iight 10 lines
you drop first,
no dr hate or crew votez,
no bitin recyclin or editin,
check in and spit
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iight 10 lines
you drop first,
no dr hate or crew votez,
no bitin recyclin or editin,
check in and spit
Once again the shadow creeps on a foe, you got no place to go, and for your pleasure I'll make your death slow//
You say your a verbalrapist but I see no relation, the fact of the matter is that your about to get raped kid//
I'll creep insde your body and hit the brain first, that blow'll run down your spine and stop all then nervs, the translation is that they won't work//
After that'll I hit you strait in the chest I hope you got a bullet proof vest or your ready to rest in hell, oh well...//
I'll rip you from head to toe, you'll have no place to go, after all no one wants a nigga who can't flow//
Its time for you to rest in your coffin, once your dead that will stop your from coughin your whack rhymes//
Once again the shadow his spit his shit and will be takein this win//
Uppin
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this shadow aint fierce, hes juss afraid of himself, this shadow wouldnt be undetectible, if he was comin in stealth,
you fear for your life, so im grabbin my knife, and you wont see it comin but your dieing tonight, without puttin up a fight,
my skillz are massive, but my advantage is slight, tha only way i lose, is if this kid decided to bite,
iight this shadow couldnt be fierce, cuz my punches go thru his chest, and my verses are the best,
still couldn,t spit flavorfull flows if your name was eMCee zest, especially at me, cuz im killin this pest,
this aint a battle it's a lyrical test, that ends by voters sayin, Verbal's verse, hit it unlike tha rest
need i say whack, damn you should seriously, never rap, or youll see me come to bust a cap,
imma snap, and strap this cat to an electric chair, im comin nuclear style, while he's in diapers playin truth or dare
Aight not bad dawg
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good verse yourself, this should be a good battle............................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ......
oh sorry I was tryin to do anything I was just tryin to help you done
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it's iight when they vote the'll explain it and that's how i find out what i need to work on................................................ .................................................. ...............
Uppin lets get some votes!!!!!
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UPPIN COME ON WE NEED VOTES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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uppi for votes, don't sleep on this.............................................. .................................................. ......................................
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this has been slept on for a whil lets get tha votez in
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uppin............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ......
uppin this holla front............................................. .................................................. ................................
verbal rapist had this in my opinion peep my battle at
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show.................
i seen no effort in Feirce's verse whatsoever
i give this to verbal for his attempt to win............................................... ...........................................
Aight, Verbal Rapist, U Got This As U Would Have Thought
Better Flow And Structure, Big Time
Better Punches N Well Thought Shit, Nice Stuff In There
Both of you, just needa work on uppin ya vocabs, way ta do that, keep droppin ya shit, verbal u not as much, u almost there man, keep it up
Shadow, u needa work on ur structure, and ur flow, aka. its gotta roll smoothly. Try gettin sum more complexity in ya pieces as well
Good Job Both Of Ya
VERBAL GETS POLL VOTE
Hit dis up dawg, bit of a merkin on the cat by me but oh well, a fair vote is needed
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...899#post608899
uppin this shit.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..................
VR gets my Vote. Fierce Shadow didn't rythme at certain times and VR had better Flow and Punches. Nothing Spectacular , but he got the JOB done , and sometimes thats all you need to do around here. Also FS , if your gonna translate your verse for us , use Parenthesis , otherwise it looks like its part of ya rythme and it convolutes the verse.
VOTE - Verbal Rapist
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...5&pagenumber=1
Need 1 vote , but an "Honest" one
Peace , CrazeE
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i agree with him^ and verbal here is a tipQuote:
Originally posted by Black.Jack
Aight, Verbal Rapist, U Got This As U Would Have Thought
Better Flow And Structure, Big Time
Better Punches N Well Thought Shit, Nice Stuff In There
Both of you, just needa work on uppin ya vocabs, way ta do that, keep droppin ya shit, verbal u not as much, u almost there man, keep it up
Shadow, u needa work on ur structure, and ur flow, aka. its gotta roll smoothly. Try gettin sum more complexity in ya pieces as well
Good Job Both Of Ya
VERBAL GETS POLL VOTE
stop uppin or you'll get disqualified....the max is 5 ups
aight...just tryin to save you
props to both
peace
good battle so fair u 2................................................. ................................
fair=far my fault............................................. .................................................. ........
i giv this 1 to verbalist ... shadow had no flow at all ......and if u got the time to get killed i wanna battle u shadow..!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>!<>
nice...Quote:
Originally posted by Black.Jack
Aight, Verbal Rapist, U Got This As U Would Have Thought
Better Flow And Structure, Big Time
Better Punches N Well Thought Shit, Nice Stuff In There
Both of you, just needa work on uppin ya vocabs, way ta do that, keep droppin ya shit, verbal u not as much, u almost there man, keep it up
Shadow, u needa work on ur structure, and ur flow, aka. its gotta roll smoothly. Try gettin sum more complexity in ya pieces as well
Good Job Both Of Ya
VERBAL GETS POLL VOTE
verbal got this by wordplay
good effort 2 u both.............................................. ..................