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no feedin
no crew/d ridin/hatin votes
i'll spit first!
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10-15 lines
no feedin
no crew/d ridin/hatin votes
i'll spit first!
aight dawg im checkin in for ya
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alrite listen, yo yo, yo yo--
--black jack come back wen lines have elevated from "flat"/
"flat lines" the news n that black jack has 2 eat his food through tubes/
my lines so "phat" they cud do wiv liposucion, so y'all cud av a chance of winnin instead of a record deducion/
the poll 4 a election! an election where im gatherin all the affection, n u av 2 settle wiv overwhelmin rejection/
man ima infest in ya ears n nest, so wen ya rest my style can make ya heart pump through ya vest/
in this thread u my guest, n unless u already know the pigs lookin 4 u on suixide arrest/
battlin me? u might aswell get an uzi, n blow ya brains into sushi, cos u ment 2 bring a tight verse but ya bring yours loosely/
u from hong kong hope that don't mean u got sars, cos 1 thing u avn't got, is rhymes in barz--/
jails the nearest u bin 2 them n u enjoyed that cos u left wiv bum hole scars, your verse shud come in a vars--/
cos a battle means punches, n your verse the equivelent of flowers in bunches/
we came 2 this battle 4 sportin reasons but we leavin with "fillet" beef, cos im a thief whos robbin a bit of ya record n ya self belief/
relief is wot you feel wen i key in my last diss, i neva miss-wiv-a-diss while u do even wiv a pre-writtin list/
armaggedon started on febuary the nineth, the world's end began wen ya mum granted u wiv life/
bout 2 finish now but i'll be back 4 more, im closin the door but thats not the end of this lyrical war//
black jack's profile:
born= feb 9
lives= hong kong
o.k reply wen ya can dawg!
yo dw i will honestly hit dis up when black.jack spits..
but in the mean time can u honestly hit my battle up wid style..
cause it is bieng slept on.....
peace
come on black u droppin dawg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
yeah sorry man, had sum shit to take care of, aight i will drop soon, ill be quick puttin it together
Peace, and nice drop
Im a "Dope Verse Prostitute" the way niggaz line up to pay for my shit/
No concern bout ma vocab but cause just like an "Action Movie Handgun" im runnin wit an "Unlimited" clip/
My lyrical skills leavin me in a world of good livin whilst your obviously still "Mentally Health Stricken"/
Shit its bout time i change my name to "Undertaker" seein as im "Buryin" cats for a living/ (Undertaker buries people, my skill does on this site)
Like "murderin" with a handgun im not Hittin as Hard As I Can/
Thats why i plan to end your textcee career by gettin a shotgun n' Blowin Off Ya Hands/
Im the Microsoft X Box, The newest n' hottest Shit Around/
Your just the Nintendo 64, cause when compared to me you just get "Clowned"/
FINISHIN PUNCHES....
Like a cheap cologne I "Burn Ya" n "Sting Ya" upon Contact/
Speakin of contact your "lense" must be too blurred for u to look at my drops n claim "I Can Outplay That"/
THE CLOSER....
Carelessly I Rep Hong Kong, on this site its a move seen as Bold/
Whilst on this site your the reason for not f*ckin old people, CAUSE YA SHITS TOO OLD!!/
Chump.....
Aight peace out all, lets get sum votes in ere
nice....wut was ya name before blakc jack.. i remmemebr u tellin me before..im just curios...shits boggilin my mind..besides dat nice spit dw..but balck jack took it i was feelin his punches...even tho both verses where wak...because the punches where weak...u guys cuda use ahrder shit,,,,,dw actaully had a nnice intro..but lost hope from there...
vote...black.............hit dat up eiother u cats
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=64430
Dw, ya had some good stuff, but I think ya may have been concerned with making to much of a long post. Ya need to strengthen ya bars. Quality is always better than quantity.
I vote **Blackjack** cause his bars packed the quality that makes readers be like wow. Blackjack lead with wordplay, punches, and structure.
Im not sure, But i cant vote anyways
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...977#post610977
Hit me up there
Dw, ya had some good stuff, but I think ya may have been concerned with making to much of a long post. Ya need to strengthen ya bars. Quality is always better than quantity.
I vote **Blackjack** cause his bars packed the quality that makes readers be like wow. Blackjack lead with wordplay, punches, and structure.
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word guyz. dw much respect
yo dw i still think i could've taken u. i'll battle u again just not rite now. when i get some wins and even my record out then maybe we will. im probly gonna face xl rite now so hit it up
yo i think dw got this shit by betta punches, poll vote- dw, ey dw hit up this shit and poll vote for the best verse aight dawg, dont forget 2 poll vote, thanx http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=64729
alrite 3-1 to black thats rite y'all just vote 4 your favourite!
2 nice verses, black gud battle dawg!
uppin!!!!!!!!!!
hmm could youngbloods be a hate vote for me rippin his ass when he left the executives, i dont know but it looks that way, casue the whole crew jacked his ass includin me, anyway no dramas,
Lets get sum more votes in ere
Peace
Dw got this one for ju 1 reason... betta flow ... i really don't think either of them are great .. but overall Dw took it in my opinion..!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>
Black took this nice verse to both of ya.......nice punches but i thought black's were a bit harder so he gets my vote Vote=BlckQuote:
Originally posted by RIPallthat
Dw, ya had some good stuff, but I think ya may have been concerned with making to much of a long post. Ya need to strengthen ya bars. Quality is always better than quantity.
I vote **Blackjack** cause his bars packed the quality that makes readers be like wow. Blackjack lead with wordplay, punches, and structure.
K Yawll 1 more to close this out
Chid matic, why state ur opinion? its not needed
Last one uppin fo
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K YO EVERYONE< LETS GET THIS CLEANED OUT
NEED ONE MORE VOTE
DROP LINKS FOR VOTES ON BATTLES
PEACE
^^Word...Black Had Sum Creative Shit...dw Was Aight BUt Not Much Complexity...Sumthin For You To Work On...Nice Punches And Flow And Thats Why Black Took This...Respect To Both..
Vote - Black.Jack
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=64728
Thanx.