The Alliance... Thug Whyte vs. TruthZ ...Mask Murderous
rules....
10 - 20 lines
no hatin
no d/r
no freepostin
no crew
no bitin
no feedin
And looks like i'll prolly lose since im goin
first...but its all good...............- O n e
Deadline : Sunday by 11 pm. Eastern Time
Goodluck bro and let tha best emcee win....
lmao at this 11 PM deadline...i'll get it to ya by
12 since im workin till 11 fag............................
ight faggot whatever.. fuck tha respect i gave you bitch
..: loosen up :..
Lyrics are TRUTH.. and the truth is you cant spit good 'lyrics'.. battle?this kid was 'serious'.. fuck commas.. im markin my 'period' before i give him a chance for his 'appearences' .. me dawg? you gotta kid-me-yo//
Naht even begun to hit wit 'persission yet'.. as soon as you spit the ppl turnin you off like bad networks on 'television sets'.. your like bad movies.. they just wait for the video //
Ima un-'MasK' 'MurderouS' weapons.. fuck guns.. I'm commin at chu wit knives and Hatchets//
Tennis 'rackets, suckin u up like vaccumm cleaner 'attachments'.. consider this a Pay-per-view match only wit sum murda captions//
..: Wheres my flow at.. ahh there is it :..
Rules said no feeding, said he wouldn't.. more like he couldn't even if I fed-him-it//
Thinkin he's 'illiterate, consider it'.. couldn't understand my style if someone 'readin-him-it'.. he got a lil speech 'impediment'..what I ‘SAID-I-MEANT’ (sediment) .. its only my ettiquette//
Kickin him out so he can 'pack-for-homes' screw up his system like 'fractured-bones' .. outta place like gay kids in 'ghettos'.. told me to research so i did.. dont know why i took my time to have read those//
Thought he was ill.. sounded a bit like nas..then i realized it was *stillmatic* in my 'head-phones'.. I'm sick .. so nasty like Taco Bells' 'burritoes'.. he dont wanna battle, hes pretendin like 6 year olds in their fathers' tuxedos//
I'ma snap ure lights out like clappers//
Mask Murderous known for Mods friends'.. naht for their 'rappers'.. Compares our rank like we wuz playin 'shoots and ladders'//
Extend the 'violence', amazement in ure 'eye-lids' .. wadaya say? reveresed your invertebra 'spineless' but do it in all 'kindness'.. thats just my science//
'Multiplyin' fast balls from Nolan 'Ryans'.. breaks winds' 'silence'.. Knockin headaches like excederins to veterans.. be like "You miss me" no hassle this was "risk-free" all expenses paid for by your friends posted at the Alliance//
Thinks hes gunna let 'me go' cuz of his 'ego'.. "your gunna spit first, ima new emcee" how stupid can ONE 'be'.. when it says in your sig tha total wins from 'RB' is fifty two and 'three'//
But you 'consistently pitfully hittin me' wit weak metephores and 'similies'..bullshit words.. nohit nouns pitiful verbs.. chances of beatin me: Slim-to-me-served//
but..but..but fuck ya.. ima leave you exuseless//
You a 'nuinsanse' im exposin you 'exclusive'.. how many times I gotta tell you.. ure rhymes against me are useless//
Im past punchlines.. thinkin I should give out sum pointers, cuz you well-in-last//
You a bitch like golf 'caddies' in rice 'paddies'.. if you a big man then remove the bra and 'panties' .. I've heard shit like yours from rejects from mtv's Mc Battle Telecast//
..: Time to say good-bye :..
Ima slice you into 'pieces' like 'deceased kids' nephews and 'neices' get into your formalities find the 'weakness'.. drownin you in talent til you get 'sea sick' breakin you down worse than Martin Luther statin his 95 'theisis'.. I'll leave you sum dignity, i dont take ownership.. i take 'leases' wit 'leashes'.. Im spittin better werds even when i open my mouth to burp//
I 'insert herbs' to 'curbs' or whichever the 'Tide-turns'.. smack you so hard wit tha mic, imprints make out ure 'side-burns'.. I Impare-face catch him when he aint lookin, knockin you down 12 steps like this was a STARE-case .. still wanna approach the stageare his deadliest 'verbs' I 'heard'..you just got 'merked.. sorry dawg but The Truth Hurts//...
*TRUTHZ*
SHIT!.... I KNOW I'M FUCKED.. I GOT MERKED
LOL NICE SHIT DAWG... WAY TO REP.........................................
lmao holy shit son...i didnt know that "10-20 Lines''
was equivalent to 4 chapters from the new harry
potter book...fuckin bendin rules..bitch move...........
two can play this game....
*Ahem...BITCH*
"TRUTH" is..son..ya wack at this game and that verse was pure killer
Killer as in a bitch to read..felt like a Dentist with that amount of Filler// :) ha
I'm tryin to HELP ya son...still wouldnt be ILL if i put my AID to your chest
I told him to "go to battle prepared"..he went to OLD NAVY and bout a "tech-vest"//
Wanna serve me? Need more than tennis rackets to re-arrange my magic
"REVERSE" my knowledge...faggot's "candy coated" and fears my "TAC-TICKS"//
Everybody knows that REAL THUGS aint WHYTE
Peep his pic...kid's got pussy lips so he thinks he spits tight//lmao
*God-damn...give up allready*
Bitch i'll hand it to ya...ya wordplay play is SO-SO at best
Only time it's GREAT? is when im listening while DEF //
I aint even post a verse and his crews allready givin him credit..
If the shit was so good son...look at the bottom of the screen...whyd ya have to EDIT? lmao // herb
I don't regret this shit..spit fiber-optic shit that transmit and leave ya hollo-tip lit
Leave his dick like broken triggers..TRUTH is it wont fire no matter how hard u pull it // HAHAHA
Twisted ya shit...I aint know FLAMERS were now ELEMENTS {peep his sig}
Give u This...He obviously aint a PANSY...heard he was suckin pretty good wit TWO-LIPS {Tulips} // lol
*Shitt....Finish him in 12 Lines? lets see*
Should call you a "masked" murderous..the way ya throwin so many BLIND shots
Illiterate bitch..Told him to "Clutch a hollow tip" and he started "rubbin my Crotch" //
My lines consist of ALCOHOL to get you faster to a level of WASTING
"Get a hold of yaself" son..couldnt come to grips even while he is masterbating // Ouch
I AM one of RBs chosen..dub me with the title "GOLDEN" and witness me "NEVER BURNED" {old alias was Golden One}
Let me put it to ya easily...Beatin me is beatin God at creation...The TrutH is never learned //
Sendin a suburban white kid to rap against me? Kid so PALE he's bound to get BURNT
I give lessons on gunplay...This THUG so WHYTE he thought Smith-an-Wesson was a law firm // Geez lol
Done at 11:53...7 mins before deadline...Edited
for Spelling
Pz
Flow:Thug
MEtas:Thug
Punches:TRuthz
Disses:Truthz
funny:Truthz
i like both verse.......both were maddddd hot but thug added things that wernt allways needed just to add in his flow and like truthz was real personial n tight i liked it funny as shit n hot punches nice battle from both but i think PUNCHES is what wins and truthz took it holla
Oh k Whyte Thug Just Had The Worst Structured Verse I Have Ever Seen..They Were The Most Stretched Bars In History Man...Thruthz took this Overall with hardness and non-played or corny punchlines...
I aint even post a verse and his crews allready givin him credit..
If the shit was so good son...look at the bottom of the screen...whyd ya have to EDIT? lmao // herb
I don't regret this shit..spit fiber-optic shit that transmit and leave ya hollo-tip lit
Leave his dick like broken triggers..TRUTH is it wont fire no matter how hard u pull it //
^^Pretty Much Owned HIm There...^^Coulda Quoted Much More...
Vote=TruthZ
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Yo man damn..Thug Whyte's was just had the worst flow I think I have ever seen. He could of summed a lot of dat shit up and made it sound a lot better. TruthZ definiatly came hard and his shit was straight to the point and with a terrific flow.
Better punches and flow=TruthZ=Vote
~1~
yea i have seen way better from thugwhyte and truthz verse was mad hot fo real, so my vote goes to truthz
poll vote-truthz
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Uppin for one more vote
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IM IN I.L.L. SO I DONT THINK I COULD VOTE SO I REALLY WONT IF I CANT
LET ME KNOW IF I COULD VOTE BECAUSE IF I CANT THEN I DONT WANNA BOTHER WASTING A VOTE & SHIFT VOTES YOU KNOW
Congratz.. u beat me, nice shit dawg..
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umm...uppin for another vote....
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Originally posted by TruthZ
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umm...uppin for another vote....
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Uppin this shit for TruthZ to get tha shit ended....... - O n e
............props whether u wanna give me mine or not...
Def got props...ya came nice, just even out your
bar structure and shit, it'll help with flow and delivery..
They were VERY uneven at times and i think thats
where i merked u...just some helpful advice, take it
or leave it cuz theres NO beef intended..
Uppin for a vote
TRUTHZ.......in all he areas hand of god stated
Thug ya piece, was hard to follow the structure, then combined with truthz slightly better punches u lost out a bit
TRUTHZ GETS POLL VOTE
I Need Sum Fair Votes Here, Two dick ryders have fucked it up
Peace
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