aight 10 lines max
no crew/ hatein shit
I'm spittin first check in
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aight 10 lines max
no crew/ hatein shit
I'm spittin first check in
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Yo Xceltiz what I kid the only thing you gona be excelin in is getin a quicker trip to rappers hell kid//
Besides a joka I'm also good at knife throwin, I hit you in the heart and my rhymes make your blood start flowin//
Your covered in crimson, I'm a bullet engine and your just a train, Your getting your ass kicked by a joka in this game//
I'm kickin your ass like a shadow, you aint to the skills to handle my battle'//
Your body is broken, and so is your brain, I'm not in this game for mutual game I'm here to kill the niggaz like you that spit lame//
Out of the 52 cards you drew from the deck, I'm only joka you drew who shot you in the back//
uppin I hope you spittin dawg
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i see u think ur a big fat joka...so-il-lay-this-down as serious as playing poka//1
dont get ur bicth here cos il just chock ha....she-trys-dancing-with-me as if was living a loka//2
its-as-i've-been-cloned cos u see me everywhere.... on the microphone//3
making beats....from zone 2 zone on the piano to the xylaphone//4
il break your bones,spit at u and chuck stones, you'll be crying like a baby saying leave me alone//5
i dont care if ur not ready.. u cant prospone, cos il sniff u out stronger than womens colone//6
il break your door, just make u look like a fool, then il deliver the c4//7
for shore my lyrics are hotter than earths crust or core//8
finsh you off with my supreme text,shooting lyrics like a beam u dont know wats next//9
il get u vexed and just jack ur avirex...cos i dint give a shit if u sign fancy cheques//10
Aight this was good that was good
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i no i cant vote but if i cud i wud really ave to go with Xceltiz
he had better word play and use of vocab aswell as structure.
punches werent really there but still better from Xceltiz.
not bad for a newbie battle...
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Animal
Yea he was a newb so I didn't wanna hit him to hard. It was better then I thought it would be.
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this was a good battle
but ill have to vote xceltz
on this battle
better word play,funny,u knocked this other kid out of this battle u took it all the way
nice battle, I'm a newb myself. Joka my man, you let him get in on you....
Xceltiz great job, way to take advantage of the situation......
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yo dont upp your shit more than 5 times you can get banned for that homie
upp this homie
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=62515
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holy shit i dint know abou that please dont ban me im new...... so what do u mean u cant up 5 times at once.............................................. .................................................. .........
no you can't up your rap battles mor ethen 5 times
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that means the joka gets an automatic win............................................... ..................................................
both flows sucked....i'm goin with da joka..cuz i felt his disses a little bit more then x's....vote=da joke....oneeeeeeeeee
or it means u shut up................................................ .................................................. ..whatever constant coming with somebody 12-31 HAHAHAHAHA. lmao
infact i take it a s acomplement u voted 4 him cos if u voted 4 me i would be imbrassed 2 get a vote from a poor emceee lol man how did u lose 32 is what im wondering?
well i want to know why this is getting slept on nobody eva wants to vote on your battle but the always exspect your votes how enoying and i cant vote or i would,
are u acknowledgin that u want us to believe that u wanted to go easy on him and didnt want to show ur real skills? or are u tryin to cover up that he's possibly better than you?Quote:
Originally posted by Da Joka~
Yea he was a newb so I didn't wanna hit him to hard. It was better then I thought it would be.
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^ personaly...i think it was the second oneQuote:
Originally posted by Hypnotic
are u acknowledgin that u want us to believe that u wanted to go easy on him and didnt want to show ur real skills? or are u tryin to cover up that he's possibly better than you?
lol. sry but i really dont think u where tryin hard enough... and um.. ur a n00b to just to point tha out!
i was feelin xceltics verse alot more than joka's. i thought it had batter flow and punches.
i felt it was better so it gits my vote.
Xceltiz took it betta everything im out holla
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cool thanks for voting and i dont know why that guyy da joka said that and plus for some reason i WONDER WHY the end banned him look on da joka signature
so who is the joka then has the end found out he must be a expert who has many nicknames and i aint eve ngot my win from him yet
Xceltiz Won This Battle Betta Punches No Doubt............................................. .................................................. ..........1
i think da joka undermester mated this guy u need some punchlilnes thou xceltiz good battle vote = xceltiz=========================================== =
i coundlt poll it
punchlines=both
worldplay=xceltiz
multi=xceltix
flow=xceltiz
vote=xceltiz
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erm i think xceltiz won this
both of them were good
for a newbie game
but xceltiz had some nice multi's and some nice worldplay and some good flow
vote=xceltiz