RD1: Wuxia vs. HEK TEAFY vs. bare ryu(Open For Feed)

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@Wuxia
@HEK TEAFY @bare ryu

Check.

check

going 10 total

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Originally Posted by Wuxia

going 10 total

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same

wuxia / broke lesnar
@/hekteafy (he’s australian according to instagram)

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Originally Posted by miracle

@Wuxia I feel like u can guilt @Fresh into letting u still post… be like ‘come on fresh don’t be a bitch let me post’
N he will be like ‘alright whatever man’
No one wants a no show finale
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It’s 4 fucking bars …at least key something up real quick… I got some throw away bars I can pm ya

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big surprise, the league mod cherry pickin his rivals
wu’s always willing to face fresh talent, unless its in the FLT finals
couldnt even take a shot at four bars? then im not getting thru to u nicely
bro its not hard…
just look @hekteafy, u can tell his mom birthed him after doing that nightly
if aussie schools teach of mice & men, heks not comprehending the course
no australian wilderness tour when i take em out back n not feel lennie remorse
to settle the score, wu gets to tampering when the LLL final comes
wouldnt be the only place a showrunner gave lesnar an undeserved title run
try it son, watch this shotty wipe ‘way the flesh off this guys face
now his profile lacking in features…a sight almost as pitiful as hek’s spotify page

https://tinypic.host/image/Screensho...80%AFAM.2r90Bw

@HEK TEAFY @Wuxia

@bare ryu wins
Open for feed

nigga this shit was ill no wonder they ran lmao

Ryu’s a problem. Definitely one of our top tier writers here. I particularly liked the shot at four bars and Lennie remorse lines. I’ve got no constructive crit to offer, just keep it up.

yo i didn't see this can I still post??

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Originally Posted by HEK TEAFY

yo i didn't see this can I still post??

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Bare ryu wins they didnt count it against you because you're new to the site.

yo check....


when I 'cock back' the LUGE BANG, dodging bullets? nah he ain't LIU KANG!
but Wu can 'clear a room' when he walk in, he got that WU TANG!!..
and I RHYME FREES LITTY, he don't wanna 'piss up and battle' I brought ICE TEA WITH ME!
battle? you need an I.D. KIDDY coz I wouldn't chill with you, you got more 'red flags' than a "CHINESE CITY"!!..(wuxia)
and as for bare?

it's clear you BARELY RAP, 70 posts, 1-0, this 'pussies' a SCAREDY CAT!!
I know you don't wanna 'go down'.. HAIRY SNATCH! but you need to focus on emcees your FAIRLY MATCHED!!..
'steal all ya bitches' I'll 'pop' the "CHERRY PATCH" I like it, I like it a lot like JIM CAREYS CATCH(catch phrase)
you gonna PERISH LAD!, coz you copping some 'godly dick' like MARYS VAG!!..



G/L

this letsbeef style is bringing me back to a happier place in my life

oh shit Teafy is here!!!!! brother respect for showing up & dropping!

okaaaaay we have a battle on our hands & Hek gets points for showing up & delivering ever after the DQ. the gesture has merit.

aight well, my opinion on ryu’s verse still stands. shit was fire. the of mice & men / lennie line was absolute preposterousness. bunch of nice personals. wasted no time waylaying the comp. pretty sure he was the first in the league to drop his verse too so that’s extra lethal given the content.

HEK’s style is different. i like it. i don’t see the point in capitalizing the multis, but it adds to the effect i guess.. kinda like he’s yelling & being aggressive which i like. opener was funny. closer was decent. i liked the red flags line. overall, not too bad of a verse. some
filler lines, but overall a decent effort and on such short notice. would definitely like to see what dude’s capable of with prep time. good shit Hek.

Vote - ryu

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Originally Posted by Jack Hallows

oh shit Teafy is here!!!!! brother respect for showing up & dropping!

okaaaaay we have a battle on our hands & Hek gets points for showing up & delivering ever after the DQ. the gesture has merit.

aight well, my opinion on ryu’s verse still stands. shit was fire. the of mice & men / lennie line was absolute preposterousness. bunch of nice personals. wasted no time waylaying the comp. pretty sure he was the first in the league to drop his verse too so that’s extra lethal given the content.

HEK’s style is different. i like it. i don’t see the point in capitalizing the multis, but it adds to the effect i guess.. kinda like he’s yelling & being aggressive which i like. opener was funny. closer was decent. i liked the red flags line. overall, not too bad of a verse. some
filler lines, but overall a decent effort and on such short notice. would definitely like to see what dude’s capable of with prep time. good shit Hek.

Vote - ryu

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thanks man :)

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Originally Posted by bare ryu

this letsbeef style is bringing me back to a happier place in my life

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@ bare Ryu and ONLY Bare Ryu

You cool with running this for votes or want to move on

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Originally Posted by Spree

@ bare Ryu and ONLY Bare Ryu

You cool with running this for votes or want to move on

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yea bro thats cool

upping this for votes

I liked HEK’s style with all the multis and internal rhymes, certainly more lyrical rap skills on display compared to Ryu’s relatively straightforward couplet structure. The content was varied, not as consistent as Ryu’s but I did particularly like the red flags line, and the hairy snatch one was cool too.

I preferred Ryu’s verse, but his wordplay and punches were kind of OP here so that’s taking nothing from HEK. Also worth mentioning, I like the sportsmanship from both. Nice to see.

Vote- Ryu

This was creative
Slick banger bars