Rules
1.no hate
2.no crew
3.no DR
4.1 round
5.u spit first
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Rules
1.no hate
2.no crew
3.no DR
4.1 round
5.u spit first
yo checkin dogg
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Yo Im checkN in also...Dogg, I may have to spit I a few hours...im gonna try now, but Im in orientation for my next class. I will try to spit now though....
coo
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everyone will agree and yall should know,9mm’s
pulling a KO//
Im gonna rip you so bad your are betta off pulling a
no show//
this faggot in a cape knew i was comin so he tried to
dip quick//
you would have escaped put i found traces of your lip
stick//
your learning must have got stunned cause you can no
longer grow//
the only way you can elevate is getting high off my
flow//
while your at home dissapointed masterbating in the
tub//
im getting more play than 50 cents "IN THE CLUB"//
My automatic pass through Rips body leavin marks
lik a drug attic//
9’s flows dramatic,My punches unpredicable like
driving eratic//
Spearing ya text pining it on ya mouth to let u no how
wackness taste//
Your shit recyled and garbage so me battlin u is a
waste//
you bellow me like a son(sun)and you aint to
bright//
your rap game is still so elementary,still learnin
to read and write//
im 9 millimeter and with perfection im shooting you
down pointblanc//
bullet hits ya chest and its like the titanic sank//
when i kill you bitch, dont give me
a fuckin attitude//
if you was heard around the world you still
wouldnt have fuckin lattitude//
$Finisher$
you neva should have signed up for this rb, cause you
have juss been gunned down and lyricaly
shot//
imma leave you with achs and pains, have you tied in a
not, poor acid down ya throat so i can watch ya
stomach rot//
yo dogg u took to long so i spit first
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Uppin 4 RIPallthat
ur spit was iight all it needs help wit is the structure
but nice verse
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my stucture fucked up when i submitted it and it would not let me edit itQuote:
Originally posted by Crackills
ur spit was iight all it needs help wit is the structure
but nice verse
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Unloading nines is a horri-Flick thriller..Viewing screeners of Jason slayN Freddy leads to copy kat silenced killers//
I pull flammin projectiles that leave ya scorchN like Kens firey uppercut,,,Make ya up ya guard knuckle-up to this dealer//
Your a newbie whose unfamilar to the ryhme world...In laymin terms I RIP WAK ASS BOY cast dem little girls in a stinkN moat//
I smoke boat to a halicenating DOOM...have ya rappN Dillusions Like B REAL hoped in Cypress Hill Temple of BOOM...U cant cope//
This Kat dropped the soap thinkN he got 9 lives...I snipe ya wit a rhino tipped musket the ripes ya until ya dusted becoming fossilized//
This rip is half past classified....I read ya wit evil eye to form white lie to bury ya divine pride grabbing my gentals when I ride//
Fuck it...My girls coming over...UppiN for votes......
rip all that had good structure and more multis............................................ ...................................
rip all that....won thise easily ..he had a better flow structur...punches..it was just plain better....but rip i aint gunna pol vote till u poll vote in mine..against petrafy
aite...then i wilkllll....1
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=65178
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...3&pagenumber=2
Drop an honest poll here and I will return the favor
close one.......you both came aight..........both
had equal punches and flow, 9 came more simple
but was still just as good but imma have to go
with Rip for his structure.......
props to both
vote=ripallthat
peace
eh rip all that..ppoll vote in my shit against...petrafy an ill do the same here.,http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=65178
Im gunna poll vote anwayz/.//dawg u do the samem cuz one more vote an ill win ya feell an u already psoted a explanation so just clcik da fukin poll vote..thanks 1
ripall took it betta everything props 2 both tho im out holla
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rip was betta-both were played-boy i cant remember the last time sum one used a KO an No-show line before-maybe like 10 minutes ago......both need to elevate....vote-rip