Round 1 - 5. Kill Spree vs 12. Letterman - Let wins

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@Kill Spree @Letterman

Deja vu.

Hello.

Ext

Cool with me.

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Originally Posted by Letterman

Cool with me.

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16 sent to phal

Fake personals vs Phalanx?

To prove your skill, a web of lies is how your words entangled
Typical fat bitch online, cuz you can only show appeal by taking certain angles
& your excuses were pitiful. It left you in a grave place
Texas chainsaw - After we witnessed that Kill Spree, we knew he’d try to Save Face
That’s your MO? Try it again & you’ll get a hearse, G
I don’t care your reality’s augmented, cuz you’ll need a different Metaverse me
I been David Blaine. Make opps disappear as soon as I spray
But I can show you a magic trick too.. when I turn into your driveway
If I kill ya children, it’ll leave this bum in a crisis
So imma spot the kid.. then slide up on your son like I’m adjusting the brightness
Slashes, cuts, stab wounds.. that’s how imma kill this hater
Now your body’s repulsing.. as the doctors try to revive you with a defibrillator
He don’t get chicks. Your face is something they all have ran from
You could try speed dating.. you’ll see em leaving on site more than a Barcotic tantrum
Only one punch about your name, but it’s something they won’t exalt
They told me Kill Spree is hard to flip.. but that’s until the shotgun make him somersault

Kill Spree's Verse. Been in my inbox since Saturday.

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Originally Posted by Kill Spree

16




Letterman Aka Mac Avelli aka King Letterman aka the guy who got dq’d from four battles in one year for recycling

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Originally Posted by Amen aka Dre replying to Letterman

Finally made his way out of the recycle bin.

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Quote:

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Originally Posted by Letterman

Is that your way of welcoming me back? Lol

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Originally Posted by Amen

Yes lol.

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Gone @ this faggot…
Thinkin we throwing pedals upon arrival! I’ll throw lead into Lett dome
We won’t toss flowers @ your feet, but stomp out the ones on your headstone
Amen Get Stupid on Lett for years! But I’ve shined w/felon shit
I’ve deaded Mac, Dre…& his bars haven’t been hot since that guy was relevant
Your attitude pushing buttons. So when I drop? he gotta fall
That Tonal get ligaments shot off! this just another strong body on the wall!
This scar clap, 1 shot ‘drive’ through this hard wack
Battling me’s your own asphalt you got left dead on the Tarmac
Had your bitch bent over, while you was hyping soft text
This Archive hit hard from the back…while you were downstairs biting concepts
I crack bones into rubble. League will be giving me thankings
For having your spine more out of place than Phal in his rankings
Home invasion! Shoot ya fam so the itch to kill will feed my nerves in
You won’t live to Sumac, & I’d rather rub that on my eyes than read your verses
I orchestrate straight murder! I drive to put this weak in hell
Hit you w/the Caravelli till you don’t have lungs to sing for help

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To prove your skill, a web of lies is how your words entangled
Typical fat bitch online, cuz you can only show appeal by taking certain angles
clean
& your excuses were pitiful. It left you in a grave place
Texas chainsaw - After we witnessed that Kill Spree, we knew he’d try to Save Face
nice
That’s your MO? Try it again & you’ll get a hearse, G
I don’t care your reality’s augmented, cuz you’ll need a different Metaverse me
aight
I been David Blaine. Make opps disappear as soon as I spray
But I can show you a magic trick too.. when I turn into your driveway
light work. weak land imo
If I kill ya children, it’ll leave this bum in a crisis
So imma spot the kid.. then slide up on your son like I’m adjusting the brightness
ehhh decentish. not hard.
Slashes, cuts, stab wounds.. that’s how imma kill this hater
Now your body’s repulsing.. as the doctors try to revive you with a defibrillator
lol dope
He don’t get chicks. Your face is something they all have ran from
You could try speed dating.. you’ll see em leaving on site more than a Barcotic tantrum
lol
Only one punch about your name, but it’s something they won’t exalt
They told me Kill Spree is hard to flip.. but that’s until the shotgun make him somersault
good punch


vs



Gone @ this faggot…
Thinkin we throwing pedals upon arrival! I’ll throw lead into Lett dome
We won’t toss flowers @ your feet, but stomp out the ones on your headstone
aight
Amen Get Stupid on Lett for years! But I’ve shined w/felon shit
I’ve deaded Mac, Dre…& his bars haven’t been hot since that guy was relevant
nice
Your attitude pushing buttons. So when I drop? he gotta fall
That Tonal get ligaments shot off! this just another strong body on the wall!
dope
This scar clap, 1 shot ‘drive’ through this hard wack
Battling me’s your own asphalt you got left dead on the Tarmac
fire!!
Had your bitch bent over, while you was hyping soft text
This Archive hit hard from the back…while you were downstairs biting concepts
LMAO!!!! DOPE!!!
I crack bones into rubble. League will be giving me thankings
For having your spine more out of place than Phal in his rankings
ehhh could of been lethal. fell flat imo
Home invasion! Shoot ya fam so the itch to kill will feed my nerves in
You won’t live to Sumac, & I’d rather rub that on my eyes than read your verses
lol nice
I orchestrate straight murder! I drive to put this weak in hell
Hit you w/the Caravelli till you don’t have lungs to sing for help
ehhh it was a stretch. decentish


BATTLE OF THE WEEK!!! Both came with the flames. Fire for sure. good shyt from both of yall. But i gotta choose one and im giving it the hardest punches overall.

vote kill spree

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Originally Posted by Letterman

Fake personals vs Phalanx?

To prove your skill, a web of lies is how your words entangled
Typical fat bitch online, cuz you can only show appeal by taking certain angles
Obviously, Im semi-biased to this concept. I thought it was fire.
& your excuses were pitiful. It left you in a grave place
Texas chainsaw - After we witnessed that Kill Spree, we knew he’d try to Save Face
This was nice.
That’s your MO? Try it again & you’ll get a hearse, G
I don’t care your reality’s augmented, cuz you’ll need a different Metaverse me
Not bad, but light.
I been David Blaine. Make opps disappear as soon as I spray
But I can show you a magic trick too.. when I turn into your driveway
Wasnt big on this.
If I kill ya children, it’ll leave this bum in a crisis
So imma spot the kid.. then slide up on your son like I’m adjusting the brightness
This was nice.
Slashes, cuts, stab wounds.. that’s how imma kill this hater
Now your body’s repulsing.. as the doctors try to revive you with a defibrillator
Not bad.
He don’t get chicks. Your face is something they all have ran from
You could try speed dating.. you’ll see em leaving on site more than a Barcotic tantrum
Not feeling this.
Only one punch about your name, but it’s something they won’t exalt
They told me Kill Spree is hard to flip.. but that’s until the shotgun make him somersault
Decent jab.

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Kill Spree's Verse. Been in my inbox since Saturday.

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Originally Posted by Kill Spree

16




Letterman Aka Mac Avelli aka King Letterman aka the guy who got dq’d from four battles in one year for recycling

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Originally Posted by Amen aka Dre replying to Letterman

Finally made his way out of the recycle bin.

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Originally Posted by Letterman

Is that your way of welcoming me back? Lol

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Originally Posted by Amen

Yes lol.

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Gone @ this faggot…
Thinkin we throwing pedals upon arrival! I’ll throw lead into Lett dome
We won’t toss flowers @ your feet, but stomp out the ones on your headstone
Dooe. Strong jab to open.
Amen Get Stupid on Lett for years! But I’ve shined w/felon shit
I’ve deaded Mac, Dre…& his bars haven’t been hot since that guy was relevant
Light jab.
Your attitude pushing buttons. So when I drop? he gotta fall
That Tonal get ligaments shot off! this just another strong body on the wall!
Dope.
This scar clap, 1 shot ‘drive’ through this hard wack
Battling me’s your own asphalt you got left dead on the Tarmac
Good execution, old concept.
Had your bitch bent over, while you was hyping soft text
This Archive hit hard from the back…while you were downstairs biting concepts
Good shit.
I crack bones into rubble. League will be giving me thankings
For having your spine more out of place than Phal in his rankings
Not feeling this. Light jab.
Home invasion! Shoot ya fam so the itch to kill will feed my nerves in
You won’t live to Sumac, & I’d rather rub that on my eyes than read your verses
Not bad.
I orchestrate straight murder! I drive to put this weak in hell
Hit you w/the Caravelli till you don’t have lungs to sing for help
Creative. Solid jab.

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Not bad. Both of you had some really dope concepts. Wording & consustincy on display by two veterans. Hats off to both. I got Lett edging this 5-3.

Vote Letterman

1-1 Needs votes.




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Originally Posted by Letterman

Fake personals vs Phalanx?

To prove your skill, a web of lies is how your words entangled
Typical fat bitch online, cuz you can only show appeal by taking certain angles
Yup. Very good.
& your excuses were pitiful. It left you in a grave place
Texas chainsaw - After we witnessed that Kill Spree, we knew he’d try to Save Face
Nice again. The nameflip works well and how you tied it to the personal made it come off even better
That’s your MO? Try it again & you’ll get a hearse, G
I don’t care your reality’s augmented, cuz you’ll need a different Metaverse me
Solid. The augmented reality wp tied to the personal is great. I don't love "need a different metaverse me" as either a wp or a punch so much, I woulda found a different flip... but overall still solid
I been David Blaine. Make opps disappear as soon as I spray
But I can show you a magic trick too.. when I turn into your driveway
The wp idea is cool but the execution didn't get it off the ground. Not punchy enough
If I kill ya children, it’ll leave this bum in a crisis
So imma spot the kid.. then slide up on your son like I’m adjusting the brightness
Cool, not bad
Slashes, cuts, stab wounds.. that’s how imma kill this hater
Now your body’s repulsing.. as the doctors try to revive you with a defibrillator
Alright.
He don’t get chicks. Your face is something they all have ran from
You could try speed dating.. you’ll see em leaving on site more than a Barcotic tantrum
Site/sight is obviously old, it's a relevant current event flip but there wasn't really enough else in terms of either punch or wordplay for me to really like it.
Only one punch about your name, but it’s something they won’t exalt
They told me Kill Spree is hard to flip.. but that’s until the shotgun make him somersault
Nah I've seen that 'flip' concept done here in this league recently

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Originally Posted by Kill Spree

Thinkin we throwing pedals upon arrival! I’ll throw lead into Lett dome
We won’t toss flowers @ your feet, but stomp out the ones on your headstone
Cool. Creative enough and with personal tie-ins, it works as a direct bar
Amen Get Stupid on Lett for years! But I’ve shined w/felon shit
I’ve deaded Mac, Dre…& his bars haven’t been hot since that guy was relevant
Dre = Amen? If so, bar is cool. If not idg it
Your attitude pushing buttons. So when I drop? he gotta fall
That Tonal get ligaments shot off! this just another strong body on the wall!
Had to google but it was immediately clear when I did. This is good
This scar clap, 1 shot ‘drive’ through this hard wack
Battling me’s your own asphalt you got left dead on the Tarmac
Asphalt is an old wp. The np element I probably would have abandoned bc tar and tarmac are basically the same thing so it's hard to really do anything with it
Had your bitch bent over, while you was hyping soft text
This Archive hit hard from the back…while you were downstairs biting concepts
Haven't seen archive/arc I've wp, that was cool. I think you should have tied this to his recycling rather than calling him a biter - which I assume isn't true
I crack bones into rubble. League will be giving me thankings
For having your spine more out of place than Phal in his rankings
OK. Simple current event flip
Home invasion! Shoot ya fam so the itch to kill will feed my nerves in
You won’t live to Sumac, & I’d rather rub that on my eyes than read your verses
Good. Second line well worded for both punch and wp
I orchestrate straight murder! I drive to put this weak in hell
Hit you w/the Caravelli till you don’t have lungs to sing for help
Alright

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This is hard to call. Basically comes down to whether you preferred the verse that contained the best couple of bars or the verse that was more consistent. Letterman's first two bars and even the third are strong personal punches with excellent execution. I read those and thought this is game over for Spree... but unfortunately the verse didn't keep that quality at all. Spree had Tonal and Sumac which were good but even so I'd probably put them behind all of Letter's first three bars. But that aside Spree was way more consistent - letterman had more misses. I'm really not sure which verse I enjoyed more overall. Guess I'll have to resort to scoring each bar outta 5

Letter:
5
5
4
2
3
2
2
2
Total: 25

Spree:
3
2
4
2
3
2
4
3
Total: 23


So, V/ Letterman bc the tournament needs votes and has to move on, but really I don't feel strongly either way on this one. Thanks to both for the read, both had good bars.

Letterman had

Certain angles
Save face
Metaverse
Slide up / brightness

Vs

Kill Spree had

Opener
Tonal
Archive
Sumac

It's fucking close. I think I've got kill spree. Hard to call and almost a toss up but someone has to win

v/kill spree

To prove your skill, a web of lies is how your words entangled
Typical fat bitch online, cuz you can only show appeal by taking certain angles
If I kill ya children, it’ll leave this bum in a crisis
So imma spot the kid.. then slide up on your son like I’m adjusting the brightness
Only one punch about your name, but it’s something they won’t exalt
They told me Kill Spree is hard to flip.. but that’s until the shotgun make him somersault

vs.

Gone @ this faggot…
Thinkin we throwing pedals upon arrival! I’ll throw lead into Lett dome
We won’t toss flowers @ your feet, but stomp out the ones on your headstone
i had to stop here for a sec.. this was smoooth
Your attitude pushing buttons. So when I drop? he gotta fall
That Tonal get ligaments shot off! this just another strong body on the wall!
Had your bitch bent over, while you was hyping soft text
This Archive hit hard from the back…while you were downstairs biting concepts
lmaoo


this was a dope match up.. good to see letterman back again writing & comin in with a decent verse, there were some played concepts on both sides of the battle and were pretty equal on hits except for the fact that spree had some damn good stand outs there.. props for that, a really harsh verse. v/spree

Letterman had a cool verse with punches that hit a lil harder than sprees but fell off at the end. While Kill had some original punches and was a tad more consistent.


Vote - KS

Letter: Chainsaw, metaverse, repulse,
Liked the opener personal but seen that in url battles before
Slide on son was ok..

KS: Opener, Tonal, Archive,
Sumac was alright

Coin toss.
Edit: since I have to pick a winner I'm going w/ Letterman. I thought overall his verse appealed more to me. I felt it over Kill's wordplay. Also, the non quotes were better imo.

V Lett

Letterman
Opener and save face were dope.
Didnt like metaverse as much
Drive way was a flip on an old dad joke
Brightness was ok, didnt like the sun/son
Repluse was dope, barc was ok didnt like site/sight
Seen the name flip/somersault recently
I think domeone said it to.me.

Kill Spree
Opener was dece, had yo google Macdre was ok.
Dont get tonal, asphalt is old
Archive is strange wording to me, ok i guess
Phal bar wasnt hard, sumac was ok coulda been good
Not feeling the closer.

V=Letterman smooth wording and setups.
I liked alot of KS concepts just lacked a little execution for me. Good battle to both though

Letterman had a cool verse with punches that hit a lil harder than sprees but fell off at the end.

To prove your skill, a web of lies is how your words entangled
Typical fat bitch online, cuz you can only show appeal by taking certain angles
Decent
& your excuses were pitiful. It left you in a grave place
Texas chainsaw - After we witnessed that Kill Spree, we knew he’d try to Save Face
Not technically sound but the concept is dope
That’s your MO? Try it again & you’ll get a hearse, G
I don’t care your reality’s augmented, cuz you’ll need a different Metaverse me
Nope
I been David Blaine. Make opps disappear as soon as I spray
But I can show you a magic trick too.. when I turn into your driveway
Fire
If I kill ya children, it’ll leave this bum in a crisis
So imma spot the kid.. then slide up on your son like I’m adjusting the brightness
Ok
Slashes, cuts, stab wounds.. that’s how imma kill this hater
Now your body’s repulsing.. as the doctors try to revive you with a defibrillator
Decent
He don’t get chicks. Your face is something they all have ran from
You could try speed dating.. you’ll see em leaving on site more than a Barcotic tantrum
Too easy. Also corny
Only one punch about your name, but it’s something they won’t exalt
They told me Kill Spree is hard to flip.. but that’s until the shotgun make him somersault
Nah, filler for sure

1 banger
4 other hits

Vs.

Thinkin we throwing pedals upon arrival! I’ll throw lead into Lett dome
We won’t toss flowers @ your feet, but stomp out the ones on your headstone
Decent
Amen Get Stupid on Lett for years! But I’ve shined w/felon shit
I’ve deaded Mac, Dre…& his bars haven’t been hot since that guy was relevant
So ur talking to amen here to make the play work? Ehhh, good effort but no
Your attitude pushing buttons. So when I drop? he gotta fall
That Tonal get ligaments shot off! this just another strong body on the wall!
Nope
This scar clap, 1 shot ‘drive’ through this hard wack
Battling me’s your own asphalt you got left dead on the Tarmac
Ass fault is old old. Tarmac nameplay been done multiple x and i think i was the first. Putting them together isn't a strong enough flip
Had your bitch bent over, while you was hyping soft text
This Archive hit hard from the back…while you were downstairs biting concepts
Okay
I crack bones into rubble. League will be giving me thankings
For having your spine more out of place than Phal in his rankings
Dece
Home invasion! Shoot ya fam so the itch to kill will feed my nerves in
You won’t live to Sumac, & I’d rather rub that on my eyes than read your verses
Okay
I orchestrate straight murder! I drive to put this weak in hell
Hit you w/the Caravelli till you don’t have lungs to sing for help
Nah, this was poorly put together as well as corny

4 hits
No standouts

Vote goes to Letterman in a close one

Let wins