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Okay,you know the regular rules
10-25 lines.
no feedin
abd all that other bullshit
you're in Detroit right now,you know what time it is.I'm about to go to sleep.It's 4:16. you can drop your verse if you want.I will be back on tomorrow or Monday.
or I might post tonite..I dont know.
I had a feelin you wasn't going to drop first......oh,well.
This nigga the type of rapper that make Detroit look bad/
He go to Redford high,I should beat the shit out of him with his book bag/
He must don't know,I'm the illest 14 year old on Rapbattles/
I punches connect so hard it will hurt his fuckin shadow/
I pick up the lyrical gun and just spray/
Pick up the world,and smash the ground with your face/
Just because I'm a 'vet' doesn't mean I can't send you to the 'docter'/
Get a check up bitch,pull your neck up bitch/
I want my hits to connect to the jaw/
So I can rip thru your body like a dog with a steak that raw/
I will attack your cerebral membrane/
While I assasinate your phyisical frame/
My lyrics will shut down your liver/
And have your ass running crazy down Grand River/
**Redford Highschool is a school in Detroit.It's in the ghetto where niggas get jumped and shit for no reason.lol**
**Grand River is the name of the street Redford is on.It's one of the longest,busiest streets in Detroit.Alot of crazy mothafuckas be walkin up and down Grand River.**
Ayo check it
Nice verse.PSYCHE!!Well i lied//
That verse was ~dead~like you injected every line with
~formaldehyde~//(stuff morticians use for dead bodies)
This battle is embarrasing,you better take your last look//
You live by Redford,but don't wanna come because you know you'll get yo ass whooped//
Run from the battle,you known to be an escapist//
~Your ass is mine~like I was a ~anal addicted~ rapist//
Wanna collect some rhymes, here you can keep these//
You could'nt ~spit good shit~ if you ~regurgitating nutritious feces~//(regurgitating=throwing up)
Use a reminder ,so you won't forget me ,copy down my lyrics and keep notes//
I bet if we were battling face-to-face,you would ~choke~ like a
~virgin that tries to deepthroat~//
Man I'm through this faggot is done//
Could'nt keep your girl because she found out your "gagdet" is
"young"//
Could battle Gagdet.
Now it's time to uppin 4 votez...........
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like I said Gagdet nothing but respect.
GOOD SHIT
yo young got this in my eyes, more complex and more punches....
Floh:y
Creativity:both
Complexity:y
Punches:y
Overall:y
Vote:y
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=63214 is where ya need to direct ya poll vote ............
vote-Young
better punches and flow.....pretty much everything....
return the favor...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=63774
how come you didnt poll vote?^^^^
Damn....this nigga ripped the shit out of me...I under estimated you......if I lose I got nothing but respect to you.....damn...we from Detroit,we dont play games...for some reason,this battle made me hype...
Yo hit my shit up with N Telekt// and wen i get 100 post ill come back and poll vote// but Young definetly got this battle with better almost everything// but great battle good job guys
but im not poll voting till u hit my shit up k guys//
ay dis battle was sick in my opinion props 2 both
can yall peep mine
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=63590
yo young u got this shit homie, i was feelin his flow a whole lot more, poll vote-young, ey young hit this up and poll vote for the bedt verse, don't forget to poll vote aight dawg, thanx
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=63755
Bitch I should get you banned...I dont want your stinkin ass vote if you want me to cheat for your wack...if you post in any of my battle,I might have to bless you with a loss.Quote:
Originally posted by Restricted
Yo hit my shit up with N Telekt// and wen i get 100 post ill come back and poll vote// but Young definetly got this battle with better almost everything// but great battle good job guys
but im not poll voting till u hit my shit up k guys//
you herb.
Seems like this battle is gonna go to you Gadget.
Man keep up the good shit .
.................................................. ..........O-N-E
Couldn'a said it better myself, Cerebral ripped on em, My vote goes to CA, as for Young G, I've seen U come better than this.Quote:
Originally posted by younggadget
how come you didnt poll vote?^^^^
Damn....this nigga ripped the shit out of me...made me hype...
Vote= CA
A ya'll hit up my battles against X-Ecution and Youngblood
shit,I'm not going to even perp...if I could vote I would have voted for you.After you dropped your verse Iwas nervous as hell.But yo,join my crew...Ghetto Animosity..I'm trying to get all the niggas thats in Detroit to join.So we can be like the best crew and know each other 4 real.Hit me up with a pm.
Thanx 4 the vote Ice berg.
Keep em coming.
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uppin...............................O-N-E
Yo back here Y im comin back 2 poll vote
but YO plz both of u hit up my battle with N-Telekt//
come on boyz give back the favor for poll votin here//
so plz poll vote on my battle//
Quote:
Originally posted by cerebral assasin
Seems like this battle is gonna go to you Gadget.
Man keep up the good shit .
.................................................. ..........O-N-E
real detroit battle....this joint was weak i obviously cant vote cause that would be hate but young is weak to me i beat you already stop comin to my battles and postin shit id be glad to merk you again if you want but if not then dont let my name come out ya mouth
Gotta throw to Cerebral on this...
For way harder punches.
Everything the other guy said was alright...
He just didn't hit near as hard...
And that closer was tight...
Holla back, please...
Hellraizor.....you can go lick a giant fly's ass hole and then you can go lick a chipmunk's nuts.....you wack ass bitch...you only beat me by one vote....you wack ass nigga....you aint shit...dont make me start dissing your ass.
Yo, my vote goes fo young......betta punches, betta flo, nice creativity. Good job, dawg. If u wan' go to Gangsta One VS. fine fellow to vote. That lil' faggot is pissin' me off....vote if ya wan', thx.