Okay the rules that I said before.I changed the poll limit to 0 days.Since you accepted you spit first.
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Okay the rules that I said before.I changed the poll limit to 0 days.Since you accepted you spit first.
Fuck it I will go first.
Yo,my bars is hotter than stolen cars,and your bars is played out like jerry curls or lines about Sars/
You don't know?,I rip thru 'cars" "son"(carson) than I'll "jet" while leaving you short on money like midgets getting $5 dollar checks/
I spit lik an automatic and the way I keep reloading you'll think my shit was prewritten/
Battling you is child's play, so I know you kiddin'/
You fruitier than bananas at a snack bar,I'll burn you up like the dude that's standing in my avatar/
If this was 8 mile,you'll prolly choke just like your moms when she was attempting deep throat/
You can't get poll votes like AOL users,you just get fucked over like crackhead prosituters/
You and Ms.Cleo both won't see yall futures/
Shit!,fuckin with Gadget I'll destroy your present,I'll become your idol,your king,and you'll be my peasant/
I'm the opposite of beautiful moutains and plains,unpleasant/
Look at Jet ,he's prewriting as we speak,I'm honored all this ton try to defeat me/
You can't see me or rip something you can't see,you better shave your pubic hairs and wear the shampoo for 2 weeks/
Either that or see the cum arond your mouth,and if you bite I will bring the guns around your house/
Can't you see?Undisputed!!!Your ryhmes stink like boo boo like somebody just pooted/
You must be stupid I'm the newest elite,haughting nightmares like you lived on Elm street/
I'm like a cat killing a baby,except I sucked the life out your body whenever you try to breath/
Aint no "kittens" though,I'll merk you with 17 lines "purr"(per) thread,with my stupid flow/
You got stupid though,I should take you back to school and treat you like a student and I'm the principal/
alright your turn.drop your verse.Remember this is my first elite battle!!!
carsonjet....
vote at me vs willy nasdaq dawg....
i already hit up a coupl of ya other battles....but u never hit up mine ..........
can ya do that plz? ill hit this up when its done to by editing this post...make sure to poll...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...2&pagenumber=1
checkin in....
u posted at like 1 am eastern time
i was sleepin sorry....ill hi this up in like 20 or 30 minutes
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younggadget
15 - 30
Ayo, young gunna' 5-5 stunna', nice detective work ya finally managed to find a tru C//
Now..take two paces bak, shakin in ya knee's runnith of piss, skittered tryna step wit me//
so chek it.....
Diabolical fluids strip my veins of holy water, im dehydrated//
Picture ur self wit me, ya laminated//
fuckin witta g platinum plated//
o how long i waited, so many times i catch ya keyin...'yo CJ wak'//
Now high security on da jet, im strapped witta heat, double packed, ammo strapped in my bak//
'wait' airline error, fasten seat belts dis Bandit bout ta be attacked//
here I come...
Lyricaly..i rather call-u-out in bitch slapped by da name 'inspecta faggit'//
Rappin used tunes, feedin off old lines like a trash heep infestin maggot//
antogonized by ur sought out disrespect i lay u down next to mine an soder//
Wannabe..follow instructions specificly, train like a sea-world otter//
family trees will stumble
pray to god u never settle down an grow a family//
discraced to a shame of terror i deface...urs truly destroy em un-candidly//
school's out for u...seem to be u think ur hardcore postin all-night-shifter's//
but ya verse...couldnt lift to a vert to battle mine, using holy spell lifters//
exorcist...head, ur spun ova ova again i tell u CJ dun fuk'd ur in-habitance//
Fukkin wit an ample gunna', i lay u down in a blenda , shredded up i drank u like past-tense//
set u-down, time to relax...ur down, laid up washed up stuck in a soft pre rinse//
pay da pentence to da masta of ya domain, tha one an only CJ//
body's i lay..astray, but urs i keep, joyously watchin remains decay amongst long days//
checkin watch
time to set u to rest, infestation i lay upon u witta marshall law, no free will//
Feelin like OJ, destroyin weak bitches wit no defense but fuk it, i let da blood spill//
couldnt flo wit J if i guarantee'd ya a "no battle bak"//
Y?..cuz ur DNA passed by on by pops left ya wittan empty sak//
what happens when ya live a lonely life, mother said fuk u an grabbed the crak//
Fuk a Jet, u like Amtrak, mangled in a versefull frenzy, de-railed an off ya track//
exhaustive it gets
Tired...sik of bitches battlin wit no street smart on how to pik up game//
Prostetic from the hood to there name, filled wit shame, claimin nada but false fame//
Only cummin was ur 2 second came, left witta drizzle sound off bitch yellin "sik"//
dun fukkin witta he-she-trik my avi run ya biz cus ya hoe...'penny' on my dik//
git....//
next//....
dis battle was ccrazzzyyy. both verses were off tha hook. carson et came a lil harder wit tha punches though.
vote: carsonjet
return tha favor and vote in my battle against disgangsta56 in front lines
Good drop...I said 15-30 you ended up dropping 32.I t dont matter though
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Originally posted by younggadget
Good drop...I said 15-30 you ended up dropping 32.I t dont matter though
uppin for votes
uppin for votes!!!
not really...my verse's always start wit yo chek it.....
get wit it, u oughta kno that by now
uppin
VOTE - CARSON
REASON - Some of carson's linez were long, losin tha flow...but he still came harder wit tha punches...that's wut got dis fa him...
i'll poll vote in a min
PEACE
Damn what the fuck?!?! Okay can we get some poll votes!!Thats how yall hoe yall selfs.If this is such a "good" battle then poll vote.Poll vote then drop a link and I will hit up the battle.You must poll vote first.
Im not hating or anything,but you dissed yourself with that line.A matter of fact,alot of your lines didn't even make that much sense.What was that line about the blender?Something like a drink youlike you was past tense?What.Can you "explain" some of your lines don't make sense to the members of Rapbattle.com. I tell you one thing , it was alot I didn't understand and I'm a smart person.Quote:
Originally posted by carsonjet
Fuk a Jet, u like Amtrak, mangled in a versefull frenzy, de-railed an off ya track//
i wont vote because carsonjet will think im beefin with him but CJs punches didnt make sense and werent existant....
yunggadget had wordplay and good clever punches down...ur shit didnt make sense CJ>>>i dont like u regardless because u dont kno about battlin........if i wud vote it be for
yunggadget......READ these verses~just coz CJ used more complex words and multis its not the point......battlin is about punches so people shud get off his dik and read both verses.....
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Fuk a Jet, u like Amtrak, mangled in a versefull frenzy, de-railed an off ya track//
fuk a jet- ur not good enough
u like amtrak- meaning your grounded
mangled in a versefull frenzy- ur shakin, stirred up from my verse
de-railed an off ya trak- incident that happened a year ago with amtrak cargo between orlando and west virginia trip, also used with u fallin of ur verse, hence losing trak of where u are....
any thing else need be explained..CJ..has explanations for every line...just ask..uppin
What do "fuck a jet" got to do with "ur not good enuff"?
I want yall that vote tp out down Carson hottest line and put down my hottest line.To be truthful I didnt even try on this battle.I was just in a goofy mood so I put a bunch shit that will make you laugh.
this is a joke....no one can fukin verse an let it be voted on any more...
people can think for-themselves..no need to help them out...
so fukin worried bout a win...what the fuk kinda c are you...i aint worried bout winnin im jus worried bout battlin...fuk it ....i aint worried bout ur verse or my verse or votes for that matter...want the win? take it...i rather the satisfaction of earnin summin but shit take it...I dun need wins...i jus wanna battle people that dont complain...
THOUGHT I LEFT FRONTLINES FOR THIS REASON..
AND THIS FORUM STILL FILLED WIT BITCHES.....
listen to the lil baby crying....you need a hug?.....you want your ba-ba?...are you ready to eat-eat?...shut your wack ass up.And you better hold your tongue callin me a bitch.You wack ass herb.I wasn't going to say anything but your verse was wack ass hell.It was full of shit that didnt make sense.You wack ass herb!!!
fine ...take vic...mod please come in here...give gadget a vic 5-0 i dont care...im just getting sik of lookin at this thread im gettin pissed off every time he posts sum shit....save me the agrevation i rather have a loss then deal with this baby shit...
Okay look he's still crying like a bitch.I'm not going to harrass you,I'm not a child abuser son!You need to bow down or leave Rapbattles.com....herbs always bitchin'
dude ur fuken verse was wak from line 1
u fuken suk bottem line
i aint the one bitchen you are
i didnt question one thing from ur verse, cus u suk
u disect mine cus you kno i kicked ur ass
grow the fuk up an get off RB..
fukin whiney ass bitchin loser, should be fukin banned
for use-less bullshit postin in your own battles.
...should only be allowed to chek in an drop ur verse
fuk this shit,
i didnt really like either of these verses....both came pretty week and Carson i know that you can do better....CUM AND MOM LINES ARE PLAYED!!!!!.....overall i think that Carsons verse was less wack
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=60623
vote- young....i felthis verse was more complex....to me it had better flow and punches......just ma voice........1
ps- return favor.......
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=60939
please.. can one of u vote opn my battloe vs tHa Sandman.. honestly..??Quote:
Originally posted by X Ecution
vote- young....i felthis verse was more complex....to me it had better flow and punches......just ma voice........1
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please... its 4-1| me....
vote!"!!
I gotta throw to Carson on this...
Gadget was bad ass as well...
But man, complexity was overflowing from Carson the way he does his shit.
Sometimes he makes shit too complex and ya get lost in it, but this was just the right amount.
Punches about the same...
So, I'm throwin ta Carson.
okay,okay,okay,it's all good.Good to see this battle is taking off.Well yall know what to do.
Uppin for votes.I got to win my first elite battle.
Holla!!
yo.. i voted on this shit already...-
i took the time....
now can some of u hit my battle vs sandman with an honest vote as well??
its in elite too...
common.. vote!!.. itll only tajke a minute
Damn,okay nigga,give somebody a chance.If you wanted somebody to vote on your battle you should have dropped a link.I'm not about to look for it.If I happen to come across it I will hit it up.
Somebody check out my battle in Sacred Sriptures.It's a good one.
carson jet...ate that bitch..no shit....young...you and your SARS thing just blew it dawg...nice yall...
check out my battle with irrelevance...my first battle in elite
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...534#post576534
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Damn I tried to my the U.S.A. flag.lol...uppin for votes
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check out the shit that is my signature.
Right very tight battle but ima have to go with Young gadget here cuz i was feelin his punches more plus his flow was better than carson's Carson had everything but Young came harder with his punches
Favorite lines from Carson
Tired...sik of bitches battlin wit no street smart on how to pik up game//
Prostetic from the hood to there name, filled wit shame, claimin nada but false fame//
Only cummin was ur 2 second came, left witta drizzle sound off bitch yellin "sik"//
dun fukkin witta he-she-trik my avi run ya biz cus ya hoe...'penny' on my dik//
Diabolical fluids strip my veins of holy water, im dehydrated//
Picture ur self wit me, ya laminated//
fuckin witta g platinum plated//
Fave lines from Young
Yo,my bars is hotter than stolen cars,and your bars is played out like jerry curls or lines about Sars/
You don't know?,I rip thru 'cars" "son"(carson) than I'll "jet" while leaving you short on money like midgets getting $5 dollar checks/
I spit lik an automatic and the way I keep reloading you'll think my shit was prewritten/
Battling you is child's play, so I know you kiddin'/
You fruitier than bananas at a snack bar,I'll burn you up like the dude that's standing in my avatar/
If this was 8 mile,you'll prolly choke just like your moms when she was attempting deep throat/
You can't get poll votes like AOL users,you just get fucked over like crackhead prosituters/
Nice battle MADD props to both textcees but Young gets ma vote
this battle sucked ass, both verses were wack but CJs was the worst of them. This was like a regular frontlines battle. This definately goes to young cuz of punches and wordplay. CJ if u gonna do that stuff in your punches that nobody but u understand, than u gonna lose unless u explain ur shit.
vote=Younggadget
hit up my battles if u see them in elite
OH MY GOD!!!!!!I'M 1 VOTE AWAY FROM WINNING MY 1ST ELITE BATTLE.
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i read every single post in this entire thread........(yup, i was bored)
I was kind of annoyed by the fact that carson and young kept on
fighting......and young, carson's right, you shouldn't be commenting
about your opponents verse after the battle is over dog....thats what
the voters are for........
As for my vote:
Cj has some of the most complex lines on this entire site.....he definitely displayed it in this battle
but unfortunately, his lines were too complex....i didn't quite understand some
but each line was impressive, nice multies also
young, considering his verse was more understandable, had better punches...
you both had good flow, but young had better structure
vote=young by a small margin, very small
i wouldv'e given this to cj if i understood more of his lines
but CJ, you have gained my respect as one of the illest battlers
on this site, and im looking past your record dog, we should talk sometime......stay up^
props to both
hit this for me in return:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=63174
^1 more vote to close
thanks
peACE