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Regular Battle
Punches due NO DUE DATES
Voting ends on NO DUE DATES
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1 bar(2lines) vs 1 bar(2lines)
You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.
first to 4 wins
3-0 is a KO
@Chree @daveDILLY
Check <3
Put your money on a steep slope, drop a "stock" maybe hit you with the recoil.
Hit ya once, limbs pop off like cheap toys. You'll be getting "struck" harder than a " Greek coin."
here
good luck
i will write soon i can
incredible/impressive/amazing - look how great im becoming..
punches are stunning! thats the main reason he wont see a head kick coming
Interesting- this is my first time seeing either I"m really new to the site and haven't peeped everyone yet.
I really dig the way Chree structures his 2 bars- in a way he's punching twice which is kinda sneaky but also really unique and dope. I'm really liking his drop. I thought "struck harder than a greek coin" was super dope, the cheap toys was interesting, and the stock/recoil was pretty cool ive never seen that concept touched before.
Dave Dilly- i liked your drop as well- I've never seen that kind of mma concept before. "punches are stunning, wont see the head kick coming" that's pretty dope.
This is pretty cool to see in 2024- both were way better than average was back when I was doing this.
I vote Chree because I thought he was more clever, but it's a great battle
haaaa nice. i’ve seen Chree around but haven’t seen anything outside of an open mic. been looking forward to seeing the LLL champ Dilly in action too.
this was a cool battle.
Chree’s currency punch was very original & well played. there was a lot going on & it was a little choppy, but it was executed effectively. i liked the cheap toys part lol.
dilly, i felt underestimated Chree’s wordplay & didn’t come as hard as he could have. i didn’t really like the set up & the punchline could have been executed a little better. not a bad punch for a longer verse where you expand and keep the pressure up, but i don’t think it bodes well for a stand-alone punch in a battle like this.
Vote - Chree
Drop a stock and recoil was dope from chree and I think maybe should’ve been the punchline, I didn’t think Greek coin really landed and the god awful font colour, dilly’s line was very basic but direct a bit like a miracle line. I think based on how choppy cheers line was the smoothness and directness of dily took this
V/dilly
I got dilly taking this.. struck like a Greek coin to end it doesn’t do it for me.. it just might be style for me but dilly’s bar is my style
N the style I like to see.. direct, to the point and smooth.. Chree lose the color shit it’s annoying to try n read.. but overall Dave just played out better. VOTE DAVE
I concede
v/Dilly
I like that chree goes hard on the multies but that multi heavy style needs to be complimented with a solid punch at the end for the pay off. Greek Coin wasn't it or me this time around. Dilly had a lot less moving parts, and came with a bar that for some reason reminds me of the good ol'days of grind time.
I got Dilly here, harsher wittier and kept it simple. Recoil and Greek coin don’t rhyme wtf
V/Dill
Already conceded.Quote:
Originally Posted by Spree
Cheap toys and Greek Coins rhyme.
Thats why theyre color coordinated.
I can tell you're a beginner in poetic meter LOL
Depends on accent etc... to say someone is a beginner because they didn't read in your accent is bs lol. Like how you gonna concede and then come back with excuses, trying to explain why your bar is the way it is, trying to push the blame for the "bar" onto someone else? Like it's their fault for not "getting it" and/or it's due to their lack of "skill/experience"?... the bars pretty bad and conceptually it wasn't executed cleanly... needed more work. Work on your pen game, don't blame others cause you fell when reaching.Quote:
Originally Posted by Chree
btw:
Coins, Joins, Groins.
Toys, Ploys, Boys.
& FYI
In a 1-2 bar, stick to the same rhyme scheme.
Also, what is with all of this "i conceded" shit? Are people on RB that soft that if a vote or two goes against them they start waving white flags? What?
Vote - Dave, wording was more clearer with a harsher hit.
I can tell you don't know. Poetic meter is stress in syllables. Accents are unicode I can tell this whole site just dick riding mods. When the vote is less than a sentence you need work analyzing. Yall bums fr in my mind. Btw I conceded at 2 - 2 votes quality assurance. Yall can't analyze a bar let alone write one.Quote:
Originally Posted by ItsBav
Both bars was solid but I feel like Dave had the edge of creativity with the wording and chrees punch was literally decorated but I felt the other had more sting
V/Dilly
Salty asf! lolQuote:
Originally Posted by Chree
Up your pen game, cry less... you'll do better.
Tough choice both Polish
Vote-Dave
You and rap? A weird combination like lettuce and rice,Quote:
Originally Posted by ItsBav
Claim that you're a known vet across sites?
That's true... if people come to you for help when their pets have some mites!
You rap deaf
Dilly wins 5-2
@Chree if u don’t want a battle next week sign out in the thread
More clearer took me out lolQuote:
Originally Posted by KnoXville.