dead, dawg, don't push me!!!!//9
JUST A FILLER LINE
beat fiori? nah, don't think so, your goin to "jail" cos i'm so dope, thing is, that'd be helpin you cos dw told me that you love to "drop the soap"//10
Played out line
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England? .. travels europe, kills jews for sports.. a Nazi of Sorts..Embarressing amount of torque, cuttin you into four-fourths tha way he Beats-Kids//
Excellent opening as well. Good multies wit ryhming
Hes Compete-Less.. knockin him wit punches teeth-less.. get him ~pissed~ like fraternity Toilet Seat Lids//
DAM...GOOD as wordplay and use of multies
N.Y.G... Lost count of how many i merked.. Lets just say i left ~Plenty-Stranded~.. Battled ya'll so much, im on tha Invitation-List//
[b]seems ta be just a filler[/]
Gave tha mic to you, put up tha merkin and left you ~Empty-Handed~.. thanks for tha offer but ure Sindications-Missed//
???
..: ~Delivery~ :..
Stomped him rounded.. like cylindrical criminals' grounded.. He's just part of tha crowd crowded.. as soon as he found-shit he Impounds-It//
DAM--This hit hard as hell wit good use of words and multies
Brown-nosin Brown-script.. your text is about as bad as your audios.. just check his Soundclick//
nice outro from the last verse and flow from one verse to another
You Nice? Nice enough to get sliced, out priced.. kids' so repetitive he has tha same guy in his signature Twice//
DAM---Excellent personal and hits in this verse
Jesus Christ, did you just read-this-right? Bet your mic that if you got payed to be wack.. you'd be Set-For-Life//
Nice use of MULTIES
..: Time to End this Bitch :..
Losin = Quick Cash.. you aint on my level, you need a Lift-Pass, agreedthat me n you are a definite mix-match, you took tha Missed-Path//
DAM--Multies combined wit wordplay again
I've leavin you outta Hab-It-Tat.. off tha niche-pad.. you tryin to win against me? How Said-is-that?.. Just here to "Grind" Fiori's Bitch-Ass//
okay finisher
BOTTOM LINE---
Both of yall had EXCELLENT openings. FIORI, your shit is sick but it didnt rhyme. Ya worked so hard on the wordplay that ya forgot about the flow....
I VOTE THUG WHITE cause he maintained a flow with great wordplay and multies that keep me saying DAM....
UPPIN THIS SHIT...................................
.................................................. ............... - 0 n e
Vote: Thug Whyte
His verse just seemed to edge out on flow,
wordplay and punches were consistant, a
couple original lines here and there, strong
personal at the beginning, opened the verse
up pretty nicely. Fiori came ok, again, a decent
flow, consistant with the punches but i felt
a lot of his were played concepts or just not
worded strong enough, that made them come
off weak.
Not a bad battle, your both pretty even but i thought Whyte edged it out. : )
UPPIN this again.......................................
.................................................. ........... - 0 n e
yo once again thug came through and took his opponent out
i loked the flow of fiori better but thug came wit harder punches and creativity so therefore
vote=thug whyte