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OK ITS DONE....Verse one is at the beggining of the track..and verse 2 comes in around 2:10
Sike....but it is a J.Lo Remix.....
THIS IS WHAT HAPPENS WHEN YOU GET REALLY FUCKING BORED
Im Glad Remix ft. Djx
the quality on hifi is pretty dope
Holla back..lol..let me know what u think of my lil radio style remix
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This was horrible.
thanks..not really askin about tastes....i wouldnt buy it...but id listen to it on the RADIO....
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lol wtf.. you know i didnt listen too it.... i just told you these comps dont have soundcards or something.
i hate you bastard
great delivery, lil sporadic in lyrical content. overall : good shit man, like you said its a rough draft, do some polishing on the lyrics i.e. you had a good story going, keep it going, dont go off on tangents. gonna be a hot song, better let me know when u done wit it.
hola
Yo dat some pretty good stuff. Holla a me when ya get it all the way done cause it soundin good right now.
mic presence is there...lyrix seem str8...quality is nice...i'm feelin that...mixin is well done...as far as i'm conerned...aiight
short as hell but i felt this
a dope track dj id like 2 hear the finished version wen u complete it
very nice, i like this. i've heard it 5 times on replay untill soundclick fucked it up. good work!
mixin is nice( dats what producers do mix good)
flow is nice and on beat lyriks are nice on point no punches or nuffin eye poppin but ur flow makes my head knock verses shuld be a lil longer but overall nice drop
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Yo it sound good dog keep that up I'm glad that ya got the finished version done today so I could here it good shit.
wow, i actualy felt this. I remember back when it was cool to be
a textcee, i always felt you, and as a producer i felt you, but not
so much as an emcee, but your last few tracks have been nice
as hell. Im impessed. Nice shit man....
:)
how u gonna do a collab wit my wife in law...
flow was straight
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=62290
Nice job, I thought this was really good. I can definately see this playing on radios. I think its much better than the original. :)
i feel you on dat boredom shit cuz i did a remix to the right thurr song lmao
dis wasnt even dat bad...good shit homie...still doin rap as a hobby or u serious bout it yet?
i didn't like this too much, got a whack lyricist fuckin up the song, the best part was when j-lo started singin.
The flow was basic and weak,
you need to step up your vocab...
but the mix down was aiight.
Ill flow...good shit...sounds real pro...keep it up
lets notice the replies mystic...
you the ONLY ONE hatin on it....
GROW UP now....i ATE you a month ago..and you still on my dick...do i need to drop another verse?
WHO is still in the tourney? me or YOU?
this was a POP remix...fuck ima do spit mos def type vocab?
Your a fucking no talent asshole, that NEEDS to respond to all my shit..JUST so people will know who you are....
GO AWAY
to the other cats that responded (good or bad) as long as it was constructive...good looks
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hot ness man.. your flow is dope... feeling the flow.. your voice is good. feels good over the beat.. but as a remix it doesnt cut the mustard.. i mean.. if just to say you were to actual do this for commercial purposes with JLo .. this you wouldnt have come off appealling enough.. i know if it was serious and not boredom you would of layed it out easy...
suggest for coolness.. next time you do this.. actually try and make it commercially appealing ..
second verse was better.. that u did..
this is still safe...
one.. peep my track http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=62772
Flow is nice.. and you're right, this is a radio track.
:) I Liked This..You Flowed Amazing Man..But You Made Me Mad Cuz I Really Thought It Was J.lo Naked..LoL
Good Drop Man..