Aight, here are the rules:
10lines max
No feeding, d/r votes etc.
First to 5 wins, 5-0=KO
U spit first, I'll spit when ur done
It's due Sunday I guess, but spit when ur ready and good luck
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Aight, here are the rules:
10lines max
No feeding, d/r votes etc.
First to 5 wins, 5-0=KO
U spit first, I'll spit when ur done
It's due Sunday I guess, but spit when ur ready and good luck
Checking in, if u don't spit by 11:30 eastern time, i'll probably have 2 key something 2morrow, I hope u spit 2nite though.
Checkin' In...
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Aite... sorry i took so long, i was a lil bit busy, don't vote on this battle if you don't get my double meanings or don't understand some words... thanks.
DaIllistRebel couldn't stop my "reign" of punches... if he started spittin' sunshine/(double)
He calls himself "ill" 'cuz his tumor's malign... after this battle, all that'll be left, is-a-chalk-out-line/
I know you're 'bout swallowin', but this loss... you're gonna take-it-on-the-chin/(double)
Your chances of beatin' me, resemble those of a Muslim-eatin'-pork... NEVER GONNA HAPPEN/
The inhumane way i'm bout to murder this "dawg", you'll swear i battle like a "vet"/(double)
You'd think i'm spittin' fire the way i'm makin' this kid sweat, i'll hit em so hard... i'll-cripple-his-silhouette/
Rebel will never get a contract, only "scouts" lookin' for him... are tryna-sell-'em-cookies/
This thread must be school, the way Rebel's playin' "hooky", isn't well known on RB... like NBA rookies/
Rebel's real name must be Samuel L. Jackson... the ways he's always-gettin'-the-"shaft"/(double)
This kid is duckin'-n-dodgin' my punches more then an army draft, you're too elementary... like arts-n-crafts/
Iight, good drop. Here is my verse. If u don't get the personals or the multis, please don't vote....
You'll never be able 2 implement, it's evident, saying ur rhymes are "wack" is a "compliment" I'll leave u suffering with torment//
A win for me, u can not prevent, it's like I put "cologne" on my rhymes, it's only the beginning, but the "smell of victory" is so "pleasant"//
Ur rhymes have not fully grown, ur chances of winning this battle are smaller than that "mascot from Honey Comb"//
I'll leave u stoned, my flow is "steady" like a "metronome", a win would never "lean towards ur way" even if u were writting in "Rome"!// (Leaning Tower Of Pizza)
With my rhymes, I intrigue, battlin a cat that's way below my league//
Let me proceed, if this was the game of "Chess" I would beat u with the tactic of "Blitzkrieg"!// (U can win with that in chess in 5 moves and "5" bars, get it?)
This kid has no framework, I'm writtin this verse with one very little smerk//
U wanna talk about "arts and crafts"? My verse is a "verbal picture" of u getting "merked"// (lol)
But let's serious, I'll leave u delirious cause ur rhymes are so hideous//
Dawg, ur an "enigma", u ever winning a battle will be mysterious and "ambiguous"//
There may be some spelling errors, I dunno cause I g2 bounce.
Um... you fed of my "arts-n-crafts" line... and you didn't use my name right... but let's get some votes.
nvm....i cant vote.......ambiguous is in my sub-crew and i dont want no hate.....good verses for newbies....if u r newbies.....
Can we get some votes in here? (#1)
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vote honest on my battle and i'll vote honest here
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...threadid=66363
Uppin for votes(#2)
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Uppin for votes (#3)
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Ummm, if the arts and crafts line is played out, I have never seen it, I've seen ur line about the arts and crafts written be4 and I did use ur name right.
Ambiguous=unclear meaning u ever winning a battle would be unclear 2 me, so I think I used it right.
Neway, good battle and Uppin............................................( #1)
And btw, when u said "fed", u meant just that I used it in my verse, I only used it as a personal.
And 2 Young P, yeah I am pretty new but thanx 4 the feedback.
Good battle....
i ain't saying shit 'cause ambiguous is the newest in my crew
just wanted 2 see how he spits.....
good shit from both of you....
funny how the only 2 people 2 hit this up can't vote....
figures....................
ok heres how i see it...
ambiguous had some pretty good flow and some solid punches....i wasnt getting the (double) after some of the lines, but whatever. You came solid and ended solid as well.
When i read rebels first verse, i felt like this battle was over...had nice wordplay and good flow....but it kinda fell apart from there. Nothing else came close to his opener. The fact that some bars were 2 long lines and others were kinda short didnt help the overall verse flow as well. But solid effort...
Anyways, vote = ambiguous....and TRY to figure out what ur name means before callin someone out on it. peace.
check out my battle.........................put in some input...........
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=66649
Aite, 1-0, let's get some more votes...
I thought people could get the double meanings easy... but i guess not, i'll explain em.
1st Double="reign" like my "reign" like a king's time in position, or like a "rain" of punches, and he couldn't stop it with sunshine...
2nd Double=ok... first the "swallowin" that can mean like "swallow your pride and accept the loss" or as in "swallow semen", and the second part... "take it on the chin" that's a term like, just accept the loss also... or, it can mean like... instead of "swallowin the semen"... he's gonna take it on the chin.
3rd Double="vet"... it can stand for either, veteran in how i flow so tite... or it can be "veternarian"... cuz ima murder this "dawg".
4th Double="gettin' the shaft" that is a sayin as in, always getting the losing end or whatever... or "gettin' the shaft" as in shaft of the cock.
Ambiguous=having more then one interpertation.
^That's my definition of ambiguous... that's why i say he didn't use it right... but i guess i'm wrong, thanks for the vote.
good punches nice floow ok werd play by AMB basic most out the verse from DA ILL not enough persionals n his punches didnt hit that hard nice multis from AMB also
good battle
my vote AMB
2-0...
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Iight, thanx 4 voting every1 Uppin............................................. ...................(2)
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Yo killabee, wtf was that? If ur g2 write somethin on the battle, then I would accept that, but dots???????? Damn w/e
Upppppppppppppppppppppppppin...................... .................................................. ...............................(3) (100characters)
This is whack... just cuz we're newbies... we don't get voted on...
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I'm just a guy tryin to make a name for himself... but no one is votin... votes would help.
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yea...Vote-AmbiguousQuote:
Originally posted by Solar Eclipse
ok heres how i see it...
ambiguous had some pretty good flow and some solid punches....i wasnt getting the (double) after some of the lines, but whatever. You came solid and ended solid as well.
When i read rebels first verse, i felt like this battle was over...had nice wordplay and good flow....but it kinda fell apart from there. Nothing else came close to his opener. The fact that some bars were 2 long lines and others were kinda short didnt help the overall verse flow as well. But solid effort...
Anyways, vote = ambiguous....and TRY to figure out what ur name means before callin someone out on it. peace.
3-0, 2 more votes
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^ uwantted to battle u beeyatch but u boucned.....ambigious gay duo wuz wut dis shit was...amibgious took this tho less of the gay one an more of a textee...he took this shit easily....hit dis up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=66946
Seriously, Young Mik, wtf did u say? U said some shit about being gay and thass all I understood.
Neway Upppppin................................(4)
Am got this, he had some really good wordplay and nice punches to boot, you could elevate though.
Vote-am
4-0, can we get a final vote in here?
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its easy i said u wanted to battle wit ^...aite den i called this battle the ambigious gay duo..u ufkin retard..then i saidu ugys were fukin horable an suk alot of dik.....an u both shud staop rappin like now.....thats wut i said... u fukin herb ass bitch shut ya mouth u flyweight bitch........
but if anythin i thoguht illestrebal had dis shit...even tho ambigious cmae out aite for a newbster.....illest rebel had sum flowin to it.
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Originally posted by Solar Eclipse
ok heres how i see it...
ambiguous had some pretty good flow and some solid punches....i wasnt getting the (double) after some of the lines, but whatever. You came solid and ended solid as well.
When i read rebels first verse, i felt like this battle was over...had nice wordplay and good flow....but it kinda fell apart from there. Nothing else came close to his opener. The fact that some bars were 2 long lines and others were kinda short didnt help the overall verse flow as well. But solid effort...
Anyways, vote = ambiguous....and TRY to figure out what ur name means before callin someone out on it. peace.