aight
ill spit first
10-15 lines
no dr/crew votes
no feeding
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aight
ill spit first
10-15 lines
no dr/crew votes
no feeding
vote on this and ill return tha favor i promise
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=64159
drop a fair one on dis and when u's spit i'll give u one...........
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=64056
aight here we go
your ' sick in the brain', so i'm moving in for the kill//
I am also ' brain sick', the disease is called ' ILL'//
Your problem is too much 'c-o-2' , your thinking slow//
You wanted to take me on, so cmon, lets ' h-2-GO'//
I'm mounting my horse, your head is the saddle//
your half way up shit creek, and you dont have a paddle//
your starting more ' beef' than the owner of ' burger king' //
i 'slaughter' you just like him, you dont feel a thing//
Just like your avatar, your all ass and no legs//
Drop off the 'N', and i lay golden eggs// (Goosen-n=Goose)
It's hard to 'drive' me down, when you don't have any 'keys' //
The only reason your on this site, is because your paying fees//
You went to see a doctor, he told you you were fine//
that was until you met me, and now your on the flatline//
aight now u spit, good luck
lyrical assassin blastin past this motherfuckers ass so fast $$
i take and make his next breath just gasp and pass $$
im a newbie takin this fucking groupie middleweight to class $$
cant you see makin this featherweight out to be an ass $$
is as easy as a fat bitch in gym class is to harrass $$
my skills lap and pass this cat with my choice of words $$
makin goosens ass loosen cause this boys absurd $$
i hope the words in this lyric are felt and heard$$
trying to use me cause im a newbie but goosey you'll never get to me $$
cause your being rudly inturrupted $$
when i erupt and stuff 15 bars so far up your butt $$
gotcha lookin like some fag boy barz next slut $$
the next cuts deeper then my dick in your sisters bleeper$$
go head and call me out cuz im battleraps next keeper $$
this cats been sleign ive got my staddle straped cause imma text reaper $$
is jus my fight pass so when im done with YOU$$
YOU just might ask.. wats my past and where ive begun$$
look up your ass...its brainsick the unsung $$
and ive done rung this goosens bell on my way to crusin to hell
those bottom four bars...is jus shit i took out cuz i didnt like it
there not in the battle....
pz
i cant vote cause goosen is in my crew,
But Goosen took this if u want a legitimate comment,
better flow, wordplay and structure
Peace All
black jack...your legitimate comment is more like shit mixed wit vomit
legitimate comment//
shit mixed with vomit//
lemme break it down for you smack sacks
kill//....
ILL'//
slow//
h-2-GO'//
saddle//
paddle//
burger king' //
thing//
legs//
eggs// (Goosen-n=Goose)
'keys' //
fees//
fine//
flatline//
those were all one syllabilz....simple flow my momma can do that
here.....
off the top of my mother fucking god damn head/
is hair so there imma beat this fucker dead/
wow...gimme 13 wins
pretty much shows you wat blackjacks dumbass knows....lol
not one single multi in the whole thing
and yeh im stickin up for me cuz i aint gotta crew in hurr to come on here and say some shit when u aint even know ur shit bitch so suck a fucking dick dicklickin prick or did i say it too quick
put his shit on audio and lemme put my shit on audio and see whos shit is better.....FUCKIN MORONZ
how the fuck did this dude become 13-1
what the fuck is your problem, why dont u ask yourself why i have 13 wins? i wanna know what the fuck is different between mine and yours flow, other than the fact that you are a shitkicker who has no right to tell me how to battle? lol your a fucking hipocrit, the only multi in your whole battle is the multi shit lines you pulled. you fucking herb, know your role and fuck off.
HAHAAHAHAH U Jack goosens verse for bein too simple with one word syllabullz LoOK AT URS U FUCKIN HERB HAHAH its fuckin gay, and its all one word ryhim shit,
lyrical assassin blastin past this motherfuckers ass so fast $$<<
i take and make his next breath just gasp and pass $$<<
im a newbie takin this fucking groupie middleweight to class $$<<
cant you see makin this featherweight out to be an ass $$<<
is as easy as a fat bitch in gym class is to harrass $$<<
my skills lap and pass this cat with my choice of words $$
makin goosens ass loosen cause this boys absurd $$<<
i hope the words in this lyric are felt and heard$$<<
trying to use me cause im a newbie but goosey you'll never get to me $$
cause your being rudly inturrupted $$
when i erupt and stuff 15 bars so far up your butt $$<<
gotcha lookin like some fag boy barz next slut $$<<
the next cuts deeper then my dick in your sisters bleeper$$<<
go head and call me out cuz im battleraps next keeper $$<<
this cats been sleign ive got my staddle straped cause imma text reaper $$<<
HAHAHAA FUCKIN HERB everyting with an arrow are ur gay supposed "creativity" hahaha Battle Me Fuck Head N THen Ull Get Merked By Two Execs. within 24 hours hahaha See if u game Chump
aight uppin for votes on
goosen vs fucking herb
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Although Brainsick did have better multies than Goosen...in the end it's all about the punchez in battlez...multiez are a good seasoning of course but they shouldn' be ya main objective...and in my opinion Goosen had betta punchez...
so vote=Goosen
FUCK!!!!!! this shit won't let me poll vote...what's the use of voting if ya vote don't count?????? This is some bullshit!!!!!!
quite close in the end this 1, but goosen took it 4 beta flow! both ad punches n wordplay but goosens flow was hot, av seen beta from u though goose! lol! gud battle!
vote-goosen
goosen got this. betta flow n punches i'll poll soon yo peep me and dw's battle and j blaze's and me 2
Well, Goosen took this one cuz his was more like a battle rap.
Not sure what the other guy was spittin...
It was ok, just not what I'd define as a true diss verse.
Pretty weak. Not forceful at all.
Goosen came soft but had everything he needed to take this cat.
Metas and punches, and wordplay were clearly better.
I meant to say Goosen came "softer than usual"...
Up there!
In my last post.
In case ya needed further explanation or thought I was contradicting myself.
Ok, Goosen Took this with that little thing called...umm lets see....
WORDPLAY!!!!!!
Heres the line that won it....
your ' sick in the brain', so i'm moving in for the kill//
I am also ' brain sick', the disease is called ' ILL'//
Nice job man
Hit up mine wit MC_Master_MC
goosen took this, aight
vote=goosen
peace!!!
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uppin for the last vote to finish this one off
drop a link and ill return the favor
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goosen got it vote on my battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show.................
It was close , but when all is said and Done Goosen takes the Cake.
#1 , Better Flow ( Close , but Goosen edges out )
#2 , Goosen had better punchlines
#3 The $$ sign after sentence got boring to look at , took away from your verse for me at least
#4 Goosen a Battle prooven Vet , and to take him out , you have to Knock him out , and although you stung him with a few jabs and crosses , you didn't hit him with a flooring blow.
Vote - Goosen
CrazyE