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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ox-(Lenox-Wins)
Got smacked by Lenox aka Jonny Blaze
Ayooooo…
Who let this kid out the play pen? Nigga my range is endless
This lame is finished, I’ll make Dill shit his self like Angelica came to visit
Ya brains is splittin, this fake gangster gettin murdered so godly
If he’s got the sticks on em…it’s w/ gasoline cuz after this I’m burnin his body
Puttin bullet holes in silly foes, he drowning if I best em w/ the tool
Wet em when I pull, watch ‘DDT get soaked’ like kids wrestling in the pool
Yeah I’m steady w/ the tote but w/ the blade I’m ready for the blow
Homie If u gain an edge after this match, it’s gonna be a machete to ur throat
Dude is a bum, all ur experience w/ cash is lookin rough, mister
The only time u’ll see ‘Dill seasoned w/ chicken’, is when he’s cookin up dinner
Boy u a flop, STOP! My path to the top is mean n eager
This lames demeanor? His route barely creates separation like Chief receivers
He’s a bleeder, one reach n Dave is gettin artfully slit
I mean if ur quick w/ the draw…it’s gonna be ur blood after I nick ur artery bitch
Tried to bring fire like ghost rider till Lennox left em beat w/ the lead
It’s just ironic u lost to ‘Johnny Blaze’ the way he put that heat to ya head
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oh shit can some1 take my verse off
i for some reason thought it was 12 lines
i have to write 2 more bars
i wont have the time until later
please delete my verse for now
i will get my bars up tonight
You should lose faith & become an atheist - give up on getting a halo..
cuz every time a miracle comes your way u get wrecked via KO
destroy ya face - it’s curtains if this hoe wants beef..
its like getting head from the old titanic bitch how I’m taking out Rosa teeth
line u up 4 a headshot - this shit ain’t no nerf..
behind you that wallaby covered in blood like a kangaroos birth
dis pathetic fuck don’t be shooting - u aint bout that, scrub..
if he pulls out the toaster - he will start crying & jump in a tub
i smoke trees all day - this faggot never toke’d a jay..
if Rhy's ever rolling a joint he twisted his ankle running away
trash whatever u plan on posting - your not connecting with it..
ur whole verse is a rough draft - mines hurricane winds wrecking ur shit
being number 1 is something your going to live without..
if you get a taste of victory it’s cuz my punchs connected 2ya mouth
ill spray ya whole house up - don’t go for a walk..
cuz these stray bullets will connect wit ur kids like a sit down talk
I’ve got Dave winning this one. I found his piece more creative with the wordplay and angles. I did like Ryno’s internal rhyme density though, that makes it a closer call than it would otherwise have been. ‘Rough draft / hurricane winds’ was the stand out line of the battle for me.
Vote : Ryno
Anytime a rugrats bar is flipped in smiling .definitely got a chuckle.overall flow IMO was leagues above also.
Was a good read fellas. I enjoyed it throughout.
thanks 4 voting
score is 1-1
Who let this kid out the play pen? Nigga my range is endless
This lame is finished, I’ll make Dill shit his self like Angelica came to visit
Puttin bullet holes in silly foes, he drowning if I best em w/ the tool
Wet em when I pull, watch ‘DDT get soaked’ like kids wrestling in the pool
Dude is a bum, all ur experience w/ cash is lookin rough, mister
The only time u’ll see ‘Dill seasoned w/ chicken’, is when he’s cookin up dinner
Boy u a flop, STOP! My path to the top is mean n eager
This lames demeanor? His route barely creates separation like Chief receivers
vs.
You should lose faith & become an atheist - give up on getting a halo..
cuz every time a miracle comes your way u get wrecked via KO
destroy ya face - it’s curtains if this hoe wants beef..
its like getting head from the old titanic bitch how I’m taking out Rosa teeth
line u up 4 a headshot - this shit ain’t no nerf..
behind you that wallaby covered in blood like a kangaroos birth
i smoke trees all day - this faggot never toke’d a jay..
if Rhy's ever rolling a joint he twisted his ankle running away
ill spray ya whole house up - don’t go for a walk..
cuz these stray bullets will connect wit ur kids like a sit down talk
Okay, I felt thbat this was an entertaining battle. For the most part, I enjoyed both participants verses with the exception of a few bars that I left out. I felt that the strongest / hardest hitting bars are the ones I picked and showed above. I believe that daveDILLY had the edge in this battle by one bar.
Vote - daveDILLY
daveDILLY had some good quality punches, at least 4 I enjoyed.
I felt the quality, quantity and personals in the punches from Ryno hit harder.
My vote goes to Ryno.
ryno
Who let this kid out the play pen? Nigga my range is endless
This lame is finished, I’ll make Dill shit his self like Angelica came to visit
i liked the multies and the punch was funny
Ya brains is splittin, this fake gangster gettin murdered so godly
If he’s got the sticks on em…it’s w/ gasoline cuz after this I’m burnin his body
i didnt like this one. but again i liked the multies that continues from the previous bar.
Puttin bullet holes in silly foes, he drowning if I best em w/ the tool
Wet em when I pull, watch ‘DDT get soaked’ like kids wrestling in the pool
this was nice.
Yeah I’m steady w/ the tote but w/ the blade I’m ready for the blow
Homie If u gain an edge after this match, it’s gonna be a machete to ur throat
this was good
Dude is a bum, all ur experience w/ cash is lookin rough, mister
The only time u’ll see ‘Dill seasoned w/ chicken’, is when he’s cookin up dinner
not for me.
Boy u a flop, STOP! My path to the top is mean n eager
This lames demeanor? His route barely creates separation like Chief receivers
i wasnt feeling this one.
He’s a bleeder, one reach n Dave is gettin artfully slit
I mean if ur quick w/ the draw…it’s gonna be ur blood after I nick ur artery bitch
i didnt like this one.
Tried to bring fire like ghost rider till Lennox left em beat w/ the lead
It’s just ironic u lost to ‘Johnny Blaze’ the way he put that heat to ya head
i didnt like the finisher much. felt a bit to simple..
vs
daveDILLY
You should lose faith & become an atheist - give up on getting a halo..
cuz every time a miracle comes your way u get wrecked via KO
this was was a good opener
destroy ya face - it’s curtains if this hoe wants beef..
its like getting head from the old titanic bitch how I’m taking out Rosa teeth
lol ok
line u up 4 a headshot - this shit ain’t no nerf..
behind you that wallaby covered in blood like a kangaroos birth
this was ok. 1/2 points because wallaby isnt a kangaroo
dis pathetic fuck don’t be shooting - u aint bout that, scrub..
if he pulls out the toaster - he will start crying & jump in a tub
lol funny
i smoke trees all day - this faggot never toke’d a jay..
if Rhy's ever rolling a joint he twisted his ankle running away
this was nice
trash whatever u plan on posting - your not connecting with it..
ur whole verse is a rough draft - mines hurricane winds wrecking ur shit
this was ok
being number 1 is something your going to live without..
if you get a taste of victory it’s cuz my punchs connected 2ya mouth
this was ok
ill spray ya whole house up - don’t go for a walk..
cuz these stray bullets will connect wit ur kids like a sit down talk
i didnt like this one
I have daveDILLY pulling out a win in this one. i thought his bars hit better, he had less messes Rosa Teeth was the funniest bar in this battle.
v/daveDilly
Vote - Dave
This was honestly a fire battle. I liked pretty much every bar except the Johnny blaze/heat to ya head. That felt mild. Outside of that, both of you really cooked. Good read. Kudos to both.
Who let this kid out the play pen? Nigga my range is endless
This lame is finished, I’ll make Dill shit his self like Angelica came to visit
needs work... someone just used a rug-rats line recently
Ya brains is splittin, this fake gangster gettin murdered so godly
If he’s got the sticks on em…it’s w/ gasoline cuz after this I’m burnin his body
so far it sounds like rework of older puns
Puttin bullet holes in silly foes, he drowning if I best em w/ the tool
Wet em when I pull, watch ‘DDT get soaked’ like kids wrestling in the pool
not bad
Yeah I’m steady w/ the tote but w/ the blade I’m ready for the blow
Homie If u gain an edge after this match, it’s gonna be a machete to ur throat
6 syllable rhyme.. and not bad... still feels a little used though
Dude is a bum, all ur experience w/ cash is lookin rough, mister
The only time u’ll see ‘Dill seasoned w/ chicken’, is when he’s cookin up dinner
not bad,,, could be better though
Boy u a flop, STOP! My path to the top is mean n eager
This lames demeanor? His route barely creates separation like Chief receivers
did you mean reception
He’s a bleeder, one reach n Dave is gettin artfully slit
I mean if ur quick w/ the draw…it’s gonna be ur blood after I nick ur artery bitch
this seems like your goto ... needs work though
Tried to bring fire like ghost rider till Lennox left em beat w/ the lead
It’s just ironic u lost to ‘Johnny Blaze’ the way he put that heat to ya head
could have been a better closer
vs
You should lose faith & become an atheist - give up on getting a halo..
cuz every time a miracle comes your way u get wrecked via KO
seems like feeler.. maybe you're just getting started
destroy ya face - it’s curtains if this hoe wants beef..
its like getting head from the old titanic bitch how I’m taking out Rosa teeth
not filling this
line u up 4 a headshot - this shit ain’t no nerf..
behind you that wallaby covered in blood like a kangaroos birth
straight
dis pathetic fuck don’t be shooting - u aint bout that, scrub..
if he pulls out the toaster - he will start crying & jump in a tub
OKAY
i smoke trees all day - this faggot never toke’d a jay..
if Rhy's ever rolling a joint he twisted his ankle running away
made me laugh a little
trash whatever u plan on posting - your not connecting with it..
ur whole verse is a rough draft - mines hurricane winds wrecking ur shit
lol... dope
being number 1 is something your going to live without..
if you get a taste of victory it’s cuz my punchs connected 2ya mouth
not bad
ill spray ya whole house up - don’t go for a walk..
cuz these stray bullets will connect wit ur kids like a sit down talk
K
while Ryno seemed a little used Dave had fresher lines like "sit down talk"
v-Dave
5-2 Dave wins