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@Mac
@Plot
We'll go 5 Mac?
I can easily go 16 but that would be overkill so lets go 10
Mac's good to go. He sent 10 in.
Will have a verse soon
I cant fit my thumb in while fistin your miss Mac
Just keep feedin her 4 fingers, fat bitch is dreamin of Kit-Kats.
Dudes got no game in life or the ring, fists'll get no resistance
This fight'll be all hand to mouth, like his pathetic existence.
Far fom the best in this text game, needs to get back to basics
His wheel-house would be more...working a mill for the Amish.
So put a bullet in this cuck Mac, then find his slut still taking a dick
& let another couple bang! Like his open relationship.
Now what he got? He will prolly try to sue he's so fuckin soft
& seek the highest legislator...To throw his body off.
Jeeeezzz
Why tear
Down ur verse
Like this?
This cunt breaks down his style quite more than it warrants
Bitch I’m dissin u upfront. while the shit u write comes in installments
Guessing that’s all u got? with good reason I say its biting
The thing about plots is after a few seasons its all lazy writing
Art schemed Plot quick n dirty. It was so low-diff u seem like kinda bitter
Stream of shots’ll stop ya Midjourney. With no real life in the final picture
& Nine at hand means face to the grass, fingers triggers is the Mac sign
Trust this armband will give u a fast-pass quicker than a theme park line
Gats autotuned, ought to Flatline “artists” who thought they a nice shot
Plot unplugged would be tough to hear, but his fam aint withdrawing life support
Plot:
Nothing
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Mac:
This cunt breaks down his style quite more than it warrants
Bitch I’m dissin u upfront. while the shit u write comes in installments
Plot i feel like you really rushed this week. I get it shit happens. Tough to see tho cuz I think ur a good writer and clearly capable of winning against Mac. Mac ur opener I thought was cool. Wasn’t feeling anything else. That plot name play with the seasons was cool too but I’ve seen that against plot plenty.
v/ Mac
So put a bullet in this cuck Mac, then find his slut still taking a dick
& let another couple bang! Like his open relationship.
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This cunt breaks down his style quite more than it warrants
Bitch I’m dissin u upfront. while the shit u write comes in installments
Guessing that’s all u got? with good reason I say its biting
The thing about plots is after a few seasons its all lazy writing
I got Mac taking this, the bold was LOTB
v/Mac
So put a bullet in this cuck Mac, then find his slut still taking a dick
& let another couple bang! Like his open relationship.
Legislator could have been dope bet fell short
Seemed a bit rushed here Plot ive seen much better from you dawg
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This cunt breaks down his style quite more than it warrants
Bitch I’m dissin u upfront. while the shit u write comes in installments
Guessing that’s all u got? with good reason I say its biting
The thing about plots is after a few seasons its all lazy writing
Art schemed Plot quick n dirty. It was so low-diff u seem like kinda bitter
Stream of shots’ll stop ya Midjourney. With no real life in the final picture
Got Mac here easily. Plot usually drops some fire especially as of late. Seemed rushed
I cant fit my thumb in while fistin your miss Mac
Just keep feedin her 4 fingers, fat bitch is dreamin of Kit-Kats.
Wasn't feeling this.
Dudes got no game in life or the ring, fists'll get no resistance
This fight'll be all hand to mouth, like his pathetic existence.
I thought it was cool. Good recovery from opener.
Far fom the best in this text game, needs to get back to basics
His wheel-house would be more...working a mill for the Amish.
This would of hit better to me but you mispronounced Amish. It's more like "honest." Aww-mish. But I liked the concept and the bar itself.
So put a bullet in this cuck Mac, then find his slut still taking a dick
& let another couple bang! Like his open relationship.
Decent.
Now what he got? He will prolly try to sue he's so fuckin soft
& seek the highest legislator...To throw his body off.
I actually enjoyed this bar the most out of your verse. I loved the creativity with the wordplay.
This cunt breaks down his style quite more than it warrants
Bitch I’m dissin u upfront. while the shit u write comes in installments
Nice personal to open with.
Guessing that’s all u got? with good reason I say its biting
The thing about plots is after a few seasons its all lazy writing
I don't know on what basis you're accusing him of biting, quoted examples would have been appropriate in this regard. I did think the nameflip was dope af. But the fake personal itself ruined this bar for me.
Art schemed Plot quick n dirty. It was so low-diff u seem like kinda bitter
Stream of shots’ll stop ya Midjourney. With no real life in the final picture
Wasn't feeling this.
& Nine at hand means face to the grass, fingers triggers is the Mac sign
Trust this armband will give u a fast-pass quicker than a theme park line
Wasn't feeling this.
Gats autotuned, ought to Flatline “artists” who thought they a nice shot
Plot unplugged would be tough to hear, but his fam aint withdrawing life support
Wasn't feeling this.
I actually have Plot taking this 3-1. His punches weren't all solid connects but they were consistently average, while Mac had one dope bar that he opened with and then the rest missed for me.
v-Plot
Plot- first 3bars were meh, nothing that hit.. last two were ok.. couple bang could of hit a lot harder if written differently..
Closer seemed a little lazy but I’ll accept it.. basic/Amish don’t rhyme for shit
Mac- lazy writing was cool n LOTB.. I had a problem with ur opener bc installments and warrants doesn’t rhyme for me… either does nice shot/life support..
This battle is a tough call.. both had trouble rhyming in a rap battle which is weird.. and both had misses..
Imma give this battle to plot 2-1
Vote PLOT
Plot
I cant fit my thumb in while fistin your miss Mac
Just keep feedin her 4 fingers, fat bitch is dreamin of Kit-Kats.
So put a bullet in this cuck Mac, then find his slut still taking a dick
& let another couple bang! Like his open relationship.
Mac.
This cunt breaks down his style quite more than it warrants
Bitch I’m dissin u upfront. while the shit u write comes in installments
Art schemed Plot quick n dirty. It was so low-diff u seem like kinda bitter
Stream of shots’ll stop ya Midjourney. With no real life in the final picture
I have plot here. close very close but it came down to misses or near misses. I feel like Plot put a bit more creativity in his punches that missed. the midjourney punch from Mac was ok i think the wording could have made that punch the LOTB. as it is, it was still cool.
v/Plot
I cant fit my thumb in while fistin your miss Mac
Just keep feedin her 4 fingers, fat bitch is dreamin of Kit-Kats.
my mind went to chicken fingers lol but i thought this was okay
Dudes got no game in life or the ring, fists'll get no resistance
This fight'll be all hand to mouth, like his pathetic existence.
i like the concept but the execution is lacking
Far fom the best in this text game, needs to get back to basics
His wheel-house would be more...working a mill for the Amish.
not a fan, doesnt rhyme
So put a bullet in this cuck Mac, then find his slut still taking a dick
& let another couple bang! Like his open relationship.
light but not horrible
Now what he got? He will prolly try to sue he's so fuckin soft
& seek the highest legislator...To throw his body off.
this was lotb although a bit lazy on the execution. still cool though
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Jeeeezzz
Why tear
Down ur verse
Like this?
This cunt breaks down his style quite more than it warrants
Bitch I’m dissin u upfront. while the shit u write comes in installments
cool
Guessing that’s all u got? with good reason I say its biting
The thing about plots is after a few seasons its all lazy writing
i like this
Art schemed Plot quick n dirty. It was so low-diff u seem like kinda bitter
Stream of shots’ll stop ya Midjourney. With no real life in the final picture
not a fan
& Nine at hand means face to the grass, fingers triggers is the Mac sign
Trust this armband will give u a fast-pass quicker than a theme park line
nah
Gats autotuned, ought to Flatline “artists” who thought they a nice shot
Plot unplugged would be tough to hear, but his fam aint withdrawing life support
get what you're going for, wasnt a fan of as is
fuck its close. have mac with 2 Il ike and plot with 1 i like and 2 i half liked. I thought the legislator punch was lotb so im gonna give my vote to plot
v/ Plot
4-3 needs votes
So put a bullet in this cuck Mac, then find his slut still taking a dick
& let another couple bang! Like his open relationship.
An outdated concept but at least you changed it up with the more modern take of open relationships. Beyond this though it was definitely one of your weaker drops since I been back. Seemed very thrown together.
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This cunt breaks down his style quite more than it warrants
Bitch I’m dissin u upfront. while the shit u write comes in installments
Art schemed Plot quick n dirty. It was so low-diff u seem like kinda bitter
Stream of shots’ll stop ya Midjourney. With no real life in the final picture
Mac has a habit of hurting his concepts with his wording. I tend to have this same problem so I get the struggle. You get the vote from me pretty much based on concepts and consistency.
Vote Mac
4-4 next vote wins
Plot
Opener wasn’t a huge fan of
Hand to mouth was cool
Basics and Amish don’t rhyme
Couple bang was cool
I was able to make closer work, a little so it was light
Mac
Opener cool
Don’t like how u set up lazy writing joint
Mid journey has potential bad wording
Armband wasn’t executed good
Closer didn’t rhyme. Cool idea
I got plot taking this one with probably 1 better punch and better jabs. Edged him on misses too. A lotta dope ideas from Mac just executed poorly on a couple. Good read tho gentlemen
Vote plot
Plot wins 5-4