M&M'S CREW: Mental Stamina v/ THA ALLIANCE CREW: BROOKLYN, HOT BATTLE

Mental Stamina vs BROOKLYN

Requirements:
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10 Lines Minimum, 20 Lines Maximum !!!!
35 minutes to drop after I drop, not a second more.

Rules:
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No Bitin
No Feedin
No Editing
No Bitching
No Building
No Countering
No Hate Votes
No Crew Votes
No Freeposting
No Vote Swaying
No Newbie Bullshit
No Default Vet Votes
* .:!3 Wins Or More To Vote!:. *

Other:
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5 Consecutive Votes Is A K.O.
5 Total Votes Is A Defeat

Comments:
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OK, I REALLY HATE LONG BATTLES BUT CHECK-IN & AGREE TO THE RULES THEN I'LL DROP

..I'M GHOST..

checkin in sorry it took so long nigga, I had business to take care off people too see money to colect.


No Bitching
No Building
No Countering
^ Explain? lol

and killa MC edit your fuckin post moron you fucked up the page with ya dot bullshit

NO BITCHING...LIKE IF I GET A VOTE YOU SAY...
'THAT VOTE WASNT EXPLAINED' OR 'I DONT LIKE THE WAY YOU PUT IT' OR JUST START ARGUEING WITH VOTERS

BUILDING SUCH AS DOING 2 LINES CONNECTING IT TO ONE(LIKE 'HANDS OF GOD' DOES) WHICH WILL MAKE 10 LINES=20

COUNTERING..SUCH AS..WELLI SHOULNT HAVE PUT THAT I THINK BUT COUNTERING IS WHEN YOU READ THE PERSONS VERSE 1ST & COUNTER ATTACK IT TO MAKE YOURS BETTER...
LIKE IF WE POST AT THE SAME TIME..IT WOULD BE NO WAY TO COUNTER VERSES

BUT JUST FORGET THAT RULE...I'LL START KEYING MY VERSE NOW

No More Hidin, I 'Disfigure You'..Now I Got You 'Scared Of Your Own Skin' Like Pores Fighting/
Man I Don't Have To 'Look For Some Background' To See This Herb Is A 'Whore Risin'/(Horizon)

You A Misses Bitch, The Clips I Spit Open You Up And Lay You Out Like Christmas Gifts/
Been Equipped To Diss, Holdin Fifths To Rip That Aim At You, And Leave You Painted Dude Like Acrylics Bitch/

Careful Kid, Punches Might Snap Skin, Why You Keep Rappin? I 'Stamp' Your Weak Words..Leave Your 'Post' Flattened/
Mental Knows Im Tight, Despite Your Actions, Bitch I Hate Strips..But 'Your Comical Readings' Are Where I'm Leavin My Caps In/(Captions)

Your Brain Is Stalling, Brooklyn Shove Your Next L(Nextel) Into Your Ear To Show You Pain Is Calling!/
This Kid Claim He Balling..But Your 'Primitive And On The Run' Kid Your 'Ape Hauling'/(Applauding)

Bitch I'm Smokin You, And Punches 'Leave The Inside Of This Pussy' Falling Open Too/(Fallopian Tube)
Your Speech Is Hopeless, Can't Compete With Dopeness, It's Like I'm 'Breakin Cameras' The Way I Breach Your Focus/

I Peel Skin Like Bananas In The Hands Of Monkeys..Ya Rhymes Wouldn’t Be Dope If They Came Engraved On Heroin Junkies/
You Could Actually Win..Nah I Must Be Mistaken It..I'll Have You Waving 'White Flags' Like ' K.K.K. Patriots'/

The Show Is Owned And Mental Is Shattered, Like Old Men's Bladder, You Can Barely Hold Ya Own/
Bruisin You Too, Where Loosing This Dude..I Got Your Whole Crew On The Move Like Mobile Homes/

You Act In Amazement That Your Plays Bent, I Strike Back Swiftly To Leave Your Back On The Pavement/
Refract Your Placement, It Happens So Often You Must Think My Dick In Your Mouth Is A Fashion Statement/

First Hit, I Put You In A Hearse Quick, You Can Put 'Swearwords' On Paper And Still Not Be Able To Write 'Cursive'/
You Could Be A 'Blood' Member And Couldn’t Call 'Cells' If I Lend My 'Spleen', Your Verse Couldn’t 'Outshine' Mines If I 'Dimmed My Screen'/
You'll Be Blessed To Breathe, Throw A 'Test' At Me?..If You Is Bold, I Fill In Ya Crew With Holes Like The 'S-A-T'S!/

Mental Is As Dumb As It Gets, Ya Punches Never Seem To Connect Like Silly Rabbits And Trix/
Who Scared To Post First?, Bitch I'll 'Wear You Out', Like Kids With Only 'One Pair of Kicks'/

lol building? um whatever bud i aint hands of god, countering is feeding i dont feed.

and bitch? i only bitch if its D/r and i've been looking at your recent battles so ill know d/r

lol you went over 20 lines fuckin moron hahaha

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WELL I DROPPED..ITS YOUR TURN NOW & RIGHT ABOUT NOW YOU HAVE A HALF HOUR LEFT
I HOPE WHAT I SPIT WAS OKAY, I HARDLY EVEN SEEN 1 BATTLE FROM YOU BUT HOOPEFULLY ITS OK
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OOPS...WOW I WENT 1 LINE OVER
I FORGOT I ENTER 2 LINES DOWN
SHOULD I EDIT OR LEAVE THE ONE LINE & MAKE IT LOOK LIKE I INTENTIONALLY CHEATED?

lol if you edit it admins step in and DQ it - but lets see how I do in this pethetic match up. dropin in a bit

This Kid clamin he a con but he only a Wack-Delinqwent,
Attack-Sequent, he like pressured thugs only pull the Mac-Frequent!
Clamin you comin hard like spys on a mission,
Like Drunks aimin guns kid gon die While-He-Missin!
Mental is timin errors and im Clockin-Your-Flaws,
Mockin-Your-Raw, im sendin armed trojans heavy equipped with Dicks-Knockin-Your-Jaw!
Mental tossin bombs like playin with Hand-Grenades,
Ill flame up ya iris while sprayin u up with Cans-Of-Raid!
Ghosts taunting-your-spine while spirits haunting-ya-mind,
Brooklyn is addicted to Crack cuz this kid really wanting The-Lines! (he did 21 lines - max is 20)
You aint pressin the keys like blind men disabling-explosives,
Mental the presidental congress the way im relabling-notives!
brooklyn loves it HardCore he already been Beaten four times,
Ya throat-greetin-knifes, I dont go down south but ive eaten-wives!

Spits will leave you Top-less puttin your Brain-In-The-Cold,
Im Breakin Your Heart kid like Grimreepers when Staining-Your-Soul!
Mental like a giving salesman im always Getting-my-Portion,
Im known for Killing Kidz and Murkin Suns like I was splitting-an-orphan!
I cause death when I write amored spits that cant be Grazed-with-Infections,
When Mental Stamina start to Spill Heat I leave ya Journal Pages Blazed-In-Sections!!!:slick:

hell of a nice battle and you both came hard as hell reppin your crews so im going to give a full breakdown

Quote:

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Originally posted by BROOKLYN
No More Hidin, I 'Disfigure You'..Now I Got You 'Scared Of Your Own Skin' Like Pores Fighting/
Man I Don't Have To 'Look For Some Background' To See This Herb Is A 'Whore Risin'/(Horizon)

nice creativity & wordplay, not that direct

You A Misses Bitch, The Clips I Spit Open You Up And Lay You Out Like Christmas Gifts/
Been Equipped To Diss, Holdin Fifths To Rip That Aim At You, And Leave You Painted Dude Like Acrylics Bitch/

lol good comedy punch

Careful Kid, Punches Might Snap Skin, Why You Keep Rappin? I 'Stamp' Your Weak Words..Leave Your 'Post' Flattened/
Mental Knows Im Tight, Despite Your Actions, Bitch I Hate Strips..But 'Your Comical Readings' Are Where I'm Leavin My Caps In/(Captions)

again nice wordplay but could have been rephrased better maybe

Your Brain Is Stalling, Brooklyn Shove Your Next L(Nextel) Into Your Ear To Show You Pain Is Calling!/
This Kid Claim He Balling..But Your 'Primitive And On The Run' Kid Your 'Ape Hauling'/(Applauding)

good multi, it connected well

Bitch I'm Smokin You, And Punches 'Leave The Inside Of This Pussy' Falling Open Too/(Fallopian Tube)
Your Speech Is Hopeless, Can't Compete With Dopeness, It's Like I'm 'Breakin Cameras' The Way I Breach Your Focus/

lmao damn that punch really caught

I Peel Skin Like Bananas In The Hands Of Monkeys..Ya Rhymes Wouldn’t Be Dope If They Came Engraved On Heroin Junkies/
You Could Actually Win..Nah I Must Be Mistaken It..I'll Have You Waving 'White Flags' Like ' K.K.K. Patriots'/

the 1st line was kinda played but you picked it up with that last line & made it hot

The Show Is Owned And Mental Is Shattered, Like Old Men's Bladder, You Can Barely Hold Ya Own/
Bruisin You Too, Where Loosing This Dude..I Got Your Whole Crew On The Move Like Mobile Homes/

lol, nice wordplay

You Act In Amazement That Your Plays Bent, I Strike Back Swiftly To Leave Your Back On The Pavement/
Refract Your Placement, It Happens So Often You Must Think My Dick In Your Mouth Is A Fashion Statement/

:eek: that last line was off the hook

First Hit, I Put You In A Hearse Quick, You Can Put 'Swearwords' On Paper And Still Not Be Able To Write 'Cursive'/
You Could Be A 'Blood' Member And Couldn’t Call 'Cells' If I Lend My 'Spleen', Your Verse Couldn’t 'Outshine' Mines If I 'Dimmed My Screen'/
You'll Be Blessed To Breathe, Throw A 'Test' At Me?..If You Is Bold, I Fill In Ya Crew With Holes Like The 'S-A-T'S!/

nice with crew diss part

Mental Is As Dumb As It Gets, Ya Punches Never Seem To Connect Like Silly Rabbits And Trix/
Who Scared To Post First?, Bitch I'll 'Wear You Out', Like Kids With Only 'One Pair of Kicks'/

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i think the verse could have been directed to the crew more than him but overall i give the verse a 6.3

Quote:

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Originally posted by Mental Stamina
This Kid clamin he a con but he only a Wack-Delinqwent,
Attack-Sequent, he like pressured thugs only pull the Mac-Frequent!

nice wordplay but could have been rephreased

Clamin you comin hard like spys on a mission,
Like Drunks aimin guns kid gon die While-He-Missin!

i didn't actually catch the wordplay in this

Mental is timin errors and im Clockin-Your-Flaws,
Mockin-Your-Raw, im sendin armed trojans heavy equipped with Dicks-Knockin-Your-Jaw!

lmao funny ass line yo

Mental tossin bombs like playin with Hand-Grenades,
Ill flame up ya iris while sprayin u up with Cans-Of-Raid!

nice wordplay sort of

Ghosts taunting-your-spine while spirits haunting-ya-mind,
Brooklyn is addicted to Crack cuz this kid really wanting The-Lines! (he did 21 lines - max is 20)

that was played because i see alot of lines about crack

You aint pressin the keys like blind men disabling-explosives,
Mental the presidental congress the way im relabling-notives!
brooklyn loves it HardCore he already been Beaten four times,
Ya throat-greetin-knifes, I dont go down south but ive eaten-wives!

nice consistency, cold have been more direct

Spits will leave you Top-less puttin your Brain-In-The-Cold,
Im Breakin Your Heart kid like Grimreepers when Staining-Your-Soul!

nice wordplay in there

Mental like a giving salesman im always Getting-my-Portion,
Im known for Killing Kidz and Murkin Suns like I was splitting-an-orphan!

:eek: that line caught my eye, very hot

I cause death when I write amored spits that cant be Grazed-with-Infections,
When Mental Stamina start to Spill Heat I leave ya Journal Pages Blazed-In-Sections!!!:slick:

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i think that verse could have been directed towards brooklyn & the crew more alsom you had nice wordplay i was feeling but you both were sort of even but i think brooklyn took it because of punches in every line, stamia had nice consistency but it didnt match up to brooklyns punches

can someone tell me how to actually poll my votes?
i never had a problem with em before.......................

* .:!3 Wins Or More To Vote!:. *

read the rules before you vote please.


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vote- mental.......i thot he came harder....both verses were tight but i thot mental had more complexity andhad harder punches the flow was all good n everything..1

Both was hot
Mental had good complexity, both had good wordplay
But Brooklyn's punches were harder and he had better structure
Vote: BROOKLYN

Both was a tight drop here.

I liked Brooklyns Multis and shit better. Nice word play and like his flow as well.

Vote:Brooklyn.

great battle...honeslty this was a very even matchup-however...i veiwed sum feedin inmentals's verse...wich turn the even bout to a brooklyn vote...a masterfull job by both...but that one flaw turn this inta brooklyn vote....no hate.....

aint gotta battle goin on right now but when ya see one drop a vote on it thanks.....honesty be my policy.....pc *1*

Dam! honestly i thought id state this now.....

Ive seen some of the best in RB. Rise.....and a few others. but brooklyn, he may not be the best ever but i like his style. i thot the other cat was good, stamina, but brooklyn took it. Period.^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^

heh Im not even gonna comment on this battle.

anyways seems like they judge on battle record instead of actually reading the verses, an admin asked me if i wanted this DQ'd but i let it go.

how tha HELL wud dat be a DQ on BROOKLYN'S behalf?
tha rulez say no bitchin & i knew your crew is known for it so FUCK OFF & let tha votez go & i doubt if a admin sayz shit about a DQ in here AT ALL BIATCH cuz therez no reason for one

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RIGHT, WHAT WOULD I GET DQ'D FOR?
THE VOTERS HAVE SPOKEN N BY THE WAY YOU LUCKY I AINT MAKE YOU SPIT 1ST EVEN THOUGH I DIDNT MIND
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^u'd get DQ'ed for going over the bar limit and
making it an un-fair battle...dickhead
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Here come the newbie dickryders to help out BROOK
like every other battle...lets count them as they arrive...

lol clearly acceptin defeat to the crew is what i think seriously
brooklyn went over like 1 fuckin line! how is that unfair!
he coulda dropped it... but no mental said he didn't hafta... n he coulda easily just did another line
damn bitches....all votes seemed good... nothin about records as u said...
damn....

WTF DO TRUTHZ MEAN NEWBIE'S & DICK RYDERS?
CAN WE SAY CREW MEMBERS THAT STICK TOGETHER?..THATS WHAT THEY'RE CALLED UNLIKE YOUR CREW WHO BULL SHITS OVER 1 LINE
DAMN!!, I WOULDA EDITED THAT 1 LINE IF IT WASNT FOR HIM TELLING ME TO LEAVE IT

ya...i think mental needs to stop the damn bitchin and accusin...

LOOK AT BROOKYLNS RULES! .:: NO BITCHIN ABOUT VOTES::.

ok that said...
im listening to brain damage by eminem...damn good song lol...
ne way it flowed good to that beat (mentals verse) and i liked his punches better...brookylns were good too but the flow was just off...thats my reasoning punches were near tied but flow won it for mental...

but seriously...stop bitchin yo...

peace...
check my battle with killa mc in front lines!

I didn't complain about votes, where did you see me complain about voters? explain that for me.

All I said is that they dont read the verse, they just voted for you because you either 1) sent them an IM 2) PM'd them 3) they owed you a favor for voting in there battle.

it's easy to tell shit the site I owned before I had to shut it down would of explained every vote they made on a battle like this.

and let me tell you another thing, they were all experienced and there wernt DickRiding going down, if I saw a sign of D/R I would ban them for 2 weeks.

So before you say Im crying about the votes? think again stupid shits.

Let's See some Real Voters up in here.

^^somebody mad that they got beat?.... and by the way your vote swaying... so u cud be DQ aswell

us let the voters talk... its okay that your lettin ur crew down they will 4giv u :)

yo this was a pretty good battle...both came hard .kinda close but brook got it...his punches were better and more consisten..he had better wordplay too

no hate though to the other kid.

vote = Brooklyn