7- 10 barz...(14-20 linez)
person who excepts battle call spitz first...
No dr/c/h votes
Well I'm bout to drop meh shit now.........Doll already toll me she would be a while so don't expect her to respond till later
(no longer than a day though)
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7- 10 barz...(14-20 linez)
person who excepts battle call spitz first...
No dr/c/h votes
Well I'm bout to drop meh shit now.........Doll already toll me she would be a while so don't expect her to respond till later
(no longer than a day though)
Hi! ChynaDoll is not home right now, if you leave a "message", she will "very weakly" return it ASAP...............(*BEEP*)
Yo your "heat" is gettin' extinguished, I gotta the "flow" to tame~ya~flame::::: leave'ya like a punk wit he's "whip stolen", ChynaDoll lyrically de-"RANGE"-d// (range rover...)
You could have a shoesize over a mill, my shoes still too big to fill:::::: this a battle "mission", even if you "tossed" a "DeWalt" you couldn't "pass~the~drill"//(DeWalt is a drill for you who dun know.....)
So find~ya~skill n' bring it full~tilt, cuz I got this five~to~nil:::::: deprive~will, so your "depression" blinds~thrills, suggestion give your each~line~"pills"// (If you can...beyond repair)
Your rhymes too "edible", eat'em like a fat kid buttin' through his "lunch~line"::::: your so sorry, you got a "cheesy bachelor" as "ghostwriter" to write your "punch~lines"//(ya punches weak....)
Ya older rhymes seem written, like Jackie Chan, a "practiced punch"::::: but that's just my conscience speakin, like the "beast from notre dam" i gotta "hunch"//
Got ya whole click "feelin" this, even if parylyzed from~neck~down~to~feet::::: call me "ChynaDoll 's lines" cuz they say you are what you eat// (Eaten your rhymes like breakfast.....)
Your lyrical height like a dwarf~is, if I said "KICK" it would travel to ya rear~orphus(ass):::: cuz my messages are "clear" while I'm still tryin' to get your lines inta' "focus"//
Your rhymes bogus, I've seen better "wraps"(raps) on Candy "bars"::::: Mis-judgment leaves battle~scars, "fore~seen~accident" like drivin in NY wit British Cars// (You ran right into it.....)
I'm like an old bottle of apsirin, because the word Pill is missing P(ill)::::: Your punches like white paranoid parents with kid away from home, they missing me//
My "inner elements" excrete heat like "filaments", turn words from "bold" to "vapour"::::: the only way you'd get me head~over~heals from ya rhymes is if I was doing Yoga over your pre-written papers//
END OF MESSAGE.........(*DIAL TONE*)
^^ ill
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BLAH HEA WE GO.....
Weak rhyming bitch…just like Stevie Wonder,You don’t know who you fuckin wit/
Just cuz you work at a gift center around christmas time dont mean you "rap"better then me/
you the better emcee, - i think not- you a fake proto type version, in other words a generic emcee/
you still wouldnt be sick if you switched ya mic with an infected dick,licked that shit till ya lips turned red like applying lip stick/
dont trip quick, cuz my scripts flip ya think thoughts, fumble ya mind and make you brake like a cheap watch/
how you gonna compare me to another emcee, when you cant see me, trying to see me is like tryng to see invincibilty/
Its no doubt in mind niggaz will choose mines,so keep thinkin you betta than me/
your aka most be 'Ashanti' cuz u being victorious is straight up 'Foolish'/
****PLz hold we r experiencin technical difficulties***
*** reloading......***
**now baq to the battle**
your verse comes out 'shooting blanks' like a 'gun' with 'no bullets' I'm 'unbeatable' like an 'armless' guy tryin to 'masturbate'/
Tryin to negotiate? I'll discombobulate you so you can't locate or numerate,Where your body parts are because they're in a different state/
Your brain I'll aggravate and frustrate, then I'll eliminate cause your little mind couldn't appreciate/
How I innovate and enunciate - Underestimate? You didn't expect -..For me to rap so good, you'd suspect it was in a different 'dialect'/
From a different retrospect, you still couldn't dissect,My 'built' words that are erected by multiple 'architects'/
My 'vocabulary's' so good, even' Shakespeare' couldn't object me from using references to his text/
You just won't listen, I keep tryin to insist,That you need a 'dictionary' just to know when you getting dissed/
Now you saw me spit..whatchu think- yeah its sick,You battlin' me?? ..i suggest you go back to suckin dick/
Whats up with the editing your posts and not asking how do i know you aint changed shit.....Uppin 4 votes
umm thas cuz i had to much shit i aint count tha barz...so i deleted it so no one could see then sum linez out n put it baq...happy?.....damn......
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Uppin 4 votes people............................................ ............Uppin 4 votes...........................
Peep dont sleep............
ummm iz gettin slept.............................ppl dun vote no mo they jus look at tha dayum battle like sum dummies..........im ghost...................
This battle was mad close in my eyes..
Chyna, your shit was tight, you had a few bars I wasnt really feelin
like>
>how you gonna compare me to another emcee, when you cant see me, trying to see me is like tryng to see invincibilty/
and a couple other lines that seemed kinda played to me..But you had a lot of tight shit too, Like..
From a different retrospect, you still couldn't dissect,My 'built' words that are erected by multiple 'architects'/
My 'vocabulary's' so good, even' Shakespeare' couldn't object me from using references to his text/
You just won't listen, I keep tryin to insist,That you need a 'dictionary' just to know when you getting dissed/
^All tight. Only other thing I could say is the rhyming seemed forced in some spots, but that doesnt really matter too much...
TaKtiK, you came mad creative with your shit, Only had ONE line I wasnt feelin
>Your rhymes too "edible", eat'em like a fat kid buttin' through his "lunch~line"::::: your so sorry, you got a "cheesy bachelor" as "ghostwriter" to write your "punch~lines"//
but the rest were on point like
Your rhymes bogus, I've seen better "wraps"(raps) on Candy "bars"::::: Mis-judgment leaves battle~scars, "fore~seen~accident" like drivin in NY wit British Cars// (You ran right into it.....)
and i like the comments in parenthesis, adds to what youre goin after in the punchline..
All in all, although Chyna came hard, Taktik, it seemed like you had more complex punches and just fresher shit all together.
So ima vote for TakTik. nice battle.
UPPIN da VOTES PPL..........this is my 4th UP so can you plz jus vote on this shit!!!!!!! Leave'ya link and I'll give and honest and truthful vote, much appretiation..............................UPPIN 4 VOTES
wasn't feeling either verse much
but.....
Taktik took this battle with some better word play and punches
Chyna just didnt bring like ive seen her do before.seemed rushed
still some nice lines
and taktik....please stop putting quotation marks and explanations...its not cool and hinders your verse
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Originally posted by fgee
wasn't feeling either verse much
but.....
Taktik took this battle with some better word play and punches
Chyna just didnt bring like ive seen her do before.seemed rushed
still some nice lines
and taktik....please stop putting quotation marks and explanations...its not cool and hinders your verse
^^ basically i feel the same
and wrap/rap lines are played out so bad@ china
POLL VOTE= TAK
I respect that, gonna work on cutting down the use of quotations, thnx for the votes ppl............................................... ............
i think taktik took this one, with better punches and flow......chyna just didnt come as hard. Oh yeah, and its pretty annoyin when someone has shit like "switchin pace" or in this case, "reloadin" in the middle of their verse....specially when theres so much space in between. Anyway vote to taktik.
please check out my crew battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=62485
peace.
um, how come it wont let me vote
Yo this was a nice battle taktik....................yea have some crazy complexity........................But you know i cant vote for obvious reasons but good job
Uppin 4 poll votes.....................Leave your link i'll make an honest vote...........Uppin 4 votes
ahhh i dunno why all the time he does the " " things on his word play n stuff but its still good,good job kid u took this battle with good flow nice word play and creative punches nice work
my vote TAKTIK
yall return the favor n vote on my battle fairly
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=62928
Taktik Receives Warning Number 1, Reason Is For Upping Thread Over 5 Times, Next Time Will Result In DQ of Battle.
^^Well that explains it....Quote:
Originally posted by fgee
[B]wasn't feeling either verse much
but.....
Taktik took this battle with some better word play and punches
Chyna just didnt bring it wasnt really to hard hitting of lines to me though but still you real good though nice verse though[B/] and taktik....please stop putting quotation marks and explanations...its not cool and hinders your verse
Also i see nothing wrong with the Quotations marks etc...thats the only way People will see everything better in your verse..etc...and also..it Decorates the verse..lol....
-Peace-
I POLL VOTED
Yo i think I may have overdone the qoutations in this battle but i hear what you sayin about the "decoration" thing.....thnx for the vote
great minds think alikeQuote:
Originally posted by TheHandsOfGod
ahhh i dunno why all the time he does the " " things on his word play n stuff but its still good,good job kid u took this battle with good flow nice word play and creative punches nice work
my vote TAKTIK
tight battle dogs
props to both
peace