yo i'll state rules tonight
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yo i'll state rules tonight
yo i just wrote somethin 25 lines max
no d/r
no crew
no everything i missed aight
oh NO FEEDIN
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OK i'm pastin what i just wrote on M word aight
Flippin Ill Sadistic SKripts To Rip This Kid Wit Subliminal Fists, Cuz Like 'Roca-Fella', Im 'Twisted'..ILL Rips-This, Mix-This And Like Spittin 'Retarded' Rhymes, This Is Just Another Way For 'God' To Say Hes 'Gifted'/ (haha)
Spit And 'Hit On This', Cuz You Act Traverse To A 'Female In Four-Play', The Way Verbally Your 'Exposed' And Gettin 'Ripped-With-This'//
Rhymin So 'High' That Like 'Levers-In-Action', I 'Lift-This' And Kill This Kid Who Acts As 'Silver-Wear' In The Sense That I 'Dish'-It/
nail-this god to tha cross-n-burn em like jews in the hollicaust, im the cause of gods soul gettin lifted//
Quick Get And Send Your Rhymes In 'Elevation' But Intensively Like A 'Free-Fall', A Quick-Switch Hits And You 'De-Cline'/
Mix Morals Of Knowledge And Like 'Sexin School Books' You Dont Got The Right Punches To 'Cum-Bind'// (lol)
call me ya nemisis cuz im the begining of the living and dead/
Cuz SkripTz Takes Ya Shit Verse And Protracts It Like 'Rave-Parties' And 'Kill-The-Page' With A 'Clicked-Hit' Of The 'X'//
Im Pistol Packin And This Kids Verse Acts 'Partial', The Way Literally His Punches Dont Hit At 'Full-Force' In A 'Whole'/
Comprehend This And 'Steal-Some-Pregnant-Services-Pills', Just So You Can Finally Say You Got To 'Take-Control'//
Switch Styles, this kidd Is The 'God' Of Fags, Cuz 'Jerkin Me Off Twice' Is Apparent To The Second 'Cumming' Of 'Christ'!/
this kids intelligence level goes about as deep as weed vines..//
Cause his intelligence goes far behind mine, can’t think so I won’t write anotha line
Lol just couldn’t think I wrote a better one of my verses
1 word to long sry you can go over by 1 if ya want
This Is Just Another Way For 'God' To Say Hes 'Gifted'
oh to let ya know when i saud yhis i meant god because thats what he thinks of hmself lol
oh yea you got 1 hour afta check in
nice shit d'cyde, way to rep UT :D, hope you can take kerrdezzy down for the win, hes pretty 'ill', he beat me :(, oh well nice shit man
yea man i upped my game this is the first real battle i have did so io actually wrote a good verse .................................................. .................................................. ..............................................
nice spit... haha.. compared to someone other than kerr
there's no contridiction, d'cyde is "fiction-story-tales" by the way he proclaims he's "un-dracula"-like from "legend-bitins",
banned-or-prison? your spits are "script-writtin", i'll have your succesful future on rb have "the" bad-type-of-"end"in,(the end=mod who will have you banned)
heat-waves of endless-stray punches to your "cranium" have you "insane-in-the-membrane" wit contractions of "muscle-strains",
i'll have you "flatline" like the "great plains", goin "nuts" over my overwhelming phase, you endin up wit-infimate-"cum-stains"
your like worthless "broken-glass" my punches hit-your-chest harder than "smokin-hash"...your spits-is-half-ass like dope fiends "tokin-ash",
you "lower-class", couldn't get "higher-rankings" even by standin on "mt. everest maps"
i'm horrific to you like the "13th ghost", i coast "invinsibly" into-your-vicotry-hopes n rip them like an enraged jail-man bendin-bar-spokes,
you couldn't get a "blind date" on "meet my folks", you "lyin" about-your-boasts,you relate to the "change of heart" couples that split-n-"broke"
"thee-who-tesspassed" gon' reach-hell-at-last, "after" you do the "math" of my equations the include "dirt"-wit-"weed grass" above your caskets you relize your days "have-passed",
nothin less than "full-blast"- raps instigitating-your-ass to "break"-down-"fast" like computers supposively "shutting-down" at year 2000... you gon' "fry"-n-"crash"
my punches can't be "defended" like matumbo "guarding" shaq, you gettin "elbow-hittin", your "blood-spittin" is turnin me on like pamala anderson had my "cum-drippin",
no pre-"tendin", your already "tender" equalizing to bambi's "warm-dinner" endin-in my "cold blood organs" deep within my "soul-givin" you your 1st loss to-be-appendin
shiiiiiiiiiiiitttttttttt
damn......... kerr wtf wee u takin some good pills upped ur game mad damn is all i got 2 say son.....................................UPP DIS BITCH FOR DEM
damn... put this battle under rb's legends
i mean... damn... this battle is hot but let me break it down
kerr takes it wit comin strait at him n hittin harder, his shit was hard to the core
haha votes!
yea thats what happens when you pre-write took this cat a day and a half lol............................................... ..................
good verse thpugh Kerr tight I don't hate
yo detailed explanations on this battlemit was tight we need REALLY detailed lol............................................... ..............
yo detailed explanations on this battlemit was tight we need REALLY detailed lol............................................... ....................................
uppin fo votes............................................. .................................................. ..
^ Stop upping you fucking idiot.
Dcyde came pretty pathetic, so did Kerrdezzy actually, stretched bar styles went out last year, shorten your lines up to perfect the flow and ditch the hyphenated multi's, people arent stupid - that can see them without you doing that, it just makes you look like a herb, honestly. Kerr seemed to edge this towards the end of his verse, just came harder in my opinion towards the end.
Both need to ditch that style and elevate, but vote: KerrDezzy
camarac....neither one of them came pathetic..i'd like to see you beat one of them..anyways..this is a really good battle...both came hard....punches were hittin in each verse...damn hard decision lol...i'ma give it to kerdezzy...he edge it ..no hate d'cyde...he jus came harder
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there's no contridiction, d'cyde is "fiction-story-tales" by the way he proclaims he's "un-dracula"-like from "legend-bitins",
banned-or-prison? your spits are "script-writtin", i'll have your succesful future on rb have "the" bad-type-of-"end"in
nice opener also
vote- Kerdezzy
thank you... o n camamrac... quit hatin man, this was a tight battle
let's keep the votes comin, o n if ya thought i pre-wrote i had a game last night that's y i didn't get on til late 2night, i had no time to pre-write anyways
don't forget to poll yo
well 2-0 for ya Kerrdezzy
i don't care if i loose this was a fujkin HISTORIC battle lol............................................... .......................................
strait up...camarac hatin on theze cats....both of yall came ill as *what*........kerr....u suprised the hell out of me.....did ur brother
write this for u?..lol.....seriously....both yall punches was nice....
but yall flows were on point.....can't hate on both battles...matter
of fact right now i can't vote on it either......i'm gonna have to come back to this cuz this was equally close.....1
i wouldnt say that this was legends material....but it was good.cum lines are so played.....and both of you used them....DAMNIT NO MORE CUM LINES! neither of you had personals so i couldnt make a decision based on that...so
flow=D'cyde
punches=D'cyde
obviously prewritten= D'cyde
personals= neither.....
i think that D'cyde took this one even though it was close....
vote= D'Cyde
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=60623
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flow=D'cyde
punches=D'cyde
obviously prewritten= D'cyde
personals= neither.....
whoa....who did you think pre-wrote... cuz if this cat got people thinkin i pre-wrote shit than that's whack
kerrdezzy got this. it was a nice battle, but kerrdezzy came harder.
vote.........................KERRDEZZY
aight my vote goes to kerdezzy his complexity of his whole drop got my vote heres an example
my punches can't be "defended" like matumbo "guarding" shaq, you gettin "elbow-hittin", your "blood-spittin" is turnin me on like pamala anderson had my "cum-drippin",
no pre-"tendin", your already "tender" equalizing to bambi's "warm-dinner" endin-in my "cold blood organs" deep within my "soul-givin" you your 1st loss to-be-appendin
that was real nice d'cyde your drop was nice too but in my opinion kerdezzy just stayed personal and complex at the same time
vote-kerdezzy -1-
Aight.... I couldn't decide off the top so I'ma break it down for myself right here....
D'Cyde:
"Flippin Ill Sadistic SKripts To Rip This Kid Wit Subliminal Fists, Cuz Like 'Roca-Fella', Im 'Twisted'..ILL Rips-This, Mix-This And Like Spittin 'Retarded' Rhymes, This Is Just Another Way For 'God' To Say Hes 'Gifted'"
^^^Sick multies right there
"Spit And 'Hit On This', Cuz You Act Traverse To A 'Female In Four-Play', The Way Verbally Your 'Exposed' And Gettin 'Ripped-With-This'"
^^^Nice Punch
"Rhymin So 'High' That Like 'Levers-In-Action', I 'Lift-This' And Kill This Kid Who Acts As 'Silver-Wear' In The Sense That I 'Dish'-It"
^^^Nice Wordplay
"nail-this god to tha cross-n-burn em like jews in the hollicaust, im the cause of gods soul gettin lifted//
Quick Get And Send Your Rhymes In 'Elevation' But Intensively Like A 'Free-Fall', A Quick-Switch Hits And You 'De-Cline'"
^^^more solid punches with ill wordplay
"Cuz SkripTz Takes Ya Shit Verse And Protracts It Like 'Rave-Parties' And 'Kill-The-Page' With A 'Clicked-Hit' Of The 'X'"
^^^Nice wordplay
"Switch Styles, this kidd Is The 'God' Of Fags, Cuz 'Jerkin Me Off Twice' Is Apparent To The Second 'Cumming' Of 'Christ'!"
^^^ That was just hot
KerrDezzy
"there's no contridiction, d'cyde is "fiction-story-tales" by the way he proclaims he's "un-dracula"-like from "legend-bitins",
banned-or-prison? your spits are "script-writtin", i'll have your succesful future on rb have "the" bad-type-of-"end"in"
^^^Solid punch... hit hard
"heat-waves of endless-stray punches to your "cranium" have you "insane-in-the-membrane" wit contractions of "muscle-strains",
i'll have you "flatline" like the "great plains", goin "nuts" over my overwhelming phase, you endin up wit-infimate-"cum-stains""
^^^Nice ass Metaphores
"your like worthless "broken-glass" my punches hit-your-chest harder than "smokin-hash"...your spits-is-half-ass like dope fiends "tokin-ash",
you "lower-class", couldn't get "higher-rankings" even by standin on "mt. everest maps"
^^^That was all around hot IMO
"i'm horrific to you like the "13th ghost", i coast "invinsibly" into-your-vicotry-hopes n rip them like an enraged jail-man bendin-bar-spokes,
you couldn't get a "blind date" on "meet my folks", you "lyin" about-your-boasts,you relate to the "change of heart" couples that split-n-"broke"
^^^Serious, serious punches with ill wordplay
"my punches can't be "defended" like matumbo "guarding" shaq, you gettin "elbow-hittin", your "blood-spittin" is turnin me on like pamala anderson had my "cum-drippin"
^^^LMAO!
AIght lets see here:
Flow=TIE
Punches=Kerr (they hit harder and some were pretty funny)
Personals=None at all :(
Multies=Dcyde
Metas=TIE
Wordplay TIE
The only reason I can give this to Kerr is because his punches were harder. Both had excellent punches. Both were clever. but Kerr's just hit where it counts. Plus he also worked in the element of comedy... made me chuckle a few times. I'd like to see this in Legends. Both yall got some writin skills
Vote= KerrDezzy