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Ok since i prolly won't be online tommorrow till late i'mma go ahead and make this thread....and when i found out that i wasn't gonna be here tommorrow i decided to write my verse....just started like 10minutes ago and i still not finished i got like 8 lines done.....i'll post when i finished.....so don't think this is prewriting i just trying ta get this goin...........
Rules:
10-15 lines
No crew...ect...votes
Post asap....
i guess i'll go first....
Yo and wit that LET'S BATTLE
ok yo tried ta do this as fast as i could kuz i gettin ta bed early kuz i'mma be gone most of tommorrow....
Evilkronix a.k.a. Mean Green this muhfucka from behind the shadows//
his record gonna drop drasticly he tha dow jones of rap battles//
no stockmarket playa, but i understand ups and rises//
aww very good kron, abc's damn this is yet ur very finest//
fuckin simpleton, rhymes soundin like, "see spot run"//
kron so ghetto, he rocked filas when we all had our adidas on//
he also don't fall inline, he always rebelious and goes against tha system//
like when his pops told him, "son please don't date men, guys spose ta have women"//
see don't get mad rb he's a disapointment ta all kinds//
slow minds, girls wit big behinds, wtf even convience store signs//
"evilkronix" is a "herb" so let me "blaze" and get "high"//
offa dis guy, fucka think he pimpin, wearin cowboy boots and levi//
"sattle up" something u've heard alotta times ain't that right//
i'm white but this bitch is a cracker, kronix a.k.a. cheese bite//
hey remember when u goto prewrite, plz cheese bite be nice//
*Throws Evilkronix tha mic*
SPIT
You winning this battle is "Mission Impossible", that makes you "Tom Cruise", didn't you know I'm unstoppable?//(1)
This kids verse is fuckin-hollow, that wasn't a spit, the opposite: he sucked-n-swallowed//(2)
You gettin a fag play-mate cuz theres no one else to be penetrated, Whats your crews name? Anally-Investigated?//(3)
Fuckin' hilly billy talkin like "I reckon-mate", catch this bitch, I'm first Class and you're second rate, lyrically prone goin to the rhyme zone (.com) askin them to translate//(4)
Whos the emcee? I'll bruise ya quickly, kill ya verse, even more simply cuz everything you spits already been said aginst me//(5)
I'm shakein, You spit a verse with wack vocab, and not one fuckin multi, to make it worse his punchlines were faulty, cant even match, ya see?//(6)
I morph you into an octopus and strangle you eight-ways, you'll be fucked in all ways, exactly how you penetrate-gays//(7)
You dont belong in this day of age, "sealife" destroys all rookies, this isn't James Bond, I've got no time for "Octo-pussies"//
This "bitch cums" with less realness than a "Sex Filmstress"//(9)
And I bet-trillions that any of my rhymes could beat your best-brilliance//(10)
tryin a lil somethin new...hope voters like it................................................ ......
i liked both, and since im in raz's crew i cant vote, props to both....................... can u drop a fair one on dis
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=66026
You winning this battle is "Mission Impossible", that makes you "Tom Cruise", didn't you know I'm unstoppable?//(1)
played......
This "bitch cums" with less realness than a "Sex Filmstress"//(9)
bittin.......
ive seen those lines so many timez. i'd vote fo raz but im in his crew...
i think evil got this by juss a lil bit both of ya'll spit better good good luck.
Vote:Evil K
poll vote:Evil K
turns out i didn't leave today.....i dunno what tha fuck is goin on, but fuck it ..... yo dawg liked tha drop but u used a very very fimilar line, i've heard it on here before........ "This "bitch cums" with less realness than a "Sex Filmstress"//(9)" i'm sure someone else here has heard it and usually when u diss someone, u use there name in it....mine wasn't mention once......so i dunno....... but yo good battle........
UPPIN for votes.....hit this up wit an poll vote and i'll hit urs up witta poll vote...
Just so ya'll know, kronix is bein investigated for biting... heres bit of proof, more getting worked on:
Evilkronix vs Raz: "You winning this battle is "Mission Impossible", that makes you "Tom Cruise", didn't you know I'm unstoppable?//"
Evilkronix vs tha reality: "This bitch thinks hes "Tom Cruise", you winning this is a "Mission Impossible", If ya dont know already, I'm unstoppable//"
Kronix flipped the line, i think clearly bitten, same words used to rhyme...
ok good, i think its bullshit how he gonna bite rhymes ta beat someone, thats bullshit if u can't think of ne take ur loss, ain't no need to cheat up on tha internet............. But foreal can i get some votes for this shit?.............common ppl this biter is leadin 1-0 need more poll votes
yo raz took better punches,flow,plus the other kid bites bullshit
will u hit this battle up wit a honest vote thanx
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=624015#624015
oh sorry its
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...015#post624015
my bad
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AND HE WILL BE JUDGED!
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Haha thanx jko i got u, i'll vote, and POPE Big up ta ya ass. mayne...........LMAO .........UPPIN 1-1
damn bitin faggot i hate that shit......raz had better punches anyways...if ya gonna bite try to bite good ones and try to actually win.....haha just straight dont bite ya bitch!!! raz took it!
peace
FOREAL SUMONE VOTE.........................
.................UPPIN////////////////////
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What tha fuck ppl, are u'all not gonna vote or something, hit this shit up and i will personally come to ur battle and poll a vote...........
raz got it wit da punches n' flow. evil put up a good fight and this was a close decision
Not for Nothing , but if you are gonna bite ........ At least throw it in da middle somewhere , instead leading off your verse with it.
Raz gets my vote , Sometimes I have to dig hard in my mind to write new shit , and want to bite , but never do. Its a good line bro , but write new shit , impress yourself , and your peers.
Vote - Raz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=66704
I need 1 more vote ............... Honest
CrazyE
Don't matter bout the bitin. Simple fact is that Raz got this fo better flow and punches.
Vote:Raz
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Yo thanx fo da votes....... now Uppin 3-1 my lead lets finish this shit off ........... drop a link and i'll poll on it...
raz took this, he had better punches and better flow......evilkronix had some good stuff too though.
VOTE=RAZ
check out my battle and drop an honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...5&pagenumber=1
[B]Yo thanx fo da votes....... now Uppin 4-1 my lead lets finish this shit off ........... drop a link and i'll poll on it... [/B
bittin shit is gay, raz takes this with better punches and he wrote his shit...........
vote: Raz