First rule...10 Lines---EXACTLY
u must have 17 wins or more to vote
u know the rules
spit first, good luck
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First rule...10 Lines---EXACTLY
u must have 17 wins or more to vote
u know the rules
spit first, good luck
*Change the rules*
17 wins is too far.. it will take forever.. say you have to have 10 wins... that will get more votes and will still not have any chance of noobs voting
and didnt i tell you to spit 1st?
OK fuck it then il spit 1st
but a rule
*NO FEEDING!!!!*
LEZ GO................................................ ......................................
H4iKU
.:Proud To Be Hawaiian:.
* President & Founder of the Newb Out-Reach-Program "
crew - regime
ok lez do this
You Don’t Wanna Collide At All; This Aint A Waste 'Cos For A "Piece Of My Mind" I’ll "Divide Ya Skull"
I Can't "Stand" You, So I'l Be "Back" To Re-"Tune" Your Spinal "Chords".. Ease My Pain Like Tylenol// (eases "Back" pain)
You Can’t Serve Me Like Empty-Dinning-Hallz! So Rather Than Test It's Best If You "Miss The Beef",
Im The Shit B! Syke.. I Aint Even That Good But You Just "Behind The Present" Like Christmas Trees//
Stop Actin Nice Duke If 13th Disciple Wasn't In Your Crew You Wouldn't Get Recognition Haik Who?,
You Wouldn't Have "A-Peer"ed "Nice" Even If We Paid Someone To Pretend To "Like You"!!!!!!!!// (Friend = A-"Peer")
You In Hawaii? Il Set Your "Grass" Skirt On Fire... 'Cos You Need To "Elevate" Yourself Before I Rupture Your Health, (Hawaii the GIRLS have grass skirts)
H4IKU A PERVERT!!! For Bein' Leader Of Newb "Out-Reach"-Program And "Touching Yourself!"//
Il Make You "Shake Hands" With A "Tramp" And You'd Still Not "Meet" The "Needs" We Raising,
And Like Takin' "Fony Viagra" On "Holiday" .................... You Jus Not "Rising To The Occasion"!/
Str8 Keystyle....
WHER THA FUK U AT?????
..................DAMN PRE WRITERS........................................... ........
it wont let me edit, so allright 10 wins then in order to vote. i cant post today. i jus came on the comp. to see whats goin on. unlike you, i got school and afterschool sports. tom. morning, ill drop is that kewl soldier? no pre-write i assure you.
and yeah no fedding, so i cant steal from your verse.........^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^
OKYAY 2MORO THEN
AND I GOT SKOOL........ BUT IT FINISHES AT 3.....
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UPPIN
JUS WAITIN 4 DAWG TO GET BACK FROM SCHOOL
..................GUD LUCK.............................................. ......................
allright man, checkin in^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
yo good luck to you both but while ure waitin if you want
can you hit this shit up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...226#post626226
A Fallen Soldier.....
Pop-flys out the gate, ill hit this match out the park as if i was "Corcked" in defiance,...Settin derby record before Bonds even hit up the GIANTS, your career was short-cut---and that was before you "blowed" your way into the Alliance
Another fallen soldier, stripped of his medals of honor and executed in classic Regime fassion,...Take your fake accent, tourist like u i abuse and leave stripped open jus so i get the money to "Cash-in"
...Send notice to his boys, cuz this was another soldier Missing In Action
I bring new views to the war veteran hero, squash Cockaroaches like u before Italian insight gave way to Al Pacino, Cross down and reck your fallen towers fater then u can say "Ground Zero"
Your record mean shit kid, i was here longer then when u signed on and decided to stay....
Theres no mistaken, the only way you lead paths is after I payed the way
A Fallen Soldier.....
Pop-flys out the gate, ill hit this match out the park as if i was "Corcked" in defiance,...Settin derby record before Bonds even hit up the GIANTS, your career was short-cut---and that was before you "blowed" your way into the Alliance
Another fallen soldier, stripped of his medals of honor and executed in classic Regime fassion,...Take your fake accent, tourist like u i abuse and leave stripped open jus so i can "Cash-in"
...Send notice to his boys, cuz this was another soldier Missing In Action
I bring new views to the war veteran hero, squash Cockaroaches like u before Italian insight gave way to Al Pacino, Cross down and reck your fallen towers fater then u can say "Ground Zero"
Your record mean shit kid, i was here longer then when u signed on and decided to stay....
Theres no mistaken, the only way you could ever lead paths is after I payed the way
^^^^ its the second one, i cant edit for some reason lol, jus read the second one, thats my final^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
vote.......haiku
haiku hit hard with punches and flow was off the hook
hit mine up will you i need ill heads to judge this battleVV
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=66031
since I cant vote on your battle the above statement means shit so yea
good luck to both
good batttle
aight..........tight battle.......but honestly
here is the breakdown:
personals-no one
flow-tied
punches-tight
metas-h4iku
originality-h4iku
h4ikus was straight up funny
vote-h4iku
peace
OK can we have some REAL votes up in here?
............... uppin .................................................. ............................
aight-here it goes....
flo-soldier
multi's-soldier
vocab-haiku
metti's-soldier
punches-both
personals-haiku
wordplay-soldier
that gives me soldier as the winner here-had to break it down to define one...very tight battle..props to both
drop a vote on my battle wit whyte thug...apreciate it if both did-i value honarable votes from tru vets much like u do-...pc
Thanx Carsonjet you really broke te battle down... thats what i meant by Real votes
~I can't vote on your battle 'cos ThugWhyte is in my crew.... but il look out 4 u and vote ur next battle/.... fairly
aight
both verses were iight but i'ma go wit soldier ..his punches seemed to hit harder to me and the wordplay was hot...overall better verse completely
you had some nice shit too though Haiku ..no beef he jus came off as better to me
hit dis up wit an honest vote and i'll return da favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=66128
uppin
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This was a battle of two very different styles and quite frankly...
I just couldn't flow or grasp Haiku's very well.
I know there were punches in there, but they were really veiled.
Soldier threw with complexity, but I didn't have to read his shit 3 times to get it.
Both hit hard when the punches landed, but I felt Haiku's were so covered in complexity, they were softened by them.
Other than that...
Most everything was even.
Flow: Soldier
Complexity: Haiku
Metas: Even
Wordplay: Haiku
Punches: Soldier
Gotta go with the punches.
Holla back...
Vote up, please...
Thanx
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Thanx
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I guess since o0 Spirit 0o voted H4iku with only 5 wins
He won't mind me voting
Soldier's punches connected pretty well
He had a nice flow and I felt the multi skill level was more structured so he gets my vote
yea h4iku took this one hit harder flow punches everyhting
h4iku we still gotta do that battle aight
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...5&pagenumber=1
hit this up D'Cyde vs. Xplicit
UTvsAllaince
dis was a sik battle since im not old enouf 2 vote lol props 2 both tho im out holla
peep mine
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...129#post628129
[QUOTE]Originally posted by carsonjet
[B]aight-here it goes....
flo-soldier
multi's-soldier
vocab-haiku
metti's-soldier
punches-both
personals-haiku
wordplay-soldier
that gives me soldier as the winner here-had to break it down to define one...very tight battle..props to both