this battle is
20-30 lines
Yah know the rules
Ill spit 1st
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this battle is
20-30 lines
Yah know the rules
Ill spit 1st
Hey man, i cant spit right now cuz i have 2 active battles, I have to wait till one of them closes out.....ight? You can spit if ya want
I brought a Knife to a gun fight//
To killmyself twice to see what it felt like//
these lyrics i write, dont aply the Freedom of Information//
so danguarus five year olds get incarsarated for miss-behavin//
your a fourteen year old rapper in Identity crisis//
despite this, im spinless makin sure your instatustionlized mindless//
when you speak my name, it brings out a jewish burning spree//
god of chaos is me, and Duce I Rae is what you see//
Get your meanings stait before you speak of a name like me//
when you write your rhyemes its labor intensive//
Not to mention exspesive calling 1-900-rap-pers,
"I need lyrics and please make them afencive"//
so before you talk shit again think of that facts//
your fourteen fucken wit a man whos 24 who carrys an axe//
I swing that shit like a sycile//
chop ya head off like its a frozen pop-sycile//
Now that you opened your mouth you started this war//
deformed soars opened an toarn apart by lyrics that are two worlds apart//
Im coming after you to attack your weaknesses//
Confuss you like gods mother ta-reasa`s weaknessess//
I was produced to be a lyrical hybred//
taken two parental generation rappers crossbred//
What poped out is what you see now, a mutant rapper ten generations ahead//
so i can drop 30 lines rhyemen diss-pursed directions in reverse//
now just to catch on you have to think in mulitple directions//
Lost in the complex refelcitions of miss guided directions//
Now im here to collect on ya stollen lyrics you jacked,
form other rappers who I respect//
Now you fucked wit a profestional wit deadly tatcis//
I fire of lyrics like pac that are automatics//
but you do have one thing in common with 2 pac, you copyed his actin//
infact right to that T of crack addict actions//
you going to spit or what dogg, aight Peace
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hold on man...........igot shit to do................i'll spit as soon as i can...............................................
yo ill hit this up afta with a poll vote
******
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pEaCe
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G-Units "I Smell Pussy"
I smel...(scratch)
I smell, I smell...(error)
Damn, Lemme just make this straight...(HELL YEAH)
I SMELL PUSSY!
-Beat turned off- Lemme spit this off the top of my head...
*haha*
Ima bout to Merk this kid "duce" the amount of lines he spit//
I got "duce" the amount of gats u got, Hear it? "Click-click-click"//
Crowd: Murder him Slik!.....
Half the lines this kid spits are "bitten" cuz i can see the "tooth marks"//
and now that i've got it under "investigation", hes callin me a "knark"//
-This kid makes me laugh, Lemme Switch it-
Im about to make "50 cent" a little happier, and its not by being "laid"//
Eyo! 50, I just found the "fat kid that loves cake"!//
This kids so "fake", Just take a little water and rub "tru MC" off his fuckin "face"//
-mmmhmmmmm-
Im comin closer and closer, Inch by Inch, I aint even got a "dick", but i still got more "length"//
Man, You could never "CUM"(come) as far as me, Let me rederect you to the "sperm bank"//
Crowd: Feelin that one...Ouch....
Hey Ludicris! What do you if a bitch out disses you? ACT A FOOL!//
Welcome to the "real world" man, i think you tryin to skip a few "grades", just STAY IN SCHOOL!//
I think you need to slow ur self down, go back to music class, "Doe-rae-me"//
Listen to ur teacher, try "harder", dont be so playful-ly//
Crowd: Im likin this show...
-Lemme rise to the top-
The heat is rising, and so are my words, boy, I think its gettin way to "hot in hurrrr"//
Kid, you dont wanan step in my path, Im gettin millions of record deals, and ur still tryin to pass math//
-here we go-
Someone call the police i think this dude need a little "protection"//
Tell them to bring the "trogen" hes havin another "erection"//
-----Time to end this shit-----
This whole time i been rappin, you so amazed you didnt even "blink"//
I think i saw somebody lookin fo ya, oh yeah it was Ja and MURDA INC...
Crowd: AHHHHH...DAMN
Im out......payce
Let the votes begin............................................. .................................................. .........................................
uppin............................................. .................................................. .............................................1st.. .................................................. ....
Yo silk dont mean to change the subject but check you PM.. Peace
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My Pm dont work. Tell me right here.............................................. .................................................. ......
oh I just wanted to holla at you on aim or yahoo or msn can I have yours anyone one of them will work hehe
Aim- Freestylemyrhyme
2nd uppin...............Lookin fo votes............................................. ...............................
Ouch, damn, Duce... you ok? you got merked, lol, just kiddin, but yea, slik took this, that luda line was hilarious, i can't vote though, RB dont' let me, it always says i needa post an explanation even though i do, i liked how u set that battle up like if u were at a real battle, nice shit. Duce... u got some balls though goin up against a vet, and u had nice shit too... but not enough. peAce... no beef.
vote=slik...........merked wid punches flow n overall creation...............nice job............................................... ....
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Uppin again............2nd..........................or 3rd i think,..........................................
pretty much what everyone else said...Duce you gotta diss more
to much of yo shit was talkin bout how great you are, but no disses. Slik had betta wordplay and punches..
vote: Slik
slik took this battle, better word-play, his flow just came stronger than Tha Duce, good shit.
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This shit was all Slik. I dont even think I have to explain my vote.
poll vote = Slik
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Yea....What He SaidQuote:
Originally posted by Whyte Ave.
pretty much what everyone else said...Duce you gotta diss more
to much of yo shit was talkin bout how great you are, but no disses. Slik had betta wordplay and punches..
vote: Slik
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