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Ima ask you a favor, Could you spit first? I got a shitload of things to do, like shower and fuckin chores, but ima hit ya back right after im done, and i gotta run to the store. Otherwise, I would go first. Sorry Dawg.
Just Keep it real
-out-
Nah dawg, i gotta lot a shit to do as well, i'll wait for you to spit first.....I'll be right after..................... jus don't take like 5 hours to drop though.............
imma vote on this.........
in the mean time...hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...light=vendetta
Checkin this...
Grabbin the Mic, Watch the Personals....
Ima do 5 bars instead...
Beat...
Taktik is a "dirty" spitter around here, so im offerin him a clean- "tictac", you probably aint even black, callin me a nigga and you aint even got a Gat//1
as a matter of fact, he sayin he from a "ghetto", i dont believe that shit, even if he was a "poor" fellow//2
HELLO? The ghetto consists of gats and "nines", damn you wouldnt "fine" even if you did go over the "speed limit" sign, So now im dissin your hood by "crossin the T's and Dottin the I's"//3 (hes from T Dot, look in profile)
You must be out-of-your-"mind", cuz to last here you gotta have the "brains", and not only fit "in" but be "sane"// 4 (insane, Get it?)
Its just so simple and plain, becuz my words come at you with "speed", bitch you aint like me, the only way you make it "high" is if you use "weed"//5
Done.....
wow looked like al ot more when i was writin it, but that is 5 bars, its just all spaced out a lot i guess.....but whatever, that would be ten lines.....I'll fix it...
Taktik is a "dirty" spitter around here, so im offerin him a clean- "tictac", you probably aint even black, callin me a nigga and you aint even got a Gat//1
as a matter of fact, he sayin he from a "ghetto", i dont believe that shit, even if he was a "poor" fellow//2
HELLO? The ghetto consists of gats and "nines", damn you wouldnt "fine" even if you did go over the "speed limit" sign, So now im dissin your hood by "crossin the T's and Dottin the I's"//3 (hes from T Dot, look in profile)
You must be out-of-your-"mind", cuz to last here you gotta have the "brains", and not only fit "in" but be "sane"// 4 (insane, Get it?)
Its just so simple and plain, becuz my words come at you with "speed", bitch you aint like me, the only way you make it "high" is if you use "weed"//5
Done.....
man now it just looks shitty...................oh well, i guesss it doesnst matter what it looksl ike, just check the punches and shit man.......10 lines......whatever........5 bars.......Good enough........Blah, im out......
Check Personals
it looks more like 5 lines...............yo I'm bout to drop my shit now yo................................................ ........good spit
Fatal Executives Representative Presents.........LOOK OUT BELOW
I spit verbs~to~break~herbs, I strait~urge~you~make~sure, that before you make~yours, you learn~to~evade~words//1
Learn to embrace~hurt, verse~after~verse dispurt, you frantically open ya rhyme book, make sure your 'Microsoft "works"'//2(pre-wrote)
My metaphors metamorph to textual dinosaurs, they rip through ya letters like flesh, tearin' up ya 'beef' like rapid carnivores//3
Bleedin~gore, punches make your teeth~no~more, you can't rap 'tuff' you'd need to 'freeze~an~apple' to rap 'hard~CORE'//4
Fatal Executives sworn, wit a mic~n~keys in hand when I was born, i'm 'on-top' of your 'lines' like standing on a 'prisoner~in~uniform'//5(lined shirts??)
This shit I spit is twister~formed, flyin~cows and farms~deformed, this verse like a 'hurricane' here's the i of my 'storm'//6(eye)
you rhymes~a~flop, 'fumble' lines to drop, you wouldn't even get a 'stage~cordinator' to give your rhymes 'props'//7
i wasn't sure if these were either long lines or bars so I just made 7.........let the voting begin
Fatal Executives Representative Presents.........LOOK OUT BELOW
I spit verbs~to~break~herbs, I strait~urge~you~make~sure, that before you make~yours, you learn~to~evade~words//1
Learn to embrace~hurt, verse~after~verse dispurt, you frantically open ya rhyme book, make sure your 'Microsoft "works"'//2(pre-wrote)
My metaphors metamorph to textual dinosaurs, they rip through ya letters like flesh, tearin' up ya 'beef' like rapid carnivores//3
Bleedin~gore, punches make your teeth~no~more, you can't rap 'tuff' you'd need to 'freeze~an~apple' to rap 'hard~CORE'//4
Fatal Executives sworn, wit a mic~n~keys in hand when I was born, i'm 'on-top' of your 'lines' like standing on a 'prisoner~in~uniform'//5(lined shirts??)
This shit I spit is twister~formed, flyin~cows and farms~deformed, this verse like a 'hurricane' here's the i of my 'storm'//6(eye)
you rhymes~a~flop, 'fumble' lines to drop, you wouldn't even get a 'stage~cordinator' to give your rhymes 'props'//7
here's the spaced version, sorry bout that
taktik gets my vote his rhyming was tight and flowing
Silk your shit was good aswell but didnt flow aswell!!
I vote taktik!!!!!!!!!
Can you guys check out my battles against thugzdocry and deceased, cheers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
nice spit man, guesss i just wasnt in the mood to battle.....but yeah whatever...Props....No beef..................
But yo, Pretty good fo a 14 yr old girl right? .................Just keepin it real.....................................
Yeah that was pretty good, regardless if yous a girl or not, femcees can be ill too....................anyways,,,,,,,,,,,,,UPPIN 4 VOTES PPL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Leave a link, i'll look at ya battles and leave an honest vote.......uppin da votes
im gon have to go with silk on this one homie
that shit was tough this is a tight battle
good luck for both of you
yall should have a round 2 up in this bitch
I go for taktik, flow and structure was tight..........
Slik was slik too, but taktik had the edge
finish this, 2 more votes needed......
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=63964
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ghlight=spirit
^^ hit this up afta i poll vote (like 5 more posts)
vote.......slik.......
had good multi's n stuff 2 bad u messed your struct up but i think you got this vote
I though taktic was a little better flow
both had good pucnhes
taktic had better vocab
silk needs work
vote even thogh it does not count- taktic
This is good..............Keep em comin............................................. .................................................. ...........
Yo ppl explain your votes.....can't jus say "tight battle,you get my vote"............uppin 4 votes ppl, leave a link and I'll hit it up with an honest and truthful vote..............UPPIN
hit this up and you'll get my honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...440#post607440
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good battle but taktik edged it outQuote:
Originally posted by str8 jacket
I though taktic was a little better flow
both had good pucnhes
taktic had better vocab
silk needs work
You voted already you fuckin clown, you bitches who vote for favors PURELY are faggots, if I were to hit up your battle rite now, you'd probably vote for me even though you already voted for Slik!!! Get da fuck outta here
^^^^^That's directed to REC............................................... ..............................................
good battle
^^^^its all been said
vote=taktik...............
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Damn this is a tight one enjoyed reading both verses,
But taktik had nice flow and structure in punces and all
Slik had a nice verse tho was feeling both of you....much props to both of you .....but i thought taktik had a better overall tho Vote=Tak
tak-tik in a complete blo-out...dunno what happend sli...i seen much betta...vote taktik...good drop man...