Aight man u spit first try to keep it like 10 to 15 lines and no crew votes, good luck
~DiRe_1
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Aight man u spit first try to keep it like 10 to 15 lines and no crew votes, good luck
~DiRe_1
i dont got no crew....ill drop in 2 seconds
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aight good cuz i hate fucking prewriters who take all fucking nite to write shit down, again good luck
~DiRe_1
yo dire 1 sound like an over used hear product for men/
ill give you my verse for keeps write it down...i provide the pen/
its alright im white and im cheezy, they call me mac and cheese/
in a short verse battle dire 1 is one his knees/
look man you embarresed a preppy boy accualy shows/
check the stain in the carpet his familys vacumes but he still blows/
first battle posted to this place and my lyrical sword lacerate you/
your verse couldnt beat me if posted this old or new/
your rhymes style suck but you postin looking for noobs/
minimize his window hes searchin gay.com for anal lubes/
its week im tired and i got blond hair im a prick/
you thought u had 2 pubes til one pissed on you...that yo dick/
its short, stumpy and ur lover made it brown/
im done with this clown....look your smile flipped upside down/
lol shit man i blow...its aiight tho i get bak on my feet im young white and new to this shit,,,,,,hundred post bll shit..haha
as you know we wont get no votes on this thread
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aight here it goes
im the arsonist that starts every fire, im the fucking compulsive lair, i am the one that they call dire/1
without even breathing, ill leave u seething,now u grieving, u scared now thinkin bout leavin/2
ur lyrics are no opposition, destroying u now thats my mission,exploding upon u like nuclear fission/ 3
asking urself y u choose to battle me, an up and coming mc, while u just another wannabe/4
attacking my god damn name, u said im gay when ur really the flame, 1000 bonez been poked up in u and came/5
the only thing i blow is ur mind, cant stop this shit now cuz im on the grind, u just lost one now and fall behind/6
the terror i inflict, is something u cant began to depict,haha and u thought i was someone u could outwit/7
u no ur wrong now, wishing u could spit if only u knew how, hold this .380 to ur fucking head and POW/8
ur finished its the end, no longer can u fabricate or pretend, or even begin to defend/9
this shit tht u call ur style, dont even spit its so vile, im srry i probably gonna make u fall into denial/10
from the truth, im the ill type acting uncouth, and as i murder u lyrically i use it as proof/11
that im not a fake, standing in my way its ur life i take, starting from the beginnig this is something i gotta make/12
now tht i know my lifes role,as i go for my goal,the motherfucking pressure is beginnig to take its toll/13
so on u i release my anger and pain, something so overwhelming and insane, tht there is nothin left for me to gain/14
as noone can stop me from sucess, dont even second guess, cuz motherfucker i am the best/ 15
and u think u was better or my equal, bitch its over there aint gonna be no sequal
aight ur shit was pretty fat man
if u aint got a crew u and me should form one
or u could join my existing one
well try to get some motherfucking votes up in here
good game man
peace
~DiRe_1
tight man dayam votes will prolly neva come.............................................. ......................
dude i would vote but i can't both was tight but dire1 came a little harder because he used fuller lines. when ever yal'll get enough posts in ya'll please vote on it
yo bonez man consider the offer for the crew, your shit was pretty tight, u got some skill
uppin for votes ppl
yo dude hot me up on aol....bonez1000 we talk or whatever.......................................... .........................................
i know ya'll ain't got enough posts to vote but if ya'll would. do like i do and just explain in writeing who was better in my battles. as soon as i get enough posts i will vote on ya'll battles. and please do the same. hit me back
aight bonez ill hit u up on aim tomorrow sometime, tonite im out....
eclipse ill go read tht shit now if u post a link
peace out ~DiRe_1
upping for votes one last time
aight peace out good nite
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~DiRe_1
dire came better........he was aot more experianced if you kno what a mean tight battle though just keep practisin no other wya to elevate
vote = dire
yeah cant sleep lol
uppin again
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~DiRe_1
one more thing ur input is appreciated but so is ur pole vote ppl
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~DiRe_1
uppin for pole votes
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pole vote plz it takes like 5 min to vote
Dire 1 got this one, he had good multies and stuff all in all it was a pretty weak battle though oh well yall got potential so just elevate
vote=DiRe_1
hey thanx for the vote man
the rest of u mothafuckas need to step it up and drop by and pole vote to man
thanx
YO GO HIT MY BATTLE AND MAKE A HONEST POLL VOTE AND I'LL HIT YOURS AND MAKE A HONEST VOTE .....THATS AH DEAL.....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=50356
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as soon as i get a 100 posts i will
but vote here and now ill go give urs an honest assessment
and vote on all urs once i get 100 posts
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uppin for some pole votes
come on peeps with 100 plus votes
do it so i can stop bitchin...
~DiRe
yeah uppin for the fuckin votes again
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~DiRe
yppin for votes ppl pole votes plz
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~DiRe_1
Dire got this no doubt, the other dude was too simplistic. Dire sounds like he is actually spittin it straight off a mic, the other cat just sounds like he is just typing words that rhyme in short bars.
thanx for the vote
aight just a few more pole votes people and
ill leave u alone
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~DiRe_1
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ight peace love
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~DiRe_1
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~DiRe_1
uppin again lets just finish this shit ppl, in the old system i wouldnt have had to fucking go through this shit
~DiRe_1
uuuuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnn nnnnn
for the votes ppl
keep 'em comin thanx
~DiRe_1
heheh although that pube line from Bonez was funny as fuck i think dire came out with a bit better wordplay. Dire skimmed this one just. But good from both new battlers.
VOTE => Dire_1 <=
now can ppl pleaz check this battle out and pleaz poll vote on whoever u think won?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...549#post465549
id pole vot but cant srry, thanx for the vote keepin this shit up one more vote..........
~DiRe_1
aight my vote is gonna have to go to dire simply because of lines 4 and 5 good drop from the both of you elevations is needed between the both of you obviously and if you have a problem with my opinion id love to show you why but overall good drops from both -1-