yo...lets do this. ill drop then u. u must spit by tongiht. aight.
rulez:
16-26 bars
no crew, hater, dick ridin...tha usual
must spit by designated time...or battle is void
g'luck
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yo...lets do this. ill drop then u. u must spit by tongiht. aight.
rulez:
16-26 bars
no crew, hater, dick ridin...tha usual
must spit by designated time...or battle is void
g'luck
7curse respondZ:
when u read my raw bars u best off 'usin caution', u best bring 'paddles to this battle' cuz ill leave ur 'heart pausin'//
ima leave this 'zainy fagget' 6ft deep in 'another mans coffin', an leave him only to be found on tha 'back of milk cartons'//
hell...u can move tha 's' in my name an rename me '7cures', cuz thats how many urll be needin when im done 'destroyin ur werds'//
ur words are a catastrophy..like a 'scale ten typhoon', cuz u 'suck ass at rappin' like a 'queer wit a vacuum'//
man...ima 'beat' u more than tha 'wife of jason kidd', ill 'beat' u more than my dick if i was 'a'dick'ted to masturbation'//
its tru that this retard never cease to 'amaze me', u should change ur name to 'tha rap retard' instead of zainy//
this guyz 'rap tha same as his name',,,its a fuckin joke, he treats 'battles like dick'...an he always 'chokes'//
man...i just 'dropped' this kid faster than 'Luda drop elbows', du...ud have a batter chance of winnin if u 'pushed file an scrolled down to close'//
click...
yo...count em up...16 bars nicely.
remeber spit today.
iight dawg ima hit u back,,,,,,,,,, i didint even no we where up fool 12 hours n then u decide to battle n tell me in ma sleep,,, but i got yo
iight look
ay yo iight u think got it won cus u added alittle "pun"//
but fuck u im added "pun" as in "punishment"//
u little fruit cake tastin like da shit ur mom made//
u in ma lyrics is like u bein in a field of tall grass, each n every blade is a knife, cuttin n scarin u, endin ur life//
u can put yo whole army up against me, ur minor lyirics dont move me, ur minor, im major//
ur a pre write crook, iight look, ur lookin for ur book, pre write shit//
but look over here i got yo book, lightin it up n burnin it like i did to you, ur Through//
ima rip yo head off n chew u up, spit u out, slap ya brain wid ya nose bone//
im sendin u home irraspectivly, u just found a new found respect for me//
u fuckin wid ma name is lame, but WTF im kickin u outta dis game//
ma lyrics are diseased, leavin u diseased, dont worry soon ue b Deceased//
the only choke artist here is u, look if u stopped fillin ur throat wid cum maybe u'd be able to spit some//
im like a cobra, i dont even no ya, but im spittin shit in yo face, fuckin winin dis race//
so lets sum it all up, ma lyrecs are labelled wid dexterity, imaginery fuck me im legendery//
im snappin ya bones like u a anorexic, u shittin more then if i fed u a laxative//
u say ur at high skool, fuckin fool get back to elimentary skool, they'll teach u to elivate or u could whatch me eliminate//
ur lyrics are all blupdopreadreakia so get the fuck outta ma way i makin ma entry//
uppin dawgs,,,,,, leave us a link and we will vote yo shit.............................................. ...............
Curese you got this shit man
punches were good and flow better
Zainy good shit to, but ive seen better from you
holla back at my battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=51519
uppin for votez
If i could vote i would vote 7curse
but it kinda sounds a little WRITTEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !
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if i could vote i would go for 7 curse better flow plain and simple....... zanny your rymes were to wordy... get to the point man peace
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7curse gets mine, nice flow and the punch lines, stoppin' your heart, not too funny but great to read, zainy, you good, actually very good but 7curse was better
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*why does bleach up OTHER ppls battles?*
yo zainy that was a nice freestyle
7curse LOOKED prewritten but thats only cuz his style is elivated he gets this battle
'gone'
please peep
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=51389
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yo....zainy.......um.....I missed the point in yor verse....it just seemed like you were rhyming to rhyme....not like you were battling at all imo.....like....verse style or some shit
curses had some decent punches...he gets the nod
hit up my battles with Krazy and da nigma aight?
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gotta b curse zainy didnt even sound like a battle MC he was jus rhymin. no structure or nuthin 2 his bars neither.
vote-------------> 7 curse
zainy was wack. at least 7curse'd rhymed even though i found formatting poor (not that it affected the flow and punches)
VOTE---> 7curse