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Topic...
It takes two
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Check in's by TUESDAY
Verses are due THURSDAY
Voting End's SATURDAY
16-48 lines,
you must drop the links to 5 battles
that you have voted on in this thread.
Topic...
It takes two
ChEcKiN In!!!
I thought youm had to check in Sunday,I got scared.lol.
Hmmmm good topic.It takes 2.Okay this is my first RBTL battle so give me a break.!!lol
peace!!!
Checkin in this bitch like cashin money orders with italian hookers...
did that even make sence...................
T-
Damn is you having a hard time with this topic T?I am.I an't think of shit to say.Don't worry though,I will have something by thursday.I was hoping you no-showed.
SEX
I see her sitting on the bed,waiting,all ready/
I'm walking towards her thinking it all gravy/
I take off my shirt,she takes off her skirt fast then she go slowing/
I run my hand up her leg,my penis start growing/
She put her hand on my dick,we start kissing/
Both tongues right on time,never missing/
I roll over she gets on top,after that she start taking off her top/
I manage to get my pants to my ankles/
She's going slow,she's the real deal,she ain't no stank hoe/
I start moving my thighs up and down/
She she gets louder with her moans and her sounds/
I start going faster and faster/
Wait, if I cum inside it will be disaster/
I tell hear to get up,I'm aout to climax/
She can't her ,she's about as loud as the Imax/
I gently push her off from on top of me/
I bust and and say "thanks for doing me boo"/
She says "not without you,baby, it takes two"/
Battling
I read the rules,thinking that's bullshit/
It don't matter though,cause I'm bout to rip this kid/
I read his verse,it's wack and childish,he trying to ryhme bout it bout it ,with rowdy/
I giggle and say nice drop,even though I'm about to use him like a mop/
I drop my shit,it's full of metas and punchlines/
Some shit,that was better than his,I had some ill lines/
Then votes start coming in/
What the hell,he must have pm'd/
Cause ain't no way his verse was batter than mine/
I get mad,think about tearing up frontlines/
But instead,I calmly type "uppin"/
Dick ryders get on my nerves with that dick sucking/
Fuck it,I just wait for some real votes/
Go to other battles so my battles can promote/
I come back to mines,I must be losing my mind/
This nigga got 1 vote to my 5/
HELL YEAH!!,that's what I thought in mt head/
It's 2:30 a.m.,I'm bout to go to bed/
I first check my Pm's I see his name,I start laughing,this cat's a lame/
He says good battle dude,I hit reply,"naw it takes two"/
THE KILLING
R.I.P. to my dog Blue,I love you,and I will always miss you/
The readers don't know the story I'm going to explain/
Misery loves company,so I'm sharing my pain/
This nigga,was the funny type,good sense of humor/
To bad he was fucking this cat's girl,or was it a rumor/
This cat got jealous,full of envy/
Next day, me and Blue walking like pimps be/
This cat rolled up,yell what the fuck!!,shot two at me,shot two at blue/
I turned went to,Blue,screamed "DAMN!!WHY THIS HAPPENED TO YOU!!??/
He just looked at me and said,"At least it took two"/
Next day, me and Blue walking like pimps be/
This cat rolled up,yell what the fuck!!,shot two at me,shot two at blue/
I turned went to,Blue,screamed "DAMN!!WHY THIS HAPPENED TO YOU!!??/
He just looked at me and said,"At least it took two"/
now THAT was good shit right there..i liked that....at least it took two.thats some pride man even if it aint tru..i really liked that
This is a battle I voted on in S.S.It's closed now but I'm going to post the link anyway.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=60051
Another,Redlocks and Mystic.It is a good battle.check it out.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=60054
(to tha "Who Shot Ya Beat)
It takes Two- Take two on a cinematic view-
Brothers from tha street tight through an through-
Don sat on tha corner simply a lookout-
To prevent the sales from gettin tookout-
See red an blue tha kids jus book out-
Goin back to tha pad an countin cash-
Split it an laugh an go look for ass-
Bitches Know they hustle and grind-
But it takes two to work as one mind-
Jay intertwines sellin dope an lines-
While Don count money an sits behind-
Both respected and both on shrooms-
Mind splits when taken into tha bedroom-
By two hot females tryin to steal sales-
In they back these bitches dig they nails-
blinded by pussy ya cant count money in braile-
Awake at one and grab cash, there is none-
Knowin they got hustled they work they muscle-
They was like"We never got jacked, what do we do"-
"But these bitches were smart they knew it takes two"-
So now armed an ready with a nine revenge and a mechete-
They step on they streets to make they pockets heavy-
Searchin all day to find what they be needin to pay-
The bosses who shadows an fronts weed an yay-
Late afternoon they both hear boom-
An see tha same tricks dippin outta motel 6 room-
Vroom Vroom these bitches got them all beat-
Oh shit didnt realize Jay an don was in tha back seat-
Ridin lo pro fo what seamed like hours on end-
The fellas stay silent knowin they can mend-
What valor was stolen, not to mention tha money-
Tha car stops suddenly an Jay jumps out like a dummy-
"You tricks thought you was slick, yall make me sick"-
"Yo now give us back our cash or we'll jus kill you quick'-
Six shots burst out an then three more wit jus click-
Four bodies hit tha ground and their dreams an hopes-
Chedder collected by a single assasin with two-two's smoked-
Four people and two teams done by six bullets one man an one gun-
So always watch your back its a fact it doesent take two it just takes one-
T-
(Another keystyle story I didnt really agree with the whole three vurses above but hey
a style is a style hope yall enjoy)
(If you couldnt figure it out, the two teams both worked for the same boss an the boss
smoked em all an took all the profit, I dont know if I make that clear enough)
two verses were equally good but a really feel that younggadgets lest versey thingy tok it...that was reall heartfelt and touched me in someway
Vote Young
ok young gadgets first two verses... sex and battling where whack as fuck... then he tried to be hard in the third one.. and out of that i got someting about a dog and a talking cat killing the dog for fuckin another cat or something...animals? ... was not clear at all.. from T squares i got the message loud and clear that it may take two, but in the end watch your back cuz one will over power...
vote T-Square
...good verse T.I actually had played my "who shot ya" instrumental while reading our verse.....is it me....or is Sureal a ...ASSHOLE...dumb fuck.
anyway,do me and T square suppose to drop 5 links each or do we suppose to drop 5 links combined?
Here goes another battle.it's a good one.If I get any more I will edit it on my post.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=60050
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=60056
Now here is the last link.I did it all by my self...,.I'm a big boy.:)
This is between Mad Man and Fgee.It's a good battle.Hit it up.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=60047
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=60056
<< http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=60050 >>
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=60047
My links voting on more later.... if peeps sho
Youndgagdet: wordplay: 6 for inconsistency and simplicity, rhyme scheme: 7 for double rhymin and inconsitency, story's: 5 for 3 short ones which could have been elaborated on, total: 18
T-square: wordplay: 7 for aight flow and simplicity, rhyme scheme: 6 for simplicity, story: 7 for a good twist at tha end and a more colorful story, total: 20
My vote goes to T-square, stay real, peace, 1
ok my vote goes to t-square... although youngs verses were pretty funny, like the last two lines of the last verse lol...... but i think t had a better overall topical, becuase it was only one subject. but it was good from both, it is kinda a hard topic one ya think about it
vote = T-Square
^^I Agree...It Was A Kinda Hard Topic But I Felt That T-Square Kept On Topic And His Verse Was Then Better Beacuae Of That...Young Had Sum NIce Shit But Personally, I Didnt Really Like The Way You Kept Talkin About Sex...Just My Opinion And Threw Me Off A BIt But The Rest Was Nice But T-Square Was More Consistant...
Vote - T-Square
T-Pound's was a much better overall verse. . He stuck with one topic throughout, and the story stayed consistent.
Christ, Young Gadget's was X-Rated first of all. . Evidently, I didn't read the label. Secondly, it didn't make too much sense. . If you're going to do a story, try to stick with the same central theme throughout.
Vote: T-Pound