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Rebuttal Option
both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)
You have 24hrs from when battle was set to agree on rebuttal battle
You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.
@Barcotic
@Blue Bayou
Yodelayheehoo
@Barcotic @Blue Bayou
Bars due tonight
Nice full clip
He's writing a will for his life real quick, most likely w. huge bold letters
Everyone wants to see my rifle miss. Think michael vick; Bluenose bettor
dreamy & steamy. great stubble bitches’ cream when they see me
Barcs 5 o'clock shadow is following his girl home from work to see if she’s cheating
WILL you just stop, I’m trying really hard here to give you a pass each week but holy cow this wasn’t even worth the time. Rifle miss? The people want to see your rifle miss? What.. is the punch blue nose blue knows? Like is that the actual punch here? Go to hell
Blue, first line is horrible but the second line is amazing and I can see that being real life from him. One sided battle here.
Vote blue bayou
yeah wasn't feeling barcs this week.. at some point we have to stop slaughtering the English language for the sake of wordplay. Blues wasn't fire or anything, pretty simple but funny.
v/ Blue Bayou
lmao
stg i could break this 2-punch battle down in 100 lines
mainly cuz both guys here showed why they are smooth/dope/clever BUT ALSO at times have the downside of corniness/misses/wrong TONE for the diss perhaps....?
For the sake of Spree and readers I'll be brief
I've got V/Blue here because his closer is such a cool & smooth flip...
Agreed that (AGAIN) Blue's kinda lame self-brag"I'm hot/sexy" opener, to me I don't think about my own or other's beardstubble as a sexual attraction commodity--BUT hey maybe blue's self-brag sex-setups are FOR the ladies...who I'm sure are Reading/listening to him avidly. Jumping on him.
Good job Blue; nice closer for the dub.
Barcotic, (AGAIN) has smooth phonetics...it's "cool" to say, but it is NOT "forceful/dissy" to say, to me...because of the poor tone.
In other words barc, the phonetics are there, the wordplay is there.
But what is the quality of said wordplay? And does this "tone" sound like something you'd rip towards Blue in a live battle?
Lol. Not really. And the Rifle miss was... kinda a miss.
Take solace in the fact that you got the W in every other week I've been voting so....
Swing and a miss here; let's bring back the better stuff for Next week.
Thanks to both for dropping and GL
got Blue also on this one to be real
I didn’t feel like Barc was that bad with bluenose bettor, I preferred that one wayyyyy more than the Ryno one to be honest but BB got this
vote - Blue
Bluenose better was fire imo, but I personally didn’t like the set up. But I have to go with blue on this one. Shit made me laugh out loud for real. I’m glad to see the switch up in wordplay styles.
V/blue
I think barc takes this if his set up was better than see my rifle miss, fuck that I wanna see you shoot blue in the head. Blue nose better had potential. Blues bar was alright, relatively humourous but a bit wordy and didn’t hit that hard but was more direct I suppose
V/blue
Lmao blue
Fire. Just had to give you props, don’t need the vote.
V. Blue….the humor was a big factor here. I liked his idea more too
lol.. sorry barc didnt get your bar.. i mean i did, but did not like it
blue was bold
Blue got this
I thought it was a pretty tough punch.. barc didn’t hit for me
I have Blue. It was pretty funny. But Barc's attention to detail, from the rhyme scheme to the wordplay, was dope. The reactions I got to both of their bars were different so depending on what kind of bar I was into on the day I read this would of played a huge role. Comedy just so happened to win out today.
v-bb