aiight
10-20 lines
no dickridin' /crew/ or hatin' votes
i'll spit first
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aiight
10-20 lines
no dickridin' /crew/ or hatin' votes
i'll spit first
your words are un-interpretable like "dutch" schultz' speech on his death bed...
from the way you write i'd guess that it was you who had been filled full of lead...
you can't speak English son its like you talk in double "dutch"... (double dutch = bad English)
you walk with a limp but its ya tongue that needs a crutch...
your rhymes are outta date like moldy edam cheese... (edam = a cheese made in holland)
they are messy like a kid using fondu...it needs a touch of expertise...
i've seen your wack shit before, you put up less resistance than your country did in WW2...
you had a fuckin' smaller army than your wack n.y.g crew...
your lyrical flow would find it hard to form a puddle...you don't have the capacity...
mine would flood the netherlands with such mutherfuckin' verocity...
to see your mum you have to go window shopping... (hookers in amsterdam sell themselves in window shops)
but the bitch is so ugly people just walk past without stopping...
she's on the game, she sells home runs so she can support you...
but she don't have to earn much, you want clogs not the new nike tennis shoe...
the ho plays with more bones than an archaeologist...
the only way you will touch a pussy is if you become a 'gynae'-cologist...
your structure is fucked, it resonates more than the tocoma bridge... (resonated so much it collapsed)
it contains more lard than bizarre's fridge...
van gough showed more creativity than you when he cut off his ear...
you have more chance of winnin' this than a sniper failin' to slay a blind dear...
ThugzDoCry's mom in the window:
http://www.drsusanblock.com/travel/AmsterHooker.gif
Bitch..what the fuck's wrong with you..try to stand up to a hell-raizor//
Thinking you a thug..playing all day long with fake-laser//*A kids game with laser guns
Continue cuz now you have a reason to shit in you pance...you face me the E-razor//*He shits in bed so, now he has reason
You a woman..trapped in a men's body..you dream of being a ~fem..//*female
Plz fuck-face jus stop with your wack ideas of being a ~lesbian//
Cuz even if you change you'll be so ugly you still can't get a ~wife//
Bitch Jus face it yo so weak as a childmolester facing ~triple-life...//
You little wanksta' reppin your crew all day long to the Fake-ist you life-less rapist//
When home alone full of make-up...walking round in a ~dress//
Stupid fuck your made to ~fail..steeling pennies from ~home-less//
So you can save fo your operation to be a (Real) ~she-male//
Cant you spit bout something else than whore's in Amsterdam damn.
that shit's old-fashion be creative and come up with something new ..damn
And you need a pic to support your wack verse ?? damn thats fake
you scared your shit dsnt cut it without a pic ? lol
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uh... well that battle sucked. Sucked ass. Thugzdocry wasn't too good and he made this guy Irriducibili took my vote. It sucked cause he took it and had a translation for everything he said. Who the fuck cares for window shopping whores? I didn't even look at that pic its probably some gay ass picture just like your gay ass rap style. But still whatever. . .
MOOD CHANGE
Vote on my battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=62492
(thats a real battle)
im voting for irid. he had a better flow and although the hooker stuff got repetitive he had some good punches. wasnt feeling thudz at all and those last 4 lines were useless.
vote- irriducubilli
return the favour
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=62751
uppin this (1)..........(i only mentioned about hookers in 1-2 lines!!!????)..................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ................
alright dawg i know i was just commenting.
u gonna return the favour?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=62751
I was hot
you know puches the whole 9 yards need i say more
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thugdocry
he's way better wit better punches and wordplay
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hmmmm is a hatin' vote beacuse i voted against you? maybe....uppin.................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ................................
ummmmmmmmm no thats what i think he came harder wit punches and wordplay
i ain't a hater, u said vote honestly and i did
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you clearly didn't read it properly then...anyways it don't matter its all good (and stop freeposting)uppin................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..
Irid won this nice punches, wordplay n flow the other kid came a bit light i was expectin more from him
thugzdocry cause he had better punchez in my opininon...
vote-thugzdocry
Lyrical Plague is recruiting
dis was a close battle i dont no who got this one i have to think about it for a min???????????????????????><>>>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<
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irriducubilli
he took this one....Flow was a little off, it changed a lot in places. Punches were alright, I did enjoy reading them. Personals good. Wordplay was good, Work on it a little. Elevation, Join the rest of us.
Thugzdocry
you need to come up with more personals. You need to work on your punches. You had too many Elementary lines. A little Elevation on everything and you'll have it. Just Work on it Kid.
Payce...
Vote-irriducubilli