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iight checkin in ill have my verse up soon hopefully
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::The Flow::
You are about to become the fifth mark to my streak, don't even speak bitch shut your beak, you have no technique, and your shit is weak, when I spit its unique //
Noone dares to critique me, just try and ill bust you in the cheek and make ya shreik, just watch that blood leak, no more emceeing for you you'll be in a damn boutique //
::Mix-Up::
Here im like a mutha-fuckin dictator, There are none that are greater, some may think im the creator, so don't be a hater //
::The Flow::
When I grab the mic I amaze, Tryna outdo me is like entering a neverending maze, I put my opponents in a DAZE, How do you expect to beat me when you have less flava than Happy DAYS //
I never spit a dull phrase, I set my oppponents a-blaze, I make them feel the haze, those are my ways, your a shitty emcee so like I said before start tieing those bouquets //
There ya go man.... turned out better than I thought w/ the DAYS/DAZE play and the boutique, bouquet mixup but yah lemme kno when you spit.
Damn....
This Kid Is Somthin I Eat Just A Salty Kracker, Gay Like A FudgePacker N When It Come To Lyrics Hes A Lacker:::
Call Me An 'AirPlane' Cuz U Gettin Dropped Like A 'Sky-Diver', Ya Rhymes Are Comin Up 'Short' As If U Did A 'Five-Liner':::
Ya Rhymes Look Like They Got In A 'Wreck' Its A 'Catastro-Phe', U Aint A 'Thief' U Couldnt 'Stick Me Up' If U Were To 'Plaster-Me':::
Just Call Me 'Lance Armstrong' Cuz I Have No 'Competition', Kid Wants To Be Ill But He Has To Stop-N-Listen:::
Couldnt 'Tell His Future' If He Was A 'Phsycotic-Agent', His Rhymes Are 'Crazy N Wild' Like We Just Captured A 'Exotic-Patient':::
Might Be Typos...Quik Key
tight battles, seriously, here's the breakdown;
multies-tie=you both used a heck of a lot
metas-i didn't find any
flow-tie=due to multies
punches-tie=you both came good
complexity-tie=both were decent
wordplay-southernrapper=this decides it
vote=southern rapper
props to both
peace
Southern took this because he punched the cat with every line.
Kracka was good, but against a vet ya gotta steadily and consistently punch and I felt he spent at least half his rhyme proppin himself.
Like his "mix up"...not even directed at or about Southern.
He has good shit, ya can tell...
He just has to direct it and focus it towards dissing his opponent.
allright, this is how i see it...
tight battles, seriously, here's the breakdown;
multies - Southern Rapper
- alot neater and easier to read, his multis looked better overall.
flow - KracKa
- reading it and saying it are two different things, when you say KracKa's verse it goes together as a whole.
punches - tie
- yeah both had outstanding punches, i liked SoutherRapper's intro though, but SR's ending was making me think twice if he was complimenting or actually dissing.
complexity - tie
- i agree with ace of spades, both were good.
wordplay - tie
- both were great, im leaning towards KracKa's because his sounded better overall.
since most of this is kinda a tie, i think KracKa had the better verse overall, and im making my vote going toward KracKa because like BTK said, SP's veteran - and it shouldnt take 30 minutes for 5 bars, especially if your spitting 2nd (with so much experience.)
good battle overall though. keep it up.
-tengo
vote Kracka, i really liked southerns verse especially for a free but he was off in the beggining, he got put back in the rnning cause of his middle lines the "5liner" and the "plaster me" lies were dope but the rest was iffy. Kracka had tight multie so he took that a little less creativity but harder punches and that happy days line was funny lol overall i think Southern had the line of the battle but his inconsistency and lack of high quality thru out gave my vote to Kracka, good job to both, 1luv.
sry just one thing i cant edit my own pots and i cant poll vote i wanted to say i cant poll vote so count my vote up there, 1luv.
i mostly agree but my vote is goin to Kracka cuz his just made me laugh alot. hehehe. sry southern u know i luv ya ;) :DQuote:
Originally posted by Ace Of Spades
tight battles, seriously, here's the breakdown;
multies-tie=you both used a heck of a lot
metas-i didn't find any
flow-tie=due to multies
punches-tie=you both came good
complexity-tie=both were decent
wordplay-southernrapper=this decides it
vote=southern rapper
props to both
peace
jus i really go for the funny shit. :cool:
^Couldna broke it down better myself. BTW SR I think on that last line u might of ment "Pyschic agent" when u was referrin to tellin the future. Becuz "Pyschotic Agent" would just mean that he's crazy Seein as how Pyschotic is Derived from the word Pyscho. Good Battle though to both of ya'llQuote:
Originally posted by tengo
allright, this is how i see it...
tight battles, seriously, here's the breakdown;
multies - Southern Rapper
- alot neater and easier to read, his multis looked better overall.
flow - KracKa
- reading it and saying it are two different things, when you say KracKa's verse it goes together as a whole.
punches - tie
- yeah both had outstanding punches, i liked SoutherRapper's intro though, but SR's ending was making me think twice if he was complimenting or actually dissing.
complexity - tie
- i agree with ace of spades, both were good.
wordplay - tie
- both were great, im leaning towards KracKa's because his sounded better overall.
since most of this is kinda a tie, i think KracKa had the better verse overall, and im making my vote going toward KracKa because like BTK said, SP's veteran - and it shouldnt take 30 minutes for 5 bars, especially if your spitting 2nd (with so much experience.)
good battle overall though. keep it up.
-tengo
Vote = Kracka
^^^No But Uppin For Votes
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close battle, both had good punches, metas, etc. but SouthernRapper had better flow, and thats what got me...
VOTE=SOUTHERNRAPPER
Everything was equalk but southern took it with flow only jus nice drop by otha kat though, keep spittin,
Pce
yo yo yo this shit was pretty even and i promise when i reach 100 id vote......if i had 100 i would pick kracka cause his was bit betta
souther rapper took this he punched with every line and had heaps of wordplay........otherwise, good battle......................................
vote = SouthernRapper