A'ight herez da rulz:
5 Barz or Ten Linez
No Crew Votez
No Hata Votez
No D/R Votez
No Feedin'
Spittin' at da same time...no "u spit firs' shi'"..
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A'ight herez da rulz:
5 Barz or Ten Linez
No Crew Votez
No Hata Votez
No D/R Votez
No Feedin'
Spittin' at da same time...no "u spit firs' shi'"..
Check in...
A'ight?
i 'fold' ur 'body' like 'pants to a crease'//
'transfer' ur 'body fluids' out until ur 'body' is 'dried up' and 'deplete'//
remark the last wordz of a killa buried inside me/
'I' have ur 'balls' cut off put them in ur 'eye sockets' so this bitch can 'see'/
about what im 'sayin sprayin' nothing but 'snipers and rifles'/
'barbarically' remove his 'kidneys' and other 'organs' so vital//
'killin u softly' like 'Lauren hill' with these 'words'//
'fuck wit me dog' u be in the 'dirt' with 'earthworms'//
i mutate ya 'body' like 'mutations of chromosomes'//
I put 15 bullets to ya 'head' 'split ya dome'//
alil quick spit cuz i gotta bounce
Nice Verse Ill drop a fair vote after both yall drop
vote on this please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=67808
nice verse
can i get some voters on str8 jacket vs twistabill
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Nice vs dawg can I get some votes on this battle below? thanks niggas
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=67515
Herez da rematch, dawgz...
$Bar 1$
Ma "words" are jus' lyrically "absurd"/ ridiculous bu' ingeniously "heard"/ when I spi', I'm da vet, u tha "herb"/ Ma rythmz flow, they fly off like a fuckin' "bird"...//
$Bar 2$
I I spit in ya'll "faces"/ ma punchlines leave ya so metephorically bloody, ya'll need hyperbolic "braces"/ "disgraces" of RB showni' they "racist"/ jus' fo sayin' 'nigga' gets dem a lyrical "facelift"/ tha list 'o katz merk'd worn on ma wrist like a "bracelet"/ Vertz r only honored ta face me, "face it!"//
$Bar 3$
Hypnotic's like a lil' "bitch"/ He's mo fuckin' homo-sexual than "Lilo and Stitch"/ I've killed dis faggot mo times in this rhyme alon, than da Godfather killed a "snitch"/ Hypnotic's jus' a disease, hangin' 'roun like an uncurable "itch"/ Hypnotic merk'd me befo, but I've flipped da lyrical "switch"//
$Bar 4$
I myself got ma rhymes "lifted"/ Like crack, ma rhymez get ya'll niggaz "addicted"/ when I unleash ma rhymes, I unleash da "wicked"/ I've jus' left Hypnotci lyrically "evicted"...//
$Bar 5$
Yo time is up, it's "null"/ I've surpass' ya, yo limit is "full"/ Betta get suckin' now, bitch, 'cause Ima strung like a fuckin' "bull"!//
Good battle, dawg...
UPPIN(1)^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
both wer real tight
hypnotic always comes with some nice punches
gangsta one eally improved from tha last one i read
i was feeling gangstas flow a little more on this one
very tough vote
VOTE gangsta
can i get some honest votes on str8 jacket vs twistabill
Yo, thx dawg...don't sleep UPPIN(2)^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
nice verses by both, but I can't vote cause me and Gangsta One is in the same crew...Gangsta One, drop your verse for the NYG Anthem in our sub-forum.
check out my battle and drop an honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=67413
Both good
Gangsta out classed Him
in wordplay and dissing
Good battle
vote= Gangsta
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=67246
nice shit from Gangsta...u had some tight ass rhymes homie....and Hypnotic....work on rhyming more...and u'll have this shit down pat too aight....anyway...
Best Line from Hypnotic:
nice shit here....Lauren Hill line was nice...lol....Quote:
about what im 'sayin sprayin' nothing but 'snipers and rifles'/
'barbarically' remove his 'kidneys' and other 'organs' so vital//
'killin u softly' like 'Lauren hill' with these 'words'//
'fuck wit me dog' u be in the 'dirt' with 'earthworms'//
i mutate ya 'body' like 'mutations of chromosomes'//
I put 15 bullets to ya 'head' 'split ya dome'//
Best Line from Gangsta One:
ur opener and closer was weak...but ur body of ur verse was pretty ill...nice punches all over...tight lines...and u rhymes mad ass shit...Quote:
I I spit in ya'll "faces"/ ma punchlines leave ya so metephorically bloody, ya'll need hyperbolic "braces"/ "disgraces" of RB showni' they "racist"/ jus' fo sayin' 'nigga' gets dem a lyrical "facelift"/ tha list 'o katz merk'd worn on ma wrist like a "bracelet"/ Vertz r only honored ta face me, "face it!"//
$Bar 3$
Hypnotic's like a lil' "bitch"/ He's mo fuckin' homo-sexual than "Lilo and Stitch"/ I've killed dis faggot mo times in this rhyme alon, than da Godfather killed a "snitch"/ Hypnotic's jus' a disease, hangin' 'roun like an uncurable "itch"/ Hypnotic merk'd me befo, but I've flipped da lyrical "switch"//
$Bar 4$
I myself got ma rhymes "lifted"/ Like crack, ma rhymez get ya'll niggaz "addicted"/ when I unleash ma rhymes, I unleash da "wicked"/ I've jus' left Hypnotci lyrically "evicted"...//
Overall: i think Gangsta One took this....nothing hard on Hypnotic...just work on a lil' more complexity with ur verses...u nah mean homie....keep the shit up u two...
BREAKDOWN
Multis - Gangsta One
Vocab - Gangsta One
Metas - Gangsta One
WordPlay - Gangsta One
Flow - Hypnotic (Gangsta ur barz are too strung out)
RhymeScheme - Gangsta One
Creativity - Gangsta One
Complexity - Gangsta One
Violence - Gangsta One
Vote - Gangsta One
peace
4:20
A'ight thx dawgz UPPIN(3)^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
COME ON DAWGZ DON' SLEEP ON DIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
yo Gangsta One, could you drop the final vote on this battle, CREW VOTES count on it cause it is intercrew, but I am up 4-0, could you drop a vote?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=67413
hmmmmm.....
suprise win by gangsta....
looks like Hypno just took him 2 lightly on this one....
the boy had better punches and shit....
dope yo
uppin 4 votes
hit this up and i'll hit urz up................................................ .........................................
Yo, ppl sleepin' on dis dawg.......oh well wat can a nigga do.......good battle............................................ ...............................
indeed............................................ ..................................................
this was a tyte battle i think hypnotic came wit the punches and flow gangsta one shit was dope too
vote=hypnotic
check my battle wit xl
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=dashowstoppa2
Damn , dis was tight all around , a great effort from both corners. But I don't know , call me Crazy , But I thought Hynotic Flowed better , it all rolled off the tongue for me, meanwhile Gansta peice was as tight as a virgin pussy on prom night, The punches were even , but like I said before , I thought Hypno had better flow , so he gets my vote.
Nice Battle !!! Props to ya Both !!!
CrazyE
thaxs yall
still uppin numba 2................................................. .................................................. ............................................
letz keep this battle close and excitin........................................... .................................................. ...............................................
i thoguht hyptotic..had sum nice ass lines this shit was close as fuk....but hyptotic took it by a hair off a shaved vagina.....
vote hyptotic..wow wtf ya namme i cant spell it..
props gangsta one uve elevated since last battle i saw u in..u doin aite..man..u prolly goina win this but u came hard..but sumthin diidnt flow rite.the intro was sik.the herb line an the vetr shit.was tite..i gotta go blaze..alte
word he explained it all^^^^Quote:
Originally posted by SmokaJoka666
nice shit from Gangsta...u had some tight ass rhymes homie....and Hypnotic....work on rhyming more...and u'll have this shit down pat too aight....anyway...
Best Line from Hypnotic:
nice shit here....Lauren Hill line was nice...lol....
Best Line from Gangsta One:
ur opener and closer was weak...but ur body of ur verse was pretty ill...nice punches all over...tight lines...and u rhymes mad ass shit...
Overall: i think Gangsta One took this....nothing hard on Hypnotic...just work on a lil' more complexity with ur verses...u nah mean homie....keep the shit up u two...
BREAKDOWN
Multis - Gangsta One
Vocab - Gangsta One
Metas - Gangsta One
WordPlay - Gangsta One
Flow - Hypnotic (Gangsta ur barz are too strung out)
RhymeScheme - Gangsta One
Creativity - Gangsta One
Complexity - Gangsta One
Violence - Gangsta One
Vote - Gangsta One
peace
4:20
Tight Battle ya'll
Hypnotic had better punches and better creativity
Gangsta had betta flo and structure
it was real close
but im a have ta go with hypnotic cuz he hit da hardest
VOTE-Hypnotic
BOTH HAD NICE PUNCHES BUT HYNOTIC HAD GOOD COMPLEXITY AND VOCAB
GANGSTA ONE HAD NICE WORDPLAY AND CONSISTENCY AND BOTH HAD A SORT OF NICE FLOW BUT WHEN IT COMES DOWN TO HUMOR I THINK HYP TOOK IT, JUST MY OPINION
HIT THIS UP WITH A FAIR VOTE: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=67045
APPRECIATE IT
one more vote yall uppin this shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!