iight quik battle...
rulez:
15 lines max...:(
no crew, hate, or d/r votes
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iight quik battle...
rulez:
15 lines max...:(
no crew, hate, or d/r votes
i'll spit 10 minutes after you check in....guaranteed
jeaaa
u know me im here ready 2 battle alwayz
jus spit and let we crush it hoochy7.....................
iight here ma verse
hottie tying knots wit ya threads to show I screw wit lives~ Even when givin me compliments soldier couldn’t come half as nice! Cuz hottie'ss making more deadly holy shits than breaking bread wit Christ! Ya dropping battle verse against me? Nah jus a waste of bites//
Dis confused cat referes to himself as soldier don't lie kid you aint da god of text
Why should I even battle you? Da jobs half done, look ya drop is already close to death//
You think you ill? Bitch please The only reason why your sick is cuz i'm a fuckin disease
The doctor's prognosis? It was hottie7 (fever)- Frostbitin' emcees, Infect ya like SARS in ya respiratories//
You Always rhymin' bout faggot ass bullshit from dusk till dawn
Justin Timberlake can beat ya ass, so change ya name to GONE//
I'm Straight Pro - Releasin' the verdict on this elite track
Laced Cold - I'll leave your back like concrete - cracked//
You can't handle me in 20-Bars cuz i'm steady bashin' You muthafuckin brat with a hard lyrical passion this battle ain't real fair, bout to make ya 15-to-3 i'm GASHIN' Sending ya out in wheel chairs back to the eMc3e M@nsion // (thug mansion)
Whats Really good
This bitch-is a big pussy, so miss-is used to being ripped,
But even your damaged period pads couldn't manage to absorb this/
Expose your re-dick-less with no~dress, go~head let off some "Steam" I pre-"vent",
You go "down" like a wanna be thug fisherman u bound to then eat the "sea-men-t"/ (semen - cement)
Its really quite sad, your rhymes consist dull-hits well miss get hit with the full-clip,
Hottie you a constipated homosexual cow, how what you spit is gay Bull-Shit/
And your flow is stupid you move with some bars double the size of the others,
therefore you'd never be "phat" you just "Boned" like Ethiopian mothers/
Switch it up
You "off the chain?" nah jus keep being "greased up" and put on "kick-stand"
And i hope nobody miss-believing only reason she say she "hot" is because she got no-"fans"/
Ro-mance with loss and the cost you end up being put to rest, fucked to death,
Only way u BUST is if your plastic surgeon put bombs up your brest/ (bust as in breasts and as in bust a flow)
Kill her
Il turn you to a "JEW", take your "profit" and raid your tomb for having Lara Croft in your sig,
Ive seen your last 4 battles and it seems you battling excreting Jedi Knights , you jus use four-shits/ (use the forces~ a jedi phrase)
Mic Drops
hella good verse soldier....lol ok uppin dis shit
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good battle hottie
HOL UP I KNOW YALL AINT SLEEPIN ON THIS!!!!!! READ THE FUKIN BATTLE.....please
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i think Soldier took this 1 nice flo... good punches so
Vote = Soldier
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Hit dis up wit an honest vote an i shall replace dis post wit an honest vote A.S.A.P Thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...998#post518998
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vote and i'll hit urs up
she killed you nigga hahahaha
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DAMN YALL SLOW MOTHAFUCKAZ!!!!!! FUCK YALL
*RULES~ NOBODY SHUD HATE VOTE SOLDIER FOR BAD MOUTHIN THE VOTERS* :)
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hotties verse: (sorry i cant fig out how to quote both verse at onc) someone help?
hottie tying knots wit ya threads to show I screw wit lives~ Even when givin me compliments soldier couldn’t come half as nice! Cuz hottie'ss making more deadly holy shits than breaking bread wit Christ! Ya dropping battle verse against me? Nah jus a waste of bites// this was the best lpunchline of the battle....the first part about knots was ill...8.5
Dis confused cat referes to himself as soldier don't lie kid you aint da god of text
Why should I even battle you? Da jobs half done, look ya drop is already close to death// he hadnt dropped yet...but this line was aite...8
You think you ill? Bitch please The only reason why your sick is cuz i'm a fuckin disease
The doctor's prognosis? It was hottie7 (fever)- Frostbitin' emcees, Infect ya like SARS in ya respiratories// this line was tight liked the rhyming...8.5
You Always rhymin' bout faggot ass bullshit from dusk till dawn
Justin Timberlake can beat ya ass, so change ya name to GONE//
didnt like it... but at least it rhymed well...7.5
I'm Straight Pro - Releasin' the verdict on this elite track
Laced Cold - I'll leave your back like concrete - cracked//
damn that was sickening...9.5...i dont give tens this was close tho...good rhyming and loved the punch
You can't handle me in 20-Bars cuz i'm steady bashin' You muthafuckin brat with a hard lyrical passion this battle ain't real fair, bout to make ya 15-to-3 i'm GASHIN' Sending ya out in wheel chairs back to the eMc3e M@nsion // (thug mansion
messed it up cuz mansion didnt rhyme..took this line down a little...half a point...i can see how she meant to rhyme it..part of the word did rhyme...8.5
flow= 8.5
punches=9
wordplay=8
overall=8.5
=85
hottie had one less line than soldier..i dont think thats fair, and it would be stealing a win or maybe a closer contese from her...so heres what ill do..take the average of here 6 bars and divide it by 6...50 was what they got/ 6= 8 add that on and....
85+8= 93
soldiers verse:
Whats Really good
This bitch-is a big pussy, so miss-is used to being ripped,
But even your damaged period pads couldn't manage to absorb this/ 8..wasnt much feelin it tho i understand the punch...
Expose your re-dick-less with no~dress, go~head let off some "Steam" I pre-"vent",
You go "down" like a wanna be thug fisherman u bound to then eat the "sea-men-t"/ (semen - cement)
played line (semen)...that took it down a little...good wordplay tho...8.5
Its really quite sad, your rhymes consist dull-hits well miss get hit with the full-clip,
Hottie you a constipated homosexual cow, how what you spit is gay Bull-Shit/ could have taken a few word out like "gay" and "homosexual" to improve flow...8.5
And your flow is stupid you move with some bars double the size of the others,
therefore you'd never be "phat" you just "Boned" like Ethiopian mothers/
hmm...get it dont like the punch much...7
Switch it up
You "off the chain?" nah jus keep being "greased up" and put on "kick-stand"
And i hope nobody miss-believing only reason she say she "hot" is because she got no-"fans"/
that was ill...9.5 nice punches...
Ro-mance with loss and the cost you end up being put to rest, fucked to death,
Only way u BUST is if your plastic surgeon put bombs up your brest/ (bust as in breasts and as in bust a flow)
aite..good flow, but again it made me think too much but then i got it...a little slow but that dont fly in a battle...8
Kill her
Il turn you to a "JEW", take your "profit" and raid your tomb for having Lara Croft in your sig,
Ive seen your last 4 battles and it seems you battling excreting Jedi Knights , you jus use four-shits/ (use the forces~ a jedi phrase)
liked this line/...9
flow= 7.5
punches=8.5
wordplay=9
overall=8
=91.5
this battle was really close...soldier im usually feelin the punches but not impressed this time as usual...nice battle tho...
winner-hottie...
WOW THIS CAT REALLY WENT DEEP LOL DAYUM
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Damn feeble mined u did go deep, dat shows a respectful playa
any wayz........
Vote-Hottie7
better ryhme slow, scheme, and betta cut downs,
but u put up a good fite soldier(tuff decision)
shit man dis battle woz gud. now i cant vote but im goin wiv hottie on this coz sum of the lines wer quality 'I'm Straight Pro - Releasin' the verdict on this elite track
Laced Cold - I'll leave your back like concrete - cracked// i fort that was gud. gud battle both of u.
vote 4 my battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=55457
erm good battle i think, i dint understand half of any1s shit but yeah... i guess............ i gotta give it to soldier for same reason as feeble minded but i dont give extra points lol so soldier won .... mainly because of bullshit line lolll
can u vote this wen its dun plz NO HATE
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=55888
Mic server....... your stupid lol all our punchlines were EZ
im getin feelin niggaz r only voting so we will *return favour* lol whutevaaaaaaaa
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how the hell you gonna vote if you didn't understand our stuff...dumbass
uppin dis shit
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oh my god great opener by soldier better punches vote=soldier
This bitch-is a big pussy, so miss-is used to being ripped,
But even your damaged period pads couldn't manage to absorb this/
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hottie tying knots wit ya threads to show I screw wit lives~ Even when givin me compliments soldier couldn’t come half as nice! Cuz hottie'ss making more deadly holy shits than breaking bread wit Christ! Ya dropping battle verse against me? Nah jus a waste of bites//
right this was alright, the format of it i disliked, but im used to normal one line or 2 lines clearly indicated, but that was the real only downside, her vocab, metas were very nice, but there was lack of punches and multis which put this down a bit...
Dis confused cat referes to himself as soldier don't lie kid you aint da god of text
Why should I even battle you? Da jobs half done, look ya drop is already close to death//
this was, well not nearly as good as some shit ive seen you come up with, it was very weak, the whole soldier and god of text thing was poor attempt...
You think you ill? Bitch please The only reason why your sick is cuz i'm a fuckin disease
The doctor's prognosis? It was hottie7 (fever)- Frostbitin' emcees, Infect ya like SARS in ya respiratories//
You Always rhymin' bout faggot ass bullshit from dusk till dawn
Justin Timberlake can beat ya ass, so change ya name to GONE//
right this was slightly better, the sars thing is very played tho..., the hottie (fever) was aight tho, nice use... the second part "You always rhymin'........" was better, tho the change your name was again, played.....
I'm Straight Pro - Releasin' the verdict on this elite track
Laced Cold - I'll leave your back like concrete - cracked//
You can't handle me in 20-Bars cuz i'm steady bashin' You muthafuckin brat with a hard lyrical passion this battle ain't real fair, bout to make ya 15-to-3 i'm GASHIN' Sending ya out in wheel chairs back to the eMc3e M@nsion // (thug mansion)
right this is the hottie i know, much better shit, MUCH BETTER, harder use of vocab, milti rhyming, some punches, metas, was nice...
Overall id say this was weak, if hottie had used last several lines the whole way through, it would have been much better, was weak at beginning and middle...
Sorry for long post, lol
This bitch-is a big pussy, so miss-is used to being ripped,
But even your damaged period pads couldn't manage to absorb this/
Expose your re-dick-less with no~dress, go~head let off some "Steam" I pre-"vent",
You go "down" like a wanna be thug fisherman u bound to then eat the "sea-men-t"/ (semen - cement)
right the damaged period pads was nothing less than.... ILL, tight tight tight shit there soldier. Second part, again, very tight, this was very good opening..
Its really quite sad, your rhymes consist dull-hits well miss get hit with the full-clip,
Hottie you a constipated homosexual cow, how what you spit is gay Bull-Shit/
And your flow is stupid you move with some bars double the size of the others,
therefore you'd never be "phat" you just "Boned" like Ethiopian mothers/
Once again, never lets down his guard, very tight lines, the cow and bull shit was quite nice, tho not very strong i think. The phat and ethiopian mothers had me laughin, funny, yet effective.
You "off the chain?" nah jus keep being "greased up" and put on "kick-stand"
And i hope nobody miss-believing only reason she say she "hot" is because she got no-"fans"/
Ro-mance with loss and the cost you end up being put to rest, fucked to death,
Only way u BUST is if your plastic surgeon put bombs up your brest/ (bust as in breasts and as in bust a flow)
Nice first line, nice metas, very nice... and again with the hot no fans thing, LOL, nice shit.lol, laughed second i read next two lines, knew it was coming, lol, funny and powerful in one.
Il turn you to a "JEW", take your "profit" and raid your tomb for having Lara Croft in your sig,
Ive seen your last 4 battles and it seems you battling excreting Jedi Knights , you jus use four-shits/ (use the forces~ a jedi phrase)
the Jew thing is getting old in battles, but with the metas linked, it brought it back upto original, last line was bit weak, but not bad ending with the four-shits, just probably a bit confusing to some poeple...
Overall i think this battle could have been better, both ways, but i think soldier just done enough to get this one, if hottie had used her last several lines technique, she could of had it, but im going to go with solder, all reasons are basically explained above.
vote: 2003 Soldier
LOOK WE APPRICIATE IT BUT Y VOTE IF U UNDER 100POSTS LOL I THINK YALL JUS TRYIN 2 GET UR POST COUNT UP LOL
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AIGHT THANX BLAK PLAGUE........... I GUESS U R A FAIR VOTER... I HAD MISCONCEPTION OF U DAWG BCOS U CLEARLY BROKE THE BATTLE DOWN DAMN THANX, SAME WITH FEEBLE MINDED 2
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tis cool man, i read over battles i had voted on before against you and i realise that now, some of them i would have voted different, before id take a quick scam, now i break them down, fairer for everyone....
peace
AIGHT THAZ KOO'
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vote=soilder
soilder had some ill punches i was feel dat shit i liked tha bust part
hottie u nice u prolly rip a bunch dese niggas ova here
tough battle
Fav's line:
Hottie you a constipated homosexual cow, how what you spit is gay Bull-Shit
Laced Cold - I'll leave your back like concrete - cracked
no hard feelin's
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iight peeps sleeping but right now.....this is tha hottest battle on here right now...!!
iight now hottie had some nice punches...disses were good....ya wordplay was good also but I seen betta..only thing to me is I feel you did'nt hit quite that hard...not enuff heat from you this time...but ya verse woulda easly won if soldier woulda came lackluster....
2003 came ill..he hit harder with punches...wordplay was nicer..felt his heat...disses hit pretty good... like i said this was a good battle but 2003 edge this....vote 2003