WK04: (0-1) 3viction vs. (0-1) Zunto 3VICTION WINS OPEN FOR FEED

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Regular Battle
Verses due NO DUE DATES*
Voting ends on NO DUE DATES*

Must check-in 24/48 hours for NO DUE DATES to take effect
*be reasonable

10-lines MAX Regular Battle
16-lines MAX Contendership and Championship Battle


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@3viction
@Zunto

check im only dropping 10 if he doesn't post in here.

Check

wux has my shit

How many lines did you send u fuckin idiot

14 dip shit

3viction is good to go. He sent 14 in.

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Originally Posted by Wuxia

3viction is good to go. He sent 14 in.

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When is this due

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Originally Posted by Zunto

When is this due

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No due dates but I'll give you an extension if you need it.

Thank you

Also looking at the post dates you’re math ain’t mathing

Whole family is gone lmao literally. RIP though


Keep fuckin wit me. Last thing you & urs’ll see is my fuckin burner
First I'll give u a buck, then 2 parents with wings.. ur new names Timmy Turner
Y’all thought he was really checkin me? Whole fam’ll get a wreckin’ b
Dia doesn’t allow extensions, & neither does his cousins life expectancy
Fucked ur mom into a coma. Now that slut is diminished
Her death had a slurping noise, shit sound like the caprisun was finished
This was ur fault - you a dummy. Read all of ur lines - shit was bummy
Life is ugly, now ur feeding ur ma thru a machine like the Tamagachi is hungry
And we know you lie about those fancy Porsche’s & dandy doormen
only thing ur mothers death brought you closer to was the family fortune
Dumbbb larkin, catch em near his whip wit the heat sparkin
Dump targets.. have em checkin twice for a sign like street parkin
Ur done bro. Shit’ll get animated QUICK if you want smoke
& when guns blow... I’ll have this kid visitin’ dead relatives like Coco

Got more than one angle for your bitch ass


You're stolen valor, coming back from pretend war, either way you'll take home nothing.
When you die if they give your loved ones left behind a flag, it'll be one with a rainbow onnit.
You might con the gullible, but your off ur self like my cousin did, when they rate these spots.
Gun bars for days too, as far as the ur bitch ones, the blams she heard ain't fake screenshots.
There's a difference between our white priv, I turn my heater on when I need to curtain simps.
You got one you can program to turn on automatically when the weather reaches certain temps.
My pain is your complimentary gift, is my parents dead as fuck, you already know the answer.
So why do you pull more shit outta ur ass than the dr's had to when my mom had colon cancer.
Getting punished turns u on, you're actually jealous of lenox because you didn't get a time out.
Never thought I would wait on a kill spree bar, until u said they make you wanna pull ur eye out.
When u put lines on the table who gonna co-sign, not even if the spread gives em a coke high
Teaming w/ his ass is like when crackheads move in and the property values take a nosedive.
If you thought that xenforo wordplay was bad, check the one against lenny damn that’s crazy.
Chances u have a better one, are lower than winning a tourney and getting soule to pay me.

Timmy turner could of been done better.. it was alright tho, cousin bar was cool, slurping could of been done harder but it was cool..deeding ya mom cool.. the last three didn’t hit for me

3vic opener was little wordy to start.. even just getting rid of ‘left behind’ would of made it little better.. to many extra words not need.. a lot of ur lines were like that in the beginning ..got better in the middle….. the certain temp bar was okish.. not really hard toward him.. nose dive was ok not really that creative or direct but ok..soule to pay be was ur best bar

Overall zunto got this.. just stronger disses and his misses weren’t as bad as 3vic’s

Vote zunto

Zunto stinks

@Wuxia @Art
zunto recycled his shit, he was dq'd for recycling this same verse before.

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...=1#post8933033

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Dia Wins

I just had a breakdown smh
Vote Zunto.

Smoother more effective hits, Personals were better
Evictions structure kinda muddled the hit & halfway in the punch I lost interest.
But maybe that's a style preference idk

Keep fuckin wit me. Last thing you & urs’ll see is my fuckin burner
First I'll give u a buck, then 2 parents with wings.. ur new names Timmy Turner

Dope.

Y’all thought he was really checkin me? Whole fam’ll get a wreckin’ b
Dia doesn’t allow extensions, & neither does his cousins life expectancy

Lmao.

Fucked ur mom into a coma. Now that slut is diminished
Her death had a slurping noise, shit sound like the caprisun was finished

Lmao.

This was ur fault - you a dummy. Read all of ur lines - shit was bummy
Life is ugly, now ur feeding ur ma thru a machine like the Tamagachi is hungry

Dope.

And we know you lie about those fancy Porsche’s & dandy doormen
only thing ur mothers death brought you closer to was the family fortune

Dope.

Dumbbb larkin, catch em near his whip wit the heat sparkin
Dump targets.. have em checkin twice for a sign like street parkin

Wasn't feeling this.

Ur done bro. Shit’ll get animated QUICK if you want smoke
& when guns blow... I’ll have this kid visitin’ dead relatives like Coco

Wasn't feeling this.





You're stolen valor, coming back from pretend war, either way you'll take home nothing.
When you die if they give your loved ones left behind a flag, it'll be one with a rainbow onnit.

When you die if they give your loved ones left behind a flag - that was way too wordy. Should have just said when they give your loved ones a flag. You need to be short and concise. The longer you write the more unnecessary filler you put into your bars, making it hard to get any kind of strong impact.

You might con the gullible, but your off ur self like my cousin did, when they rate these spots.
Gun bars for days too, as far as the ur bitch ones, the blams she heard ain't fake screenshots.

Why would you deliberately bring up your dead cousin here? What purpose did that serve other than for you to build up to a rather anticlimactic flip?

There's a difference between our white priv, I turn my heater on when I need to curtain simps.
You got one you can program to turn on automatically when the weather reaches certain temps.

What does white privilege have to do with owning heaters? I don't understand this shit fam. Is owning a box fan and using it when it's hot outside white privilege? If so. Lmao. Dead.

My pain is your complimentary gift, is my parents dead as fuck, you already know the answer.
So why do you pull more shit outta ur ass than the dr's had to when my mom had colon cancer.

Wtf. Why are you debasing your family like this? Seriously. You think this shit is funny? Because other people dishonor their memory you can do it too? For what reason? Pre-rebuttals?

Getting punished turns u on, you're actually jealous of lenox because you didn't get a time out.
Never thought I would wait on a kill spree bar, until u said they make you wanna pull ur eye out.

Wasn't feeling this.

When u put lines on the table who gonna co-sign, not even if the spread gives em a coke high
Teaming w/ his ass is like when crackheads move in and the property values take a nosedive.

Dope.

If you thought that xenforo wordplay was bad, check the one against lenny damn that’s crazy.
Chances u have a better one, are lower than winning a tourney and getting soule to pay me.

Dope.




It appears Zunto might have recycled his verse, and if that's the case then he definitely lost. But 3viction lost too, and his loss was made even more profound in that he actually tried.

v-3viction

white privs have smart thermastats that turn on automatically, pay attention.