10 linez u spit first.......
no feedin
no hate
ho crew
no bullshit newb votez
no beef
iight ~w0n~
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10 linez u spit first.......
no feedin
no hate
ho crew
no bullshit newb votez
no beef
iight ~w0n~
set it up right man.........................................
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huh ?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?1? !?!
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ight good... droppin in a few, this is my check in.... - O n e
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Enters room.. stares at Franchise.. laughs.. then pics up tha mice
..: Warm-up Gear :..
OKay.. lets say, your words play are played words that you call Wordplay//
Then lets say.."B.A.Y" was straight.. straight gay.. whichever your nerves-lay.. are you 'okay?' the answers no, it was a retorical Survey//
..: Bout to get worse :..
Simple form of 'propoganda' i sent to Atlanta.. sellin nics and dimes.. cant handle ounces and qp's//
Scared of a 'few d's?'.. big hustla goes to bed wit Aks.. safeties off, and rolls to the movies.. wit drinks filled wit roofies//
I cant 'stand lies' .. this was a mountain he 'cant climb'.. infered he would beat me, so i had to ruin the life of Franchi$e//
Pieces flyin like 'land mines'.. kid makes his own 'fan signs' and cheer for himself like he was a pantamime//
Your like the basketball version of babe 'ruth.. the mike tyson wit a new 'tooth'.. Colin Farell, gettin shot outta tha fuckin phone'booth'.. and like this kids' gurl, ima let loose//
When you've reached 'Z' from 2 A (A2Z) dont "expect-me" to rhyme wit chu.. go collab wit "openlygayemcee"..sorry dawg but i Brutally Assaulted this youth//
..: I'll bring tha merkin to ya now :..
Punches like darts, insides out, tearin you apart from part to part before you even got up enough courage to start//
Advice would be to turn-back wit tha burn-back i slapped you.. def people be like "You heard that?".. Be like John-Q and have a change of heart//
sorry dawg i had to go out for min, thats why i took so long.
Maybe u should be an Instigator cuz maybe he wuz ya
crewz realest thrilla/
But lyricall i guess u fell down and broke ya crown cuz uPinkslipped like ya IllestKilla /
lemme squash da Vendetta i see u tryin to rep the
Nyc may i ask Y?/
lyrically ill murk ya crew so bad i'll make no one Envy NY /
You and ya punk ass crew can come do some lyrical fightin/
I no u rep the Elements but what are the chances of
being struck by White lightning /
Maybe u should D'cyde to hide or just retire/
cuz this Kid Frozt ed ya whole crew i see why Red Dragon can't spit fire/
you've been robbed by to many Verbal Vixions i see y
ya crew lacks skill/
It's cuz the Elements weathered ya crew which made
it fall I.l.l./
iight good Battle Dawg ~w0n~
nice drop.. but dawg, naht really many personal disses..
but nice aspect for tha rap anyways I think that it would
be an Ill open mic.. just for tha fact that it didn't hit me wit
personals or nun of that but good battle dawg.. worth battling
you. lets get some votes up in this damn thing
Sorry, but Thug stomped ya...
I'm just not a big fan of name tossing in diss rhymes.
A couple are cool, but when it becomes the whole focus of your rhyme...
Seriously...
How can your disses be that effective when they are spread out amongst a bunch of people.
They lose their energy.
thug came wit harder punches but props 2 both
no beef
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vote=ThuG WhytE
thug came alot harder ere, like born sed don't focus too much on names of other people it gets old! gud battle though!
vote-thug
Thanx fo da feed Back good battle thug.........................................
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agreed.. props to ya............................................
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Damn Thug raped this battle.... iono wtf was up with Frachise here i seen him do alot better
anyway no beef good battle but i think Thug def. took this
(Im in Thugz crew.... so IM NOT gonna poll my vote aight)
ight i feel ya.. thanks for feedback tho soldier.. 3rd or suttin
upp for this shit............................ - O n e
I always enjoy reading Thug's shit, yo flow is always on point and the wordplay is always sick
Your like the basketball version of babe 'ruth.. the mike tyson wit a new 'tooth'.. Colin Farell, gettin shot outta tha fuckin phone'booth'.. and like this kids' gurl, ima let loose//
that was tight
cant front though franchise rep'd well and the name callin was creative but i but much
thug still got this one, but i enjoyed the battle overall
franchise got some skillz
holla
and hit me up yall
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=65100
UPPIN THIS AGAIN! come on lets get it ended...............
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thug whyte had betta flow n' punches good battle tho
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Originally posted by dw
thug came alot harder ere, like born sed don't focus too much on names of other people it gets old! gud battle though!
vote-thug